Unit 4 Writing 学案 2022-2023学年外研版高中英语必修第一册

新外研版B1U4Writing主题写作——永远的朋友1.写作任务假如你是你校英语报社的编辑MissWang,现在晓东给你写信说他因不善于交流在交友过程中遇到了困难，请你用英语给他写-封80词左右的回信，给他提出一些建议或意见。2.写作构思(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题①体裁:应用文一信件②主题:针对交友中遇到的困难提出建议(2)二定:确定时态和人称①时态:以一般将来时为主，同时会用到表达愿望的情态动词②人称:以第二、三人称为主(3)三明确:明确写作要点①内容要求:a.首先要表达自己的难过;b.针对问题提出建议;C.表达自己的希望与祝福。②词数要求:80左右。(4)四分段结合要点分为三个段落。3.素材整理(1)关键词语①haveroubleinmakingfriends在交友方面有困难②likesanddislikes好恶③getalongwellwith与....相处得好④takeanactivepartin积极参加⑤introuble处于困境中⑥withtimegoingon随着时间的流逝(2)重要句型①听说你在交友方面有困难，我感到很难过。(一般表达)I'msorrytohearthatyoucan'tmakefriends.(高级表达)I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.(havetroubleindoingsth.)②首先，了解你同学的好恶。(一般表达)First,gettoknowwhatyourclassmateslikeandwhattheydon'tlike.(高级表达)First,whynotlearnaboutyourclassmates'likesanddislikes?(疑问句)③第二，积极参与班级讨论会帮你显示出你的友好。(一般表达)Second,takinganactivepartinthediscussionsinyourclasswillhelptoshowyouarefriendly.(高级表达)Second,itwillhelpyoutoshowyouarefriendlyifyoutakeanactivepartinthediscussionsinyourclass.(if引导条件状语从句)④第三，当别人遇到困难的时候，向他们提供帮助，是一个好主意。(一般表达)Third,helpingotherswhentheyareintroublewouldbeagoodidea.(高级表达)Third,itwouldbeagoodideatohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.(用it作形式主语，动词不定式短语作真正主语)4.高分作文(连句成篇)DearXiaodong,I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.First,whynotlearnaboutyourclassmates'likesanddislikes?Thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwiththem,whichhelpsyougetalongwellwiththem.Second,itwillhelpyoutoshowyouarefriendlyifyoutakeanactivepartinthediscussionsinyourclass.Third,itwouldbeagoodideatohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillliketomakefriendswithyou.Yours,MissWang[综合点评](1)该范文结构完整，作者首先表达自己的难过，然后指出改正问题的措施，提出具体可行的建议。(2)要点齐全，语言规范地道，环环相扣。(3)文中第二段开头运用了“Whynot...?”这一反问句，使人耳目一新;使用first,second,third等过渡词进行衔接，使表达自然紧凑。(4)在句式上，作者巧妙地使用了宾语从句状语从句等句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。5.佳作背诵(1)佳作一(2021.金星原创)假如你是李华，你的好朋友王涛最近不喜欢学习，经常和别人玩电脑游戏并浏览不健康的网站。请你给他写-一封信，内容包括:①点明他的不良行为;②给他一些交朋友的建议。注意:①词数80左右;②可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Onepossibleversion:DearWangTao,Iamwritingtoyoutohaveadeepchatwithyou.Recently,Ifindyoursomeunusualbehavior:playingcomputergames,scanningunhealthysites,missingclassesandsoon.Youshouldfeelashamed.Friendsplayanimportantpartinourlife,sowehavetochooseourfriendscarefully.Wemustknowtruefriendswillneveraskustodothingsthatwillnotbegoodforus.Idonotthinkthefriendsaroundyounowareyourtruefriends.Isincerelyhopeyoucancorrectthesemistakes.Iamlookingforwardtoreceivingyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua(2)佳作二假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary在交友方面存在些困难，请根据下面的提示，用英语给她写一封信。①想要交朋友，首先要做-个朋友;②要和朋友同甘共苦;③友谊需要时间和努力。注意:①词数80左右;②开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。Onepossibleversion:DearMary,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.First,whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends?Inaddition,youshouldsharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend.Justasasayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed."Lastbutnotleast,trytobeki