新高考英语专题03亲情故事-专项突破“读后续写”

专题03高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—亲情故事亲情是世界上珍贵的情感之一，因为每个人表达方式不一样，所以亲情的外在表现形式也不一样，但是爱是一样的……01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It’shardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfatherstoplay—protector,provider—canmakethemseemimpenetrable(不可理解的).That’showitwaswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrantcommunity.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn’tgettoseehimloosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn’ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhenwewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythatway.BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesanddreams,lovesandheartbreaks—letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforustohandle.Ididn’twanttothreatentheintegrity(完整)ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedtoit,anditmademefeelsecure.Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadtochange.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathehadfacedthem,too.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlikeIhadlostmine.Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethekey.Anemailcanbecrafted(精心制作)slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortabledistanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He’dbeupinhisoffice—acomfortableplacefilledwithbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.I’dbeatmydeskinanapartment20minutesaway.SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhefeltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimself,somethingthatwouldgivememuch-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascannedthreedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reachedbackintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,longing,self-doubt,fearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.Iwasalsoimpressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedinthefaceofdifficulty.Para2:Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn’ttoolate.Icriedbecauseinthemidstofmyownstruggles,hisletterinstantlyputmeatease.AndIcriedbecauseintheend,itwassosimple:Ijusthadtohit“Send”.We’vesincehadmanyexchanges.Myproblemshaven’tbeenmagicallysolved,butgettingtoknowmydadbetter–andlearningtolovehimmore–hasmadethetoughstuffmoremanageableandlifesweeter.It’shardtotalktodadssometimes,butI’mgladthatIfoundawaytotalktomine.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的父亲是一个少言少语的人，作者习惯这样的父亲，也觉得这样很安全。但当作者的婚姻和职业受到打击时，他/她感到迷失了自我，想到父亲也可能曾经面临这样的问题，于是决定通过写邮件向他求助。【详解】1.段落续写①根据第一段首句内容“两周后，他的回信出现在我的邮箱里”可知，下文可描写父亲在信里真诚地分享了自己的经历，以及作者的感受。②根据第二段首句内容“我关了邮件开始哭起来”可知，下文可描写作者哭的原因，以及庆幸找到了和父亲进行交流的方式。2.续写线索：受到回信——父亲分享自己的经历——对父亲有了更多了解——哭起来——为什么哭——庆幸能和父亲交流3.词类激活行为类①思考：consider/think②提供：offer/supply/give/provide③解决：solve/settle情绪类①艰难的：hard/tough/difficult②感激的：grateful/thankful③高兴的：glad/delighted/pleased【点睛】[高分句型1]Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.（运用了状语从句的省略）[高分句型2]IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn’ttoolate.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句，和虚拟语气）02“HasPriyanotcomehomeasyet?”Suryaasked.Hehadjustreturnedfromwork.HewasacashierintheStateBankofHyderabad,whilehiswife,SharadaalabassistantinReddyCollegeforWomen.Theirdaughter,Priya,wasaClassXstudentinSaintAnne'sSchoolaroundsixkilometersaway.TherewasadirectbusfromPriya'sschool.“Sheshouldhavebeenhereby4.30.Itis5:30nowandshestillhasnotcome,"Sharadareplied.＂Yesterdaytooshewaslate.Infact,sincethelastfewweeksshehasbeencominghomelate."“Didyouaskher?”“Yes,Idid,lastweek.”“Whatdidshesay?”“Shenumbedsomethingaboutspendingtimewithherbestfriend,thenshekeptquiet.Youknowsheisnotveryforthcoming.Onedayshewouldbebecomeanengineerordoctor."PriyawastoappearfortheClassXexaminationinAprilthenextyear.ThiswasthemonthofJulyandherstudieshadstartedinrealearnest.MorningsixtoeightshewentforMathsandPhysicstuition,andintheeveningseventoeightforChemistry.Thenextday,SuryahappenedtodiscusPriya'sstrangebehaviourwithhiscolleague,Durga,whotoohadateenageddaughter.“Surya,youshouldnottakeitsolightly.Ihaveanidea.Mybrother,Ajay,worksinaDetectiveAgency.Iwilltellhim.Iamsurehewillagreetofollowher.SincePriyadoesnotknowhim,shewillnotgetsuspicious.”Suryakeptsilentforawhile,finallyagreed.OnWednesday,Suryagotacallintheoffice.“Hello!Surya?ThisisAjay?”“Yes,Ajay.Anynews?”“Plenty.CanyoucometoArtsCollegeat4.30intheevening?”“Why?”“Iwillexplainwhenwemeet.”Sharpat4.30,SuryaparkedhisscooterinfrontoftheArtsCollegeBuilding.Ajaywaswaitingforhim.“Comewithme,“hesaid.TheywentbehindthebuildingandtookapathwhichledtoasmallHanumanTemple.SuryahadbeentherewithPriyaacoupleoftimesandtheybothquitelikedtheserenityoftheplace.Whentheyreachedtheplace,Ajayaskedhimtoquietlylookfrombehindaboulder.1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.”Priyaansweredonthesofa.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised.HesawPriyasittinginthesmallcourtyardinfrontofthetemple.Therewasacanvasinfrontofherandshewasbusypainting.Afewpaintbottles,brushesanddrawingsheetswerelyingaround.Besideherwereseveralcanvases,Suryawasstruckbythebeauty,therawenergy,ofhisdaughter’sart.Thenheleft,determinednottodisturbher.ButwhydidshespendsomuchtimepaintingattheapproachoftheClassXexamination?SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethatevening.“Whyareyoulateagain?Spendingtimepainting?Whereareyourpaintings?”heaskeddirectly.“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.Priyaansweredonthesofa.“Idonotmindstruggling,evenstarvingtorealizemydream.Isitreallythatwrongtochaseone'sdream?”Struckbythechild'sdetermination,Suryawaslostinthought.TheyalwayswantedtheirdaughtertostudyPhysics,Chemistry,Maths,Biology,andbecomeanengineeroradoctor.Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbutengineeringormedicinecould.Maybeitwastimetochange.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Surya发现女儿Priya一直回家很晚，为了弄清楚女儿的这些奇怪行为，他的同事建议让自己的兄弟Ajay帮助他弄清楚，最后Ajay带着Surya来到了一所寺庙，发现女儿在画画。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当Surya看着，他感到很惊讶。”可知，第一段可描写Surya发现女儿在画画，画的很好，Surya没有打扰她，等到女儿回家，直接询问女儿的经过。②由第二段首句内容“‘我把我的画留在了寺庙里。我想成为一名画家。’Priya坐在沙发上回答道。”可知，第二段可描写Priya告诉Surya渴望实现自己成为画家的梦想，Surya陷入深思，他们总是想要让女儿学习物理，化学，数学等，想要让她成为医生或者工程师，现在Surya有了改变。2.续写线索：看到女儿画画——父亲被吸引——询问——女儿决心实现梦想——父亲反思——做出改变3.词汇激活行为类①.忙于做某事：bebusydoingsth./beoccupiedindoingsth.②.被……吸引：bestruckby/beattractedby③.下定决心做某事：determinedtodosth./makeupone’smindtodosth.情绪类好奇：wonder/becurious/befullofcuriosity【点睛】[高分句型1].SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethatevening.（运用了until引导时间状语从句）[高分句型2].Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbutengineeringormedicinecould.（运用了省略连接词的宾语从句）03AGIFTFORGRANDPASummervacationwascoming.JackandhisbrotherBerlinwerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofvisitingtheirgrandparentsagain.Thebigdaycameatlast.Afterthehappyfamilygotready,theysetoutforthegrandparents’eagerly.Ontheway,thebrotherswereexcitedlytalkingaboutthefuntheyhadwithgrandparents.Alittlebluehousewithatallwhitechimneyfinallyappeared.BehindthepropertywastheforestcarryingtheirgoodmemorieswithGrandpa.Theyarrivedatthedriveway,attheendofwhichGrandmawaswaitingforthemjoyfully.JackandBerlineachgaveGrandmaabighugandthenswepttothelivingroom,shoutingexcitedly“Grandpa,weareback!”Seeinghisgrandsons,Grandpawaswildwithjoyandtriedtogetupwithallhisstrengthfromthechairbutinvain.Ahelplessexpressionflashedonhisface.Grandmaexplainedthathishealthwasdecliningrapidlyandmaybecouldn’tstanduponhisownforever.ButGrandpadeclaredstubbornly(倔强地),“Ican!”Certainly,hewasstuckinhisboyishway.Mumandgrandparentswerehappytomeetagainafteralongtime.Theysattogetherandchattedaboutwhathappenedrecently.Thebrothersweresoonboredwithadultconversation,wentoutandwanderedintotheforest.Talltreesstretcheduptotheheavenswithlargebranchescrossingeachother,whileyoungonesrosestraightlikesoldiers.Grandpawasonceagreatexplorerfullofwisdom.Hecouldtellwherethebirdscamefromonlybytheircallsandsongs.Thetrees,birds,lizards,lotsofbugs...HowmanymerrymomentstheyspentwithGrandpainthekingdom!ButnowGrandpacouldn'tgetup.Thismadethemworried.“We’dthinkoutawaytocheerhimup.”Jacksaid.“Grandpaisabirdlover,andwecancatchhimabird.”Berlinsuggested.“Buthehatesbirdsbeingcaged!”Jackshookhishead.ThenabrightideacametoJack’smind.“Whynotmakeacane(拐杖)outofayoungtree!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea.Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.Jacksaid,“Whatkindoftreeshouldwepickforthewalkingstick?”Berlinthoughtforamomentandsaid,“Ithinkweshouldchooseastraighttree,sonoknotswillscratchgrandpa’shands.”Jacknoddedhisheadinagreement.Theyfoundastraighttreeandsettowork.Theycutthetreedown,andwithaknifetheytookthebarkoff.Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.Theythoughtgrandpawouldloveit.JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.Whengrandpatookthecane,hishandsshookwithjoy,thinking,“Thisismadebymygrandsonsthemselves.Howpreciousitis!”Jacksaid,“Grandpa,wehopethiscanewillhelpyoustandupandcomewithustoexplorethewoods.”Grandpasmiledanddecidedtogiveitatrysoasnottomakehisgrandchildrendisappointed.Heheldthecaneinhisrighthandandthearmofhischairinhislefthand.Hestoodupwithstrengthonhislegs.Everyonewassurprisedandexcitedtoseegrandpastandup.Atthatmoment,Jacknoticedatearcomingfromthecornerofhisgrandfather’seye.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了暑假即将来临，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他们却发现爷爷站不起来了，兄弟俩走进了森林，杰克突然想到了一个好主意，就是给爷爷做一根手杖。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“柏林认为这是个好主意。”可知，第一段可描写兄弟俩怎么做手杖。②由第二段首句内容“杰克和伯林把手杖递给爷爷。”可知，第二段可描写爷爷拿到手杖后的反应。2.续写线索：拿工具——做手杖——爷爷尝试站起来——众人反应3.词汇激活行为类①拿：get/fetch②砍下：cutdown/chopdown③站起来：standup/risetoone’sfeet情绪类①高兴：joy/delight②兴奋的：excited/thrilled【点睛】[高分句型1]Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.(由when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.(由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)04AvacationwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthehotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.Dadrecommendedbuyinganewone,whileMominsistedonourgoingbacktofetchit,saying“Forgetfulpeoplelikememaylosethingsrepeatedly,soit’sunwisetogiveupthetent.”Finally,wegotbackthetentandhittheroadagain.IfMomhadn’tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Oneday,towardsevening,wefoundagreatcampingsiteatthefootofahighmountain.DavidandIhelpedDadputupthetent,andMomwasbusypreparingsupper.Whenthesettingsuncastanorangelightoverthemountains,thetentwassetupandthemealwasready.Sittingaroundthecampfire,wetalkedandlaughed.EverytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewouldspreadoverMom’sface.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者11岁的一次家庭旅行让作者了解了自己的母亲。在路上作者和弟弟一直担心遇到危险，而妈妈却坚持要在外面搭帐篷睡觉，最后他们搭好了帐篷，在外面度过了美好的一个假期。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我们想起了我们带来的新帐篷。”可知，第一段可描写他们回去取帐篷的经过。②由第二段首句内容“我们开车经过了几个州，沿途看到了许多美丽的景色。”可知，第二段可描写他们在户外搭帐篷做饭的事情。2.续写线索：想起带来的新帐篷——妈妈坚持回去取帐篷——看见美丽的风景——搭帐篷准备饭菜——作者感悟3.词汇激活行为类建议：recommend/suggest回去：goback/return发现：find/discover情绪类准备好的：ready/prepared令人愉快的：pleasant/pleasing【点睛】[高分句型1]Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthehotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]IfMomhadn’tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.(运用了虚拟语气)05Twomonthstosavemygirl’slifeAsmyfeetpoundedthepavement,sweatdrippeddownmyforeheadandback.“Justalittlebitfurther,”Itoldmyself,determinedtopushforward.ThoughI’dneverbeenmuchofarunner,Ihadacrucialmotivationtosavemylittlegirl,Bridie.BorninJanuary2017,shehadbeautifulbigblueeyes.Butshortlyafterherarrival,doctorspointedoutthatherheadwasmeasuringquitelarge.Withindays,shewasdiagnosedwithsagittalcraniosynostosis.Doctorsexplainedthatshe’dneedsurgery.Theyalsonoticedthatherlimbsandfingersweremeasuringquiteshort,soBridiewentthroughgenetictestingtofindoutwhy.Whentheresultscameback,mywifeandImetwiththespecialist.“BridiehasMainzer-Saldinosyndrome,”hesaid.Healsorevealedtherareconditionwouldcausereinal(视网膜的)degeneration,meaningshecouldgoblindanddevelopkidney(肾)disease.So,whenBridiefellillin2019withcommonflu,itcausedalosstoherlittlebody.Sadly,themedicationssheneededtohelpherrecoverweakenedherkidneysevenfurther.ByDecemberthatyear,herspecialistrevealedtheywereonlyfunctioningat30percent.“Ifitgetsanyworse,shewillneedtostartdialysis(透析),”headmitted,addingthatatransplantmightberequiredsoonerthanwefirstthought.Itbrokemyheart,andIknewIhadtostepuptohelpsavemygirl.SoIvolunteeredtogiveheroneofmykidneysrightaway.Afterundergoingmultipletests,Iwasdeclaredamatch.ButtherewerestillseveralbarriersIhadtoovercomebeforeIhadtheall-cleartodonate.“You’llhavetolose15kilosbeforeweconsideryoufittotransplant,”thespecialisttoldmeinJune.Hegavemetwomonthstogetintoshape.At96.5kilos,Iwasn’toverweight,butIneededtolowermyBMItobefitforthesurgery.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iwasdeterminedtodowhateverittooktosavemylittlegirl.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________InNovember,thebigdayfinallyarrived.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iwasdeterminedtodowhateverittooktosavemylittlegirl.Icutbackonbeerandpubmeals,suchasfriedchickenandchips,andstucktoeatinghealthieroptions,suchasleanmeatandvegetablesinstead.Ialsoinvestedinanewpairofjoggersandwentrunningeveryday.Incredibly,byAugust,Ihadmanagedtoloseweightandwasgiventheall-cleartogoahead.InNovember,thebigdayfinallyarrived.Wheeledintooperatingtheatrearound8am,mynerveswereverytense.WhenIcametoseveralhourslater,mywifewastherebymyside,smiling.Thankfully,Bridie’ssurgerywasalsobelievedtobeasuccess.Aftertwodays,Iwasfinallywellenoughtovisitmypreciousdaughter.Ifeltsogoodtoseeasmileonherface.Ourbravegirlhadmoreenergywitheachdaythatpassed.SeeingthesmileonourbeautifulBridie’sfacemakesitallworthwhile.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的女儿患有肾病，需要移植手术，作者自愿马上给她一个肾，但是必须在两个月之内减掉15公斤。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我下定决心要不惜一切代价救我的小女儿。”可知，第一段可描写作者如何努力减肥。②由第二段首句内容“11月，这个大日子终于到来了。”可知，第二段可描写做手术及手术的效果。2.续写线索：健康饮食——跑步——做手术——手术成功3.词汇激活行为类①减少：cutbackon/cutdownon②跑步：gorunning/gojogging③进手术室：wheelintooperatingtheatre/entertheoperatingroom④看望：visit/payavisitto情绪类①难以置信地：incredibly/unbelievably②感激地：thankfully/gratefully【点睛】[高分句型1]WhenIcametoseveralhourslater,mywifewastherebymyside,smiling.(由when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Ourbravegirlhadmoreenergywitheachdaythatpassed.(由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)06Itwassixo’clockwhenBreannaheardhermother’sphonereceiveatextmessageasit’satonthekitchenbench.“Mum,Ibetit’sDad!”Breannasaidandjumpedupfromthesofa,booksspillingoutinfrontofher.Shehadbeendecidingwhichstoryherdadwouldreadinoneofhisfunnyvoicesforthenight.Breanna’smumrubbedhertemples(太阳穴)andsighedsoftly.“Honey,wouldyoumindseeingifthat’sDaddy?I’vegotabadheadachebutIwanttostartcookingalovelymealforustoenjoytonight.”“Sure,mum,”Breannaskippedintothekitchentocheckthephone.Herdadhadbeenawayfortwowholenightsworkingonamalfunction(故障)athiscompany’swarehousethatwasatriskoftheft.Breannafeltsurehe’dbeenabletoactlikeasuperheroandsavetheday—butdidithavetotakesolong?Shepickedupthephoneandreadthemessage,“Justleavingnow—can’twaittoseeyouboth.”Breannaconfirmedexcitedly,“It’sfromDaddy!He’sonhiswayhome!”Hermothermanagedaweaksmileasherdaughterclappedherhandswithjoy.Ithadbeenfourmonthssinceshe’dlostherjobandwithonlyoneincometosupportthefamily.Herhusbandhadtakenonasmanyshiftsandextradutiesashecouldtomakeendsmeet.Timesweretoughandhewasworkinglonghours,butitmadethetimeBreannaspentwithherdaddyevenmorespecial.“Oh,that’swonderfulnews.Nowlet’sseewhatIcanfindtoeat,”hermotherrosepainfullyfromthesofaandadded.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Great!Mum’sgotabadheadachebutI’mgoingtohelphercookdinner.Seeyousoon!”Breannasentherdadaquickreply.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AnothermessagefromherfatherdrewBreanna’sattention.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Great!Mum’sgotabadheadachebutI’mgoingtohelphercookdinner.Seeyousoon!”Breannasendherdadaquickreply.AsBreannaopenedthedooroftherefrigerator,sheheardhermothersighagain.Theshelvesoftherefrigeratorhadbeenalmostemptyfortoolong.Hermothersaid,“Oh,Ithinkmaybewehavetomatoesandcarrotstonight,honey.Couldyougetthoseoutforme?”Whilehermotherpushedtwomoreheadachetabletsintoherhand,Breannastartedcuttingthecarrots,justthewayhermotherhadshownher.AnothermessagefromherfatherdrewBreanna’sattention.Shestaredatthenewmessage:Red,roundandsweet,SeedofloveandwhatIlovetoeat.Herdadlovedentertainingherwithriddlesandrhymes!Wasthisaboutdinner?Breannawentthroughallthefruitsshecouldthinkofthatwerered.Suddenly,Breannarememberedastoryherfathertoldheraboutafruitregardedasavegetable.Itusedtobecalledaloveappleandnowitiscalledtomato.Breannafeltverydelightedthatshegotherfather’srealmessage.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Breanna的爸爸外出加班赚钱，她的妈妈在家准备晚餐，而她又开始头疼了，Breanna的爸爸发来了短信说很快会回来，她很开心，妈妈痛苦地从沙发上站起来准备做晚餐。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容““太好了！妈妈头痛得厉害，但我要帮她做饭。再见！”布里安娜很快给她爸爸回了信。”可知，第一段可描写Breanna帮妈妈准备做晚饭的食材。②由第二段首句内容“她父亲的另一条信息引起了布里安娜的注意。”可知，第二段可描写Breanna的爸爸发来的是谜题，Breanna猜谜题。2.续写线索：打开冰箱——切胡萝卜——看到谜题——猜中谜题3.词汇激活行为类①打开：open/unfold②切：cut/chop③盯着：stareat/gazeat④得到：get/receive情绪类①叹气：sigh/suspire②高兴的：delighted/happy【点睛】[高分句型1]Whilehermotherpushedtwomoreheadachetabletsintoherhand,Breannastartedcuttingthecarrots,justthewayhermotherhadshownher.（由连接词while引导的时间状语从句和that引导的定语从句，省略了引导词that）[高分句型2]Breannawentthroughallthefruitsshecouldthinkofthatwerered.（由关系代词that引导的定语从句）专题03高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—亲情故事亲情是世界上珍贵的情感之一，因为每个人表达方式不一样，所以亲情的外在表现形式也不一样，但是爱是一样的……01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It’shardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfatherstoplay—protector,provider—canmakethemseemimpenetrable(不可理解的).That’showitwaswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrantcommunity.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn’tgettoseehimloosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn’ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhenwewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythatway.BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesanddreams,lovesandheartbreaks—letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforustohandle.Ididn’twanttothreatentheintegrity(完整)ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedtoit,anditmademefeelsecure.Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadtochange.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathehadfacedthem,too.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlikeIhadlostmine.Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethekey.Anemailcanbecrafted(精心制作)slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortabledistanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He’dbeupinhisoffice—acomfortableplacefilledwithbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.I’dbeatmydeskinanapartment20minutesaway.SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhefeltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimself,somethingthatwouldgivememuch-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1:Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascannedthreedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reachedbackintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,longing,self-doubt,fearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtohandlemyr