考研英语（写作）模拟试卷34

考研英语（写作）模拟试卷34

一、大作文(本题共5题，每题7.0分，共5分。)

1、SuccessandPersistenceWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.In

youressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,

and3)giveyourcomments,距离成功就差那么一点点

标准答案:Inthepicture,therearetwominers.Theoneonthetopisdigginghisway

intoaminefullofdiamonds;theoneatthebottomisactuallygivinguphisendeavor,but

justonestepawayfromthetreasure.Themessageimpliedinthispictureisaboutthe

secrettosuccess,whichispersistence.Hadthemineratthebottompersistedinhis

effortsalittlebitlonger,hewouldhavebeenabletoclaimtheenormouswealth.Inmy

opinion,perseveranceisindeedaprovenwaytosuccess.Butit'sapitythatwealways

easilygetfrustratedordesperatehalfwaybecauseofdifficultiesandsetbacksalongthe

way.Andweoftenabandonourgoalsprematurely,withoutdoingourbest.If,however,

westicktoourgoals,successisactuallynotveryfaraway.Forexample,J.K.Rowling

wasimpoverishedwhenshewascomposingHarryPotter.Shedidnotgiveup.Instead,

sheputallherenergyintotheonlythingsheloved-writing.Herpersistencenow

rewardsherwithfameandwealth.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Ithinkwemust

persistinoureffortsifwewanttobesuccessful.

知识点解析：这幅图片是一组对比图，上下分别是两个矿工。一个正在往钻石矿

里面挖，另一个却离成功只差一点点就放弃了。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，

全文可以安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：向读者传递“成功之道贵

在坚持”的道理。第二段提出个人看法：坚持是成功之道。举罗琳的例子，阐述定

下目标然后为之不懈奋斗的重要性。第三段总结全文。

2、BeTolerantofYourselfButStrictwithOthers?Writeanessayof160-200words

basedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)

explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.

示准答案：Therearetwocatsinthepictureandtheyresembleeachotherexceptthe

expression:theleftoneopensitseyeswithnofocuswhenlookingatitsownweakpoints;

whiletherightoneopensitseyeswidewithfiillattentionwhenlookingatothers'

shortcomings.Withthesharpcontrast,thepictureintendstoconveyameaningful

messagetoitsreaders:someofusaretolerantofourownfaults,butintolerantofthoseof

others.Thisiswellrepresentedbythetwodifferentexpressionsofthecatsaccordingly.

Actually,suchadouble-standardmindsetisnotuncommonamongus.Somepeoplejust

paylittleattentiontotheirownmistakes,buttheywouldcriticizeothers'ruthlessly.This

attitudeisnothelpful,Ithink,toimproveourselvesortoforgeasolidrelationshipwith

peoplearoundus.Ryturningablindeyetooiirowndisadvantages,welosethe

opportunitytobecomeabetterperson.Besides,theunfairdouble-standardtreatment

wouldangerourfriendsandcolleagues,whomightchoosetokeepadistancefromus.

Therefore,Ithinkitiswiseforustofaceuptoourownweaknessesandtreatothers

fairly.

知识点解析：这幅图片对比了两只猫在看待自己的缺点和别人的缺点时的不同反

应，旨在指出“宽于律己，严于待人”这种不良现象，根据这一思路，并按照题目要

求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：引起读者对“宽于

律己，严于待人”现象的注意。第二段讨论“宽于律己，严于待人''带来的两个不好

后果。其一，错失让自己不断进步的机会。其二，“双重标准”待人不公，会使朋友

和同事对我们疏远。笫三段提出建议。

3、LefsBeReadytoHelpOthers!Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthe

drawing.Inyouressay,youshouldI)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainits

intendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,ayoungmanissupportinganelderlyman,whousesa

walkingstick,withhishands.Facedwiththehelpoftheyoungman,theelderlyman

wearsasmilewithsatisfactiononhisface.Incorrespondencetothetwomen,thesun

showsaheart-shapedappearanceandisshininginallitssplendidbeauty.Itisclearthat

thepicturewantstosenditsreadersamessage:weshouldgiveahelpinghandtothosein

needandspreadthewarmthinsociety.Thisisaverybeneficialactthatwillnarrowthe

distancebetweeneachotherandmaketheworldfulloflove.Inmyopinion,whatthe

pictureconveysisparticularlymeaningfulinanincreasinglymaterialisticworld,where

interpersonalrelationshipsaretroubledbydoubtsandmistrust.Ifweareabletorestore

theconfidencebetweeneachotherbyhelpingothersout,Ithinkthesocietywelivein

willbefullofpositiveenergy,andwewillbehappierandmoresatisfied.Inconclusion,

itisadvisableforustobereadytohelpothers.Thiswouldmakeyouandthepersonyou

helphappier!

知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了年轻人帮助老年人的情况，传达了一种助人为乐的

精神。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段描绘图

片，并指出图片所传达的内在含义。第二段发表个人看法，指出助人为乐在现代

社会的作用。第三段作总结：助人为乐更快乐。

4、HowtoMeasureanExcellentPerson?Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthe

drawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly.2)explainits

intendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments./

标准答案：Inthepicture,amanhaspassedalotoftests:politicalqualities,social

morality,workethics,familyvirtuesandindividualvirtues.Heisproudlyholdingapiece

ofpaperinhand,whichsays:"Oftalentandvirtue,virtuecomesfirst1*.Thispicture

intendstotellitsreadersthatvirtuesaremoreimportantthanskillsortalentsone

possesses.AsfarasIamconcerned,virtuesmeanmoretomethantalents.First,talented

peoplewithoutmoralintegrityareactuallydangerous.Forinstance,somehackers,albeit

withexcellentcomputerskills,shownoconcernforotherpeopleandthesocialorder.

TheybecomeaconstantthreattotheInternetusersandoftendisrupttheorderlyonline

community.Second,virtuouspeoplearcthemostvaluableassetsinoursociety.They

willapplytheirtalentstomakecontributiontothesociety,benefitingeveryonearound

them.Inshort,oneshouldtryhardtobecomeoutstandinginbothtalentandvirtue.

However,forthesakeofcommongood,weshouldrememberthatvirtuecomesfirst.

知识点解析：这幅图画了一名男士通过了各种各样的考试，是名副其实的人才。

从图中的文字看出，该图强调人才应该“以德为先”，德行比才干更重要。根据这一

思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下：第一段捕绘图片，指出图片的意

图：人才应该是既有才华，又有美德，但是两者相比之下，应“以德为先”。第二

段提出个人看法：品德比才干更重要。其一，有才无德的人实际上很危险，以黑客

为例加以说明。其二，有道德的人能够运用自己的才干为社会做贡献。第三段总

结全文：我们都应努力成为德才兼备的人，但应时刻谨记以德为先。

5、Dad,GiveMeMoneyOnceMoreWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthe

drawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainits

intendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.

标准答案：Inthepicture,akidwantstogetsomemoneyfromhisdepartedfather,sohe

istryingtoputhishandintothepocketofhisdeceasedfather'sportrait.Theseemingly

absurdpictureimpliesthatsomekidsareaccustomedtoaskingtheirparentsformoney

andnotabletosupportthemselves.Asthepictureshows,parentscouldnotserveasa

financialsourcefbrtheentiretyofchildren'slife.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldtrain

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