高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练05（解析版）

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练05一、紧张缓解类（动作+心理）•紧张表现：Sb.’shands+动作（shook/fumbled）+assb.+具体行为（reachedfor/unfolded）+物品，throatgoingdry•缓解转折：Until+触发事件（sb.spoke/asoundcame），andawaveof+舒缓情绪（calmrelief）+动作（washed/settled）+oversb.1.原句：______________________________________________,throatgoingdryatthethoughtofhowmuchthistestmattered.翻译：她伸手去拿试卷时，双手在发抖；一想到这场考试有多重要，她的喉咙就发紧。2.原句：Untilherdeskmatewhispered“You’vegotthis”，and_____________________________________________________________________________________翻译：直到同桌轻声说“你可以的”，一股平静的感觉涌上心头，让她稳稳地握住了笔。答案：1.Herhandsshookasshereachedfortheexampaper2.awaveofcalmwashedoverher,helpinghergripherpensteadily.段落一（紧张表现+缓解转折）Lunastoodbackstage,herfingerstwistingtheedgeofherdancecostume.Tonightwasherfirstsoloperformance,andeverytimeshethoughtaboutsteppingontothestage,herheartraced.Herhandsshookasshereachedforthewaterbottleonthetable,(1)________________________________________________________(一想到成百上千双眼睛盯着自己，她的喉咙就发紧).Shetookatinysip,butherhandsstilltrembled—whatifsheforgotthesteps?(2)___________________________________________________________(直到舞蹈老师走过来，把温暖的手放在她肩上),andsaid,“I’veseenyoupracticeahundredtimes—you’reready.”(3)______________________________________________________________(一股平静的感觉涌上心头，让她稳稳地握住了水瓶).Shetookadeepbreath,feelingthetensioninhershouldersmeltawayasthestagelightsflickeredtosignalherturn.答案：(1)throatgoingdryatthethoughtofhundredsofeyeswatchingher(2)Untilherdanceteacherwalkedover,placingawarmhandonhershoulder(3)Awaveofcalmwashedoverher,helpinghergripthebottlesteadily段落二（紧张表现+缓解转折）Tomsatinthewaitingroomofthemusiccompetition,hisguitarcaserestingonhislap.He’dpracticedthemelodyformonths,butnowthathisnamewasabouttobecalled,hismindwentblank.Hishandsshookasheunfoldedthesheetmusiche’dbroughtforalast-minutereview,(1)__________________________________________(一想到要在评委面前演奏，他的喉咙就发紧).Hestaredatthenotes,buttheyjustlookedlikemessylines—hadhereallymemorizedallofthem?(2)__________________________________(直到坐在旁边的小女孩递给他一根棒棒糖),saying,“Mymomsayscandymakesnervesgoaway.”(3)_________________________________________________________________________(一股平静的感觉涌上心头，让他稳稳地握住了乐谱).Hesmiled,takingthelollipop,andsuddenlythenotesstartedtomakesenseagain—heknewthissong,andhecouldplayit.答案：(1)throatgoingdryatthethoughtofplayinginfrontofthejudges(2)Untilalittlegirlsittingnexttohimhandedhimalollipop(3)Awaveofcalmwashedoverhim,helpinghimgripthesheetmusicsteadily二、温暖传递类（动作+环境）•传递动作：Sb.+轻柔动作（handed/wrapped）+物品（ablanket/acup）+tosb.else，saying+简短话语•环境烘托：With+环境细节（thefirecrackling/thesunshining），thewarmthof+物品/行为+动作（spread/seeped）+intosb.’sbones1.原句：_________________________________________________,saying“Don’tstayouttoolong—yourhandsarefreezing.”翻译：妈妈把一条厚毯子裹在她肩上，说“别在外面待太久，你的手都冻僵了”。2.原句：Withthefirecracklinginthefireplace,_________________________________________,chasingawaythewinterchill.翻译：壁炉里的火噼啪作响，毯子的暖意渗进她的骨子里，驱散了冬日的寒冷。答案：1.Momwrappedathickblanketaroundhershoulders2.thewarmthoftheblanketseepedintoherbones段落一（传递动作+环境烘托）Lilyhuddledbythewindow,watchingthesnowfalloutside—herfingerswereredfrompressingagainstthecoldglass,andshe’dforgottentograbasweaterbeforecomingdownstairs.Justthen,hergrandmawalkedover,holdingaknittedscarfinherhands.(1)____________________________________________(奶奶把围巾绕在莉莉脖子上),tuckingtheendsgentlyunderherchin,saying“Thiswasyourmom’swhenshewasyourage—it’llkeepyouextrawarm.”Withthesnowflakesdancingoutsideandthehotcocoagrandmahadsetonthewindowsillsteaming,(2)__________________________________(围巾的暖意渗进莉莉的骨子里),chasingawaythecoldthathadclungtohershoulders.Lilyleanedagainsthergrandma’sside,smilingasshebreathedinthescarf’ssoft,woollyscent.答案：(1)GrandmawrappedthescarfaroundLily’sneck(2)thewarmthofthescarfseepedintoherbones段落二（传递动作+环境烘托）Afterwaitingforthebusinthewindfor20minutes,Tom’shandsweresocoldhecouldbarelyflexhisfingers.Herubbedthemtogether,(1)_____________________________________________________(往掌心哈着热气),whentheoldladynexttohimpulledapairofthickglovesfromherbag.(2)______________________________________________________(她把手套递给汤姆，轻轻拍了拍他的胳膊),saying“Takethese—myhandsdon’tgetcoldeasily,andyoulooklikeyouneedthemmore.”Withthebusfinallyroundingthecornerandtheafternoonsunpeekingthroughtheclouds,(3)__________________________________(手套的暖意渗进汤姆的骨子里),makinghisfingerstingleasfeelingcameback.Hethankedtheladyrepeatedly,andwhenheputonthegloves,hefeltnotjustphysicalwarmth,(4)______________________________________________________________________(还有一份温柔的善意，让这段寒冷的等待也变得值得).答案：(1)blowingwarmaironhispalms(2)ShehandedtheglovestoTom,pattinghisarmlightly(3)thewarmthoftheglovesspreadintoTom’sbones(4)butasoftkindnessthatmadethecoldwaitfeelworthit三、失落振作类（心理+动作）•失落状态：Sb.+消极动作（slumped/sat），staringat+触发物（thebrokentoy/theemptyseat），eyescloudedwith+情绪（sadness/disappointment）•振作契机：Then+触发事件（sb.appeared/somethingcaughtsb.’seye），andasparkof+积极情绪（determination/hope）+动作（lit/sprang）+insb.’schest1.原句：Heslumpedonthebench,___________________________________________________________________________—he’dpracticedsohardforthegame.翻译：他瘫坐在长椅上，盯着坏掉的篮球框，眼里满是失望——为了这场比赛，他已经练了好久。2.原句：Thenhiscoachwalkedoverwithanewball,and__________________________________________________________________________________翻译：这时教练拿着一个新球走过来，他心中燃起一丝决心，站起身准备再试一次。答案：1.staringatthebrokenbasketballhoop,eyescloudedwithdisappointment2.asparkofdeterminationlitinhischest,makinghimstanduptotryagain.段落一（失落状态+振作契机）Lilysatonthestepsoftheartstudio,hercrumpledpaintinginhand.Thecontestjudgeshadsaidherwork“lackedheart,”andshe’drunoutbeforehearingtherest.(1)___________________________________________________________(她盯着那幅画得模糊的家乡湖泊水彩画，眼里满是悲伤)—she’dwokenupat5a.m.everyweekendforamonthtopaintthatscene,tryingtocapturethewaythesunriseturnedthewaterpink.Hershouldersdrooped,andshewasabouttocrumplethepaintingfurtherwhen(2)__________________________________(身后传来一个温柔的声音).“ThatskylooksjustliketheoneIsawlastsummerinyourtown,”saidMs.Hale,herartteacher,bendingdowntolookatthepaper.ThenMs.Halepointedtoasmalldetail—anolddockLilyhadadded—and(3)_____________________________________________(她心中燃起一丝决心，身子一下子坐直了),suddenlyeagertofixthepaintinginsteadofgivingup.答案：(1)Shestaredatthesmudgedwatercolorofherhometown’slake,eyescloudedwithsadness(2)asoftvoicespokebehindher(3)asparkofdeterminationlitinherchest,makinghersitupstraight段落二（失落状态+振作契机）Tomslumpedagainstthebookstorewall,hishandsempty.He’dsavedupforweekstobuythelatestsciencefictionnovel,(1)__________________________________________(结果发现最后一本在他到店前十分钟就卖完了).Hestaredattheemptyshelfwherethebookshouldhavebeen,(2)__________________________________(眼里满是失望)—he’dplannedtoreaditovertheweekend,sharinghisfavoritepartswithhislittlesisterlater.Hekickedasmallstoneontheground,(3)__________________________________________(觉得所有的等待都白费了).Thenthebookstoreclerkwalkedout,holdingawrappedbookandwavingtohim.“Acustomerreservedthisbutjustcalledtocancel—saidakidwho’sbeenwaitingdeservesitmore,”theclerksaid,handingittoTom.(4)______________________________________________________(他心中燃起一丝希望，咧嘴笑了起来，把书紧紧抱在胸前),alreadyimagininghowexcitedhissisterwouldbe.答案：(1)onlytofindthelastcopyhadbeensoldtenminutesbeforehearrived(2)eyescloudedwithdisappointment(3)feelinglikeallhiswaitinghadbeenfornothing(4)Asparkofhopespranginhischest,makinghimgrinwidelyasheclutchedthebooktohischest四、陌生熟悉类（感官+心理）•陌生感：Sb.+观察动作（lookedaround/staredat）+the陌生场景（newclassroom/strangestreet），feelinglike+比喻（anoutsider/alostbird）•熟悉触发：Until+感官刺激（ascenthitsb.’snose/avoicereachedsb.’sears），andarushof+情绪（recognition/comfort）+动作（flooded/washed）+oversb.1.原句：Shelookedaroundthenewschoolcafeteria,________________________________________________________________翻译：她环顾新学校的食堂，看着其他人都和朋友聊天，感觉自己像个局外人。2.原句：Untilthescentofvanillacookieshithernose—justlikehermombaked—and_________________________________________________________________________________翻译：直到香草饼干的香味飘进她的鼻子——和妈妈烤的味道一模一样——一股安心的感觉涌上心头，让她稍微放松了些。答案：1.feelinglikeanoutsideraseveryoneelsechattedwiththeirfriends.2.arushofcomfortwashedoverher,makingherrelaxalittle.段落一（陌生感+熟悉触发）Lunadraggedhersuitcasealongthenarrowstreetofthesmalltown,hereyesdartingfromoneunfamiliarstorefronttothenext.She’dmovedherewithherfamilyjustlastweek,andeverythingstillfeltforeign—fromthewaylocalsgreetedeachotherwithslowsmilestotheold-fashionedlamppostsliningtheroad.Shelookedaroundthequietsquare,(1)________________________________________(感觉自己像一只迷路的小鸟)asgroupsofkidslaughedandchasedeachothernearthefountain,noneoftheirfacesrecognizable.Hershouldersdroopedalittle,andshekickedasmallstone,wishingshecouldfindevenonethingthatfeltlikehome.(2)_____________________________________(直到口琴声传入耳中)—playingthesamefolksonghergrandpausedtohumeverynightbeforebed—and(3)_______________________________________________(一股安心的感觉涌上心头).Forasecond,thestrangetowndidn’tfeelsoscaryanymore.答案：(1)feelinglikealostbird(2)Untilthesoundofaharmonicareachedherears(3)arusho