读后续写情绪表达万能句式课件-高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写之情绪描写技巧Waysofdescribingemotions描Seeingthemansheoncelovedsoruthlessly(无情),ZhenHuanrealizedthatshehadbeendeceived(欺骗).Shockedanddesperate(绝望的),sheexpressedherconfusion,wonderinghowtoacceptthetruth.Suddenly,ZhenHuanwasovercomebyafeelingofsadness.

She

wassoupsetthatsheburstoutcrying.

Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,ZhenHuanfinallyknewthatshewaswrong.Shewasshocked.Shewasconfused.Shewassad.Shewascrying.赏析比较Learningobjectivesrememeber

somewordsandexpressions

aboutemotion.learn

6keysentencepatterns

tomakeemotionaldescriptionsmorevivid(生动的)andspecific(具体的).usethe6writingskillsindifferentsituations.Attheendoftheclass,I’llbeabletomovedpleased/delightedexcited/thrilledHowdoesshe/hefeel?surprised/shocked

frightened/afriadnervous/anxiousangryupset/sad/worried情绪情绪形容词情绪名词开心joyfuldelightedhappyjoydelighthappiness激动

thrilledexcited

thrillexcitement难过sorrowfulsadsorrowsadnessgrief惊讶amazedastonishedsurprisedamazementastonishmentsurprise紧张anxiousnervous

anxietynervousness

害怕frightenedscaredpanickedhorrorfearpanic尴尬embarrassedawkwardashamedembarrassmentshame

后悔guiltyregretful

guiltregret

愤怒angryannoyed

angerannoyancerage感激gratefulthankful

gratitudethankfulness

失望disappointedfrustrateddepresseddisappointmentfrustration

情绪类必背词汇Whatishisemotion?Howdoyouknowthat?莱昂纳多·迪卡普里奥LeonardoDiCaprioWatchthevideoandthink.8Whatishisfeeling?Hefeelsangry.eyesmouthglareatshoutgrithisteethsweatwavehisfistisabouttohitanotherguy

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[fɪst][ɡrɪt]face怒目而视

咬紧挥舞

拳头bodyEmotionaldescriptionActionwordsFaceBodyEmotionalwordsHappy,angry,scared…….Howtomakeyourcontinuationwritingvivid?题材题材感受情绪喜怒形于色Don’ttell，justshowLet’s

learntodescribe.10face:body:He/Sheishappy；……Actionseyesarebentwithlaughterone’seyeslightupone’seyessparkle/shinewithhappinessdancewithjoycheerandjumpforjoy[bent]弯曲的meme[miːm]表情包face:

body:ActionsHe/Sheissad；……withtearsinone’seyesburstintotearstearsroll/rundownone’scheeksbeinfloodsoftearstearsblurone’seyeswipetearsfromone’sfacesobinone’spalmsface:

body:ActionsHe/Sheisscared;……faceturnedpaleeyeswideopenmouthwideopentremblelegsareweak[ˈtrembl]颤抖[peɪl]苍白的

Tomwaslost.Hewasso____thathisface________.(他吓得脸都变白了)_____________,he_____________,

(沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wonderingwhattodonext.Fortunately,withthehelpofakindperson,hefoundhisparents.Afteraday’splay,_______wasTomthat______________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了）Writing

Tomwaslost.He

wasso

scaredthathisfaceturnedpale.(Tom吓得脸都变白了)Depressedandhelpless,hewasinfloodsoftears,

(沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌)wonderingwhattodonext.Fortunately,withthehelpofakindperson,hefoundhisparents.Afteraday’splay,sotired

wasTomthat

hefellasleepquickly.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了）WritingChildren’dayiscoming.Tom’sparentssaidthattheywouldtakehimtothezoo.Hearingthis,Tomjumpedupwithexcitement.Hisfacelitupandhiseyesshone.Thenextmorning,theysetoutearly.Tomwasdelightedallthewaywiththebirdssingingsongsforhim.Whentheygottothezoo,Tomsawmanytoysonsales(出售)atthegateofthezoo.Hewantedtobuyacartoy.Hisfatherwouldn’tbuyitforhim.Tomcriedandrolled(翻滚)ontheground.Paragraph1_____________________________________（他父亲又气又恼，怒视着他，想揍他一顿。)__________________________________________________看到这一切，他母亲虽然不情愿，但也没办法，只好给他买了一个。)______________________________________他非常开心，一直在动物园里玩这辆车。)Thereweremanylovelyanimalsandpeopleinthezoo.Hewasattractedbythelions.Suddenly,hecouldn’tseehisparents.

Paragraph2________________(他吓得脸都变白了。)_____________(沮丧和无助,他泪如泉涌,不知道下一步该怎么办);Fortunately,withthehelpofakindperson,hefoundhisparents.Afteraday’splay,_____________________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了。）Children’dayiscoming.Tom’sparentssaidthattheywouldtakehimtothezoo.Hearingthis,Tomjumpedupwithexcitement.Hisfacelitupandhiseyesshone.Thenextmorning,theysetoutearly.Tomwasdelightedallthewaywiththebirdssingingsongsforhim.Whentheygottothezoo,Tomsawmanytoysonsales(出售)atthegateofthezoo.Hewantedtobuyacartoy.Hisfatherwouldn’tbuyitforhim.Tomcriedandrolled(翻滚)ontheground.Angryandannoyed,hisfatherglaredathim,wantingtobeathim.Seeingthis,unwillingthoughhis

motherwas,shehadnothingtodobutboughtoneforhim.Hewas

sodelighted

that

hekeptplayingthecarinthezoo.Thereweremanylovelyanimalsandpeopleinthezoo.Hewasattractedbythelions.Suddenly,hecouldn'tseehisparents.Hewassoscaredthathisfaceturnedpale.

Depressedandhelpless,hewasinfloodsoftears,wonderingwhattodonext;

Fortunately,withthehelpofakindperson,hefoundhisparents.

Afteraday’splay,Tomwassotiredthathefellasleepquickly.“Ifelthappy.”无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语(换主语):“开心(的情绪)抓住了我”

(加介短):“一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”

(加并列):“开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”

我开心:

Delightseizedme.

Awaveofdelightseizedme.

Delightand

excitementseizedme.

句型探索

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无灵主语情绪名词固定动词seize/catch/takeholdof抓住strike/hitsurround围绕着tear...intopieces把..撕碎wellupin涌入comeover包围/支配envelop

笼罩overwhelm压倒,使难以承受sweep/flood/rushover袭来choke噎住，堵住sb+as/when

sbdosth无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when

sbdosth

(当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头)aburst/wave/surge/sense/flushof+情绪名词(一阵/一种...向某人袭来)万能句型1

asenseof/awaveof/afeelingof

+情绪名词

+welledupinone’sheart/withinsb一种……的感觉涌上某人的心头Eg：

Awaveofwarmth

welled

upinher

heart.

一种温暖的感觉涌上某人的心头。变形一sb.feltagreatsenseof+情绪名词+wellingupinone'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.

某人感到一股强烈的......感觉在内心升腾，奔涌Eg：

Janefeltagreatsenseof

horror

wellingupinherheart

andsurgingthroughher.

Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。变形二

asenseof/afeelingof/awaveof+情感名词

+seized(抓住）sb/overwhelmed（淹没）sb/floodedover(涌上）sb./tookholdof（控制）sb

一种……的感觉......某人Eg：1.Astrongwaveoffear

sweptover

himandhecouldn’tutterasingleword.一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，他一个字也说不来。

2.

Astrongsenseofdelight

tookholdofme

themomentIheard

thegoodnews.一听到这个好消息，我很开心。升级1：句首可以加上doingsth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。Eg：

Hearing

thethunderousapplauseforherperformance,shefeltawaveofexcitementandpridewellingupinherheart.

听到为她的表演而想起的雷鸣般的掌声，一股兴奋感和骄傲感涌上了她的心头。升级2：Eg：

Janefeltagreatsenseofsorrow

flooded

overher,weepingloudly.

简感到一种强烈的悲痛涌了上来，她大声哭泣。句尾可以加上doingsth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果或伴随动作。升级3：句首句尾可以加上with结构的伴随状语，表示这种情绪产生的原因、结果或状态。Eg:1.

With

theracestarting,

Janefeltagreatsenseofnervousness

wellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.

伴随着比赛的开始，简感到一种强烈的紧张在她心中涌出来。2.

HearingthenewsthatIwasnotchosenfortheteam,Ifeltawaveofsadnessoverwhelmingme,withtearsrollingdownmyface.听到我没有被选入团队的消息，一股悲伤淹没了我，泪水顺着我的脸颊滚落下来。万能句型2

表情感的adj.1and表情感的adj.2,

sb.didsth.

(升级句子后可跟doingsth..)

怀着...和...的感情，某人做...Eg:1.

Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,

missing

herfamily.

Jane又累又害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念着她的家人。2.Nervousandslightlyscared,Istepped

ontothestage,

took

adeepbreathandstarted

todelivermyspeech.（动作链）

有点紧张和害怕，我走上台，深呼吸，开始了我的演讲。常用搭配1.既开心又激动2.既难过又沮丧3.既紧张又焦虑4.既担心又害怕5.既坚定又自信6.既惊讶又感动7.既生气又失望8.既疲倦又饥饿delightedandexcitedsadandfrustratednervousandanxiousworriedandscareddeterminedandconfidentsurprisedandtouchedannoyedanddisappointedexhaustedandhungry万能句型3

So+表情感的adj.+was/were+主语+that从句

某人是如此的...以致于...Eg:1.Sonervouswas

Ithat

Iheardmyheartpounding

/beatingwildly.我非常紧张，能听到我的心剧烈地跳动。2.

Onhearing

theunexpectednews,

sosurpriseddid

hefeel

that

hefrozewithhis

mouthwideopen.

听到这个意外的消息，他如此地惊讶以致于长大嘴巴僵住了。万能句型4

(much)toone’s+情绪名词，sbdidsth.Eg:

1.Muchtomom’srelief,

hereturnedhome

safeandsound.

使妈妈大大松了一口气的是，他安然无恙回来了。

2.

Muchtohergratitude,thekindstrangerhelpedhiminhistimeofneed.

让她满心感激的是，那个善良的陌生人在她需要的时候帮助了她。

万能句型5表情绪的adj+as+sbwas/were,sbdidsth.

尽管某人......,某人做了某事Eg:1.Sadashewas,hetriedtoholdbackhistears.

尽管他很难过，他还是努力忍住眼泪。2.Frustratedashewasaboutlosingthecompetition,Johnwasderminedtotrainharder.尽管John对输掉比赛感到沮丧，但他决心攻击能力的训练.万能句型6身体部位+非谓语动词,sbdidsth.

某人做某事，感觉怎样Eg:

Facegleamingwithdelight,Davidlayquietlyontheplayground.

脸上洋溢(gleam)着快乐,David静静地躺在操场上。Eyesfilledwithregretfultears,sbdidsth...眼里满含着后悔的泪水,...Eyesglitteringwithjoy,sbdidsth...眼里闪着喜悦,...Facegleamingwithdelight,sbdidsth...脸上洋溢着快乐,...Heartbeatingwithhappiness,sbdidsth...心砰砰直跳,...Arms/legs/musclesachingandkneesshaking,sbdidsth

胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖,...WordBank

sbwasso+情绪形容词+that

从句

某人如此......以至于......她太伤心了，突然哭了起来。我很羞愧，感觉自己的脸在燃烧。Shewassosadthatsheburstintotears.

IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.1.(感到)开心和兴奋的,他给我打电话，分享了这个好消息。2.(感到)沮丧和无助的,Eric泪流满面，不知道下一步该怎么办。1._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的),Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline(终点线),

conveyinghishappinessandgratitude.（2022全国1卷）2.________________________(既惊讶又感动),Mr.AlderbelievedwhatIsaid,givingmeasecondchance.(2023广东一模)Depressedandhelpless,Ericburstintotears,wonderingwhattodonext.RelievedanddelightedSurprisedandtouchedDelightedandexcited,hecalledme,sharingthegoodnews.情绪形容词①+情绪形容词②,sbdosth,doingsth.(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2尽管他很紧张,David还是决定完成赛跑。尽管他又累又饿,他还是继续爬山。______________(尽管他很害怕),Helctorstillpluckeduphiscourage（鼓起勇气）toexplainwhathadhappenedtoMr.Alder.________________(尽管他们感到恐慌和焦虑),thetwinsexplainedthesituationtotheirfatherinatremblevoice.ScaredashewasPanicandanxiousastheywereExhaustedandhungryashewas,hecarriedonclimbingthemountain.Nervousashewas,Davidwasdeterminedtofinishtherace.

情绪形容词+as

sb+be动词，sb(still)dosth.

尽管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事身体部位+非谓语动词,sbdosth.

某人做某事，感觉怎样

他感到开心和兴奋，终于拿到了他理想大学通知书(admissionletter)，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。出乎意料，大卫顺利越过终点线(finishline)，脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。1.Delightedandexcited,hefinallygottheadmissionletterfromhisidealuniversity,eyesglitteringwithjoy.2.Tomysurprise,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfacegleamingwithsatisfieddelight.举一反三：翻译这个句子。他吓得脸都变白了。Tomwassofrightenedthathisfaceturnedpale.

Frightened,Tom’sface

turnedpale.Tomwas

frightened,hisfaceturningpale.AllroadsleadtoRome.高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年）1.

他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们.”Shockedandproud,theirmothersaidinasweetwhisper,“Thanks,mykid