2026年上海16区中考英语一模题型 专题17 写作（25年16区一模满分范文）（解析版）

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________专题17写作（25年16区一模满分范文）1．（2025·上海嘉定·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.（请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）你的班级正在制作一本毕业相册（yearbook），现向同学们征集照片。请你选择一张最喜欢的照片，描述照片的内容（如时间、地点、人物、事件等），并说明选择的理由。注意：1.短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inmycollectionofphotos,thereisonethatIlikebest.Itwastakenlastsummerontheschoolplayground.Inthephoto,mywholeclasswasstandinginacircle,holdinghands,withbigsmilesonourfaces.Wewereinthemiddleofateam-buildinggame.Thatday,thesunwasshiningbrightly,andwewereallsweatingbuthavingagreattime.Ichoosethisphotobecauseittrulyrepresentstheunityandfriendshipinourclass.WheneverIlookatit,thosehappymemoriesofusworkingtogetherandlaughingtogethercomefloodingback,anditmakesmefeelwarmandnostalgic.It’stheperfectphototoputinouryearbooktorememberthosewonderfuldays.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的一张照片并介绍照片内容；第二步，说明选择这张照片的理由。[亮点词汇]①haveagoodtime玩得开心②lookat看③nostalgic怀旧的[高分句型]①Inmycollectionofphotos,thereisonethatIlikebest.（Therebe句型；that引导的定语从句）②Ichoosethisphotobecauseittrulyrepresentstheunityandfriendshipinourclass.（because引导原因状语从句）2．（2025·上海虹口·一模）Writeatextmessageofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(根据以下情境写一个不少于60个词的短信，标点符号不占格。)春节即将来临。假如你是学生李华，你想给你的班主任张老师发一个短信，感谢她在过去一年对你的帮助。请从李华的草稿中选择一件事情，完成这个短信。短信须包含以下内容：1.你发送短信的原因；2.简要描述这件事情。ThingsIwanttothankMsZhangfor…□encouragedmetotakepartintheComicsClub□taughtmethelinkmethod,veryhelpful注意：1.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissZhang,Iamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourhelpinmystudy.Withoutyourhelp,mystudywouldnotbethetopthreeinmyclass.ItwasyouwhoalwaysstoodbymewhenIamfall.Youpointedmymistakesandtoldmehowtomakethemright.What’smore,youencouragedmetotakepartintheComicsClubthoughmyparentsthoughtitwasawasteoftime.Youalwaysworkedtirelesslytotrainmypatience.Yourcontinuousencouragementismygreatestmotivation.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文；②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：根据题干内容完成写作，不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，并突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图——表达感谢；第二步，具体阐述感谢的原因；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①standby支持②tirelessly不知疲倦地③continuous不断的[高分句型]①ItwasyouwhoalwaysstoodbymewhenIamfall.（强调句）②What’smore,youencouragedmetotakepartintheComicsClubthoughmyparentsthoughtitwasawasteoftime.（though引导的让步状语从句）3．（2024·上海奉贤·一模）Writeapassageinatleast60wordsaccordingtothefollowingsituation.(以“MyProposal”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)我们生活的学校、社区、社会已经发生了许许多多令人欣喜的变化，同时还存在着有待改进的地方。你观察到哪里还需要改进？你觉得需要如何改进？假如你是学校“模拟政协”社团的一员，请你写下你的提案。(注意：1.写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Sample1:ProblemwithlimitedlibraryhoursAtschool,I’venoticedthatthelibraryhoursaretoolimited.Manystudentslikemewanttostudythereafterschool,butitclosesearly.Thisrestrictsouraccesstoresources.Isuggestextendingthelibrary’sopeninghoursuntillaterintheevening,sothatwecanmakefulluseofitsfacilitiesandbooksforourstudies.Sample2:ProblemwithSchoolCafeteriaFoodAtschool,thecafeteriafoodisoftenunappetizing.Thechoicesarelimited,andthemealslackvariety.Manystudents,includingme,don’tlikethetaste.Thisaffectsourenergyandconcentrationduringclasses.Isuggestthecafeteriashouldoffermorediverseandhealthyoptions.Theycouldalsoconductsurveystoknowourpreferencesandimprovethefoodquality.Sample3:LackofSportsFacilitiesatSchoolA:Inourschool,therearen’tenoughsportsfacilities.Wehavetowaitinlongqueuestousetheavailableones.Thisreducesourtimeforactualexercise.Ithinktheschoolshouldinvestinmoresportsequipmentandbuildadditionalfacilitieslikeaproperbadmintoncourt.Thisway,morestudentscanengageinphysicalactivitiesandstayfit.B:Ourschoolhasashortageofsportsfacilities.Therearenotenoughbasketballcourtsorfootballfields.Thismakesitdifficultforustohaveproperphysicaleducationclasses.Ithinktheschoolshouldinvestinbuildingmoresportsfacilities.Theycouldalsosetaspecifictimeforeachclasstousethefacilitiestoensureeveryonehasachance.Sample4:NoiseProblemintheSchoolLibraryTheschoollibraryissupposedtobeaquietplaceforstudying,butit'softennoisy.Somestudentstalkandlaughloudly,disturbingothers.Thismakesithardtoconcentrate.Isuggestsettingupclearrulesandpostingsignsremindingstudentstokeepquiet.Librarianscouldalsopatrolregularlyandgentlyremindthosewhomakenoisetobequiet.Sample5:LongHomeworkAssignmentsAtschool,teachersoftengiveusalotofhomework,whichtakesuptoomuchofourtime.Wehavelittletimeforrestandhobbies.Isuggestteachersshouldreducetheamountofhomeworkandfocusonimprovingthequality.Theycouldassignmoremeaningfulandpracticaltasksthatcanhelpusbetterunderstandtheknowledge.Sample5:ProblemofLitteringintheCommunityInourcommunity,litteringisabigproblem.Peopleoftenthrowtrashontheground,makingtheenvironmentdirty.Thisnotonlyaffectstheappearancebutalsospreadsdiseases.Isuggestthecommunityshouldplacemoretrashcansinpublicareas.Andtheycouldorganizeregularclean-upactivitiestoraisepeople'sawarenessofkeepingtheenvironmentclean.Sample6:LongQueuesforSchoolBusesEverymorning,therearelongqueuesforschoolbuses.Ittakesalotoftime,andsometimeswearelateforschool.Thisisbecausethebusscheduleisn’twell-organized.Isuggesttheschoolshouldadjustthebusscheduleaccordingtothenumberofstudents.Theycouldalsoassignspecificpick-uppointstoavoidchaosandreducewaitingtime.Sample7:LackofGreenSpacesintheCommunityInourcommunity,therearenotenoughgreenspaces.Peopledon’thavemanyplacestorelaxandenjoynature.Thisaffectsourqualityoflife.Ithinkthelocalgovernmentshouldturnsomeunusedlandintoparksorgardens.Communitymemberscouldalsoplanttreesandflowersintheirownyardstoaddmoregreenerytothearea.Sample8:TrafficCongestionnearSchoolDuringschoolhours,thereisheavytrafficcongestionnearourschool.It’sdifficultforstudentsandparentstogetinandoutsafely.Thisalsocausesairpollution.Iproposethatthelocaltrafficdepartmentshouldsetuptrafficcontrolmeasures,likededicatedlanesforschoolbusesandparentsdroppingofftheirchildren.Theycouldalsoencouragecarpooling.Sample9:LackofCommunityActivitiesforTeensA:Inourcommunity,therearefewactivitiesspecificallydesignedforteenagers.Weoftenhavenothingtodoafterschool.Thiscanleadtoboredomandsomemaygetinvolvedinbadbehaviors.Ithinkthecommunitycentershouldorganizemoreinterestingandeducationalactivitiesforus,likeartworkshops,sportscompetitions,andvolunteerprograms.B:Inourcommunity,therearenotenoughvolunteeractivitiesforusteenagers.Wewanttocontributetothecommunitybutdon’thavemanyopportunities.Iproposethatthecommunitycentershouldorganizemorevolunteerprograms,suchashelpingtheelderlyorcleaninguppublicareas.Thiswouldnotonlybenefitthecommunitybutalsoenrichourlives.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，描述你所观察到的变化；第二步，描述需要改进的地方第三步，提出需要改进的建议。[亮点词汇]①wanttodosth想要做某事②sothat以至于③makefulluseof充分利用[高分句型]Isuggestextendingthelibrary’sopeninghoursuntillaterintheevening,sothatwecanmakefulluseofitsfacilitiesandbooksforourstudies.(sothat引导的目的状语从句)4．（2025·上海宝山·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.(请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)假设你是李华，你在学校的国际交流活动中结识了一位英国留学生Michael。他对中国学校的校园生活很感兴趣。你决定写一封邮件给他，向他介绍你的校园生活。你可以从校园环境(campusenvironment)、学校午餐(schoollunch)、传统节庆活动(traditionalfestivalsandcelebrations)、社团活动(clubactivities)中选择1-2个方面进行介绍，让Michael感受到中国校园的独特魅力。注意：1.信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。DearMichael,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文DearMichael,Howareyou?I’dliketosharemycampuslifewithyou.Myschoolisbigandbeautiful.Thereisabigplaygroundandanewlibrary.Thediningroomisbigandcleanandtheschoollunchisverydelicious.Therearedifferentkindsofclubsinmyschool.Ijointhebasketballclub.Weoftenplaybasketballtogether.Lastmonth,wewonthefirstprizeinthecampusbasketballcompetition.NewYear’sDayiscomingsoon,andwewillholdagrandpartytocelebrateit.Ilikemycampuslifeverymuch.Howaboutyourcampuslife?Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，可选择1-2个方面介绍。可适当添加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，问候朋友并表明写作目的；第二步，详细介绍自己的校园生活；第三步，表达对校园的喜爱并询问对方的校园生活怎么样。[亮点词汇]①share...with...与……分享……②takepartin参加③winthefirstprize获得一等奖[高分句型]①Thereisabigplaygroundandanewlibrary.(Therebe句型，就近原则)②NewYear’sDayiscomingsoon,andwewillholdagrandpartytocelebrateit.(动词不定式作目的状语)5．（2025·上海松江·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假如你是初三学生李华，最近收到小学同学张文的来信，信中抱怨了他的烦恼：他学业繁忙，但是父母还要他每天晚上饭后做家务，如洗碗、拖地、狗等。请你回信给张文，帮助他排解烦恼。（注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：DearZhangWen,Afterreadingaboutyourstruggleswithbalancingschoolworkandhouseworkinyourrecentletter,IcompletelyunderstandhowtiredyouareandIwanttogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,asastudent,wemustrememberthatstudyisalwaysthemostimportantthing.Wemustpayenoughattentiontoyourhomework.Afterfinishingyourwork,youcandosomeelsehousework.Second,youcanaskyourparentstofindsomequickandeffectivewaystodohouseworks.Ibelieveyoucansavealotoftimeafterusingcomequickmethods.Third,Ialsorecommendhavinganhonestconversationwithyourparentsaboutyourworkload,thusrelievingyourburden.I’mhereifyouneedanymoreadviceorjustsomeonetotalkto.Yourssincerely,LiHua【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，介绍来信提到的内容，从而引出话题：提供建议；第二步，针对问题，具体介绍你的建议；第三步，总结并祝愿。【亮点词汇】①givesomeadvice给出建议②payattentionto关注③savealotoftime节省时间【高分句型】①Afterreadingaboutyourstruggleswithbalancingschoolworkandhouseworkinyourrecentletter,IcompletelyunderstandhowtiredyouareandIwanttogiveyousomeadvices.（how引导的宾语从句）②Third,Ialsorecommendhavinganhonestconversationwithyourparentsaboutyourworkload,thusrelievingyourburden.（现在分词作目的状语）6．（2025·上海长宁·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(请根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你，最近他已经成功报名参加交换生项目(exchangeprogram)，下学期来你学校交流学习两个月，想了解你校的特色课程(featurecourse)，请你给Alex回信，表示欢迎并介绍你认为最有特色的学校课程，如：运动、艺术、编程(programming)、茶艺(teaart)等等并说明理由。DearAlex,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearAlex,I’mgladtohearaboutyourupcomingexchangeprogramatourschool!Welcome!Atourschool,oneofthemostdistinctivecoursesisTeaArt.It’snotjustaboutlearninghowtobrewtea,butalsounderstandingChinesecultureandhistory.It’sacalmingandenrichingexperiencethatoffersinsightsintotraditionalcultures.Ibelieveyou’llenjoyitgreatly.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。[写作步骤]第一步，表达欢迎的态度；第二步，选择茶艺课作为特色课程进行介绍，以其结合文化和历史的特点为理由，说明其独特性和吸引力；第三步，期待对方的回复，并收尾。[亮点词汇]①hearabout听到关于②lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①It’sacalmingandenrichingexperiencethatoffersinsightsintotraditionalcultures.（定语从句）②Ibelieveyou’llenjoyitgreatly.（宾语从句）7．（2025·上海青浦·一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation.(根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)假如你是吴磊，收到一封来自外国朋友Mathew的电子邮件，他提到寒假会来上海参加一个为期一周的交流访学活动，活动方提供了三种住宿方案，分别是住当地同学家(staywithoneofthelocalclassmates)、住学校宿舍(liveintheschooldormitory)或住宾馆(stayatahotel)。Mathew希望你能给他出出主意，请你根据这一情况给他回一封邮件。内容要点如下：1.表示欢迎；2.推荐其中一种住宿方案，并说明理由。注意：●文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。●照抄试卷中内容不得分。●邮件格式不计入总词数。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearMathew,IamverypleasedtolearnthatyouwillcometoShanghaiforexchangeandstudyactivitiesduringthewintervacation,andIwarmlywelcomeyou!Shanghaiisacityfullofvitalityandcharm.Ibelieveyouwillspendanunforgettabletimehere.Foraccommodationoptions,Irecommendthatyouchoosetostayatalocalclassmate’shouse.ThisnotonlyallowsforadeeperexperienceofShanghai’slocalculture,butalsodeepensourunderstandingandfriendshipwithChinathroughcommunicationwithclassmates.Ofcourse,theaccommodationchoiceultimatelydependsonyourpersonalpreferences,butIbelieveitwouldbeaverygoodchoice.LookingforwardtomeetingyouinShanghaiandsharingthebeautyofthiscitywithyou.Yours,WuLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，对外国朋友表示欢迎。第二步，推荐其中一种住宿方案，并说明理由。第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①bepleasedtodo高兴做某事②fullof充满③notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……[高分句型]①Ibelieveyouwillspendanunforgettabletimehere.(宾语从句)8．（2025·上海崇明·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)假设你是初三学生林东，下周有一所国外姐妹学校来你校进行为期两周的学习交流活动。学校请你给来校交流的外国同龄学生做一个主题为“交流文化、增进友谊”的发言。你的发言必须包含以下两点：1.向对方学生介绍一项具有中国特色的传统文化2.谈谈两周中你准备为这批外国学生安排什么跨文化交流活动(参观文化景点、文化交流活动、文化习俗体验等)(注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Dearfriends,Hello!I'mLinDong,astudentfromGrade9.Welcometoourschool!I’mveryhappytointroducetraditionalChineseculturetoyou.It’sChinesecalligraphy.It’sanartofwritingChinesecharacterswithabrush.Ithasalonghistoryandisverybeautiful.Duringthesetwoweeks,wehaveplannedsomecross-culturalactivitiesforyou.We’llvisitsomefamousculturalplacesliketheForbiddenCity.There,youcanseemanyoldbuildingsandlearnaboutChinesehistory.We’llalsohaveculturalexchangeactivities.YoucantrytowriteChinesecalligraphyandmakeChinesepaper-cutting.Andwe’llhaveaChinesefoodfestival.YoucantastemanydeliciousChinesedishesandlearnhowtomakesomesimpleones.Ihopeyou’llenjoytheseactivitiesandmakemorefriendshere.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；③提示：根据提示要点完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，向对方学生介绍一项具有中国特色的传统文化；第二步，谈谈两周中你准备为这批外国学生安排什么跨文化交流活动；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①introducesth.tosb.把某物介绍给某人②learnabout了解[高分句型]①I’mveryhappytointroducetraditionalChineseculturetoyou.(动词不定式作原因状语)②Ihopeyou’llenjoytheseactivitiesandmakemorefriendshere.(宾语从句)9．（2025·上海徐汇·一模）WhatdoesCharlie’sstorymakeyouthinkof?Pleasewriteatleast60wordsfromyourownortheschool’sperspectiveonhowtoensureeverystudenthasafairopportunitytoreceiveagoodeducation.读完了Charlie的故事后，你有了哪些思考和感悟？请用不少于60个词从自身或学校的视角来谈谈可以怎样做来让每一个学生都能获得公平接受教育的机会。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Charlie’sstoryremindsmeoftheimportanceofeducationalequity.Toensureeverystudenthasafairopportunitytoreceiveagoodeducation,schoolsshouldprovidegoodresourcesandsupporttoallstudents.Schoolsshouldregularlyoffersomementalhealthclasses.Studentscanlearnhowtofeelcalmwhenfacingschoolbullingordifficulties.Moreover,personalizedlearningplanscanhelpmeeteveryone’sneeds,ensuringthatnostudentisleftbehind.

Ihopethateverystudentcanreceiveafaireducation.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据查理的故事，写出自己的思考和感悟。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，写出自己从故事中获得的感悟；第二步，给出自己想法和建议；第三步，总结，希望每个学生都能接受到平等的教育。[亮点词汇]①remindsbofsth提醒某人某事②receiveagoodeducation接受好的教育③meeteveryone’sneeds满足每个人的需求[高分句型]①Toensureeverystudenthasafairopportunitytoreceiveagood

education,schoolsshouldprovidegoodresourcesandsupporttoall

students.（不定式作目的状语）②Ihopethateverystudentcanreceiveafaireducation.（that引导宾语从句）10．（2025·上海普陀·一模）根据以下情境写一篇字数不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。假如你是李明，你的好朋友王林最近常常抱怨平凡的生活千篇一律，又苦恼不知如何发现或创造不凡。请给他写一封信，结合你的自身经历或所见所闻，谈谈你对“平凡”和“不凡”的理解，并给他一些建议。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。你可以这样开始：DearWangLin,Iknowyouareboredwitheverydaylifeanddon’tknowhowtofindorcreatesomethinggreat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearWangLin,Iknowyouareboredwitheverydaylifeanddon’tknowhowtofindorcreatesomethinggreat.Infact,everyordinarydayisfilledwithpotentialextraordinariness.TakemyneighborUncleZhangasanexample.Heworksasanordinarypostman,deliveringmailseveryday.Buthealwayshasabigsmileonhisfaceandtrieshisbesttoremembereveryone’spreferencesandneeds.Once,hefoundanimportantdocumentinaparcelandwentoutofhiswaytoreturnittotheownerimmediately,whichsavedtheowneralotoftrouble.Forus,wecanstartsmall.Youlovepainting,right?Maybeyoucanuseyourpaintbrushtodecoratetheoldwallsintheneighborhood,turningthemintobeautifulartworks.Also,whenhelpingyourparentswithhousework,youcantrytocomeupwithnewwaystomakeitmoreefficientandfun.Lifeislikeablankcanvas,andwearethepainters.Byputtingourheartintotheordinary,wecancreatetheextraordinary.【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要给对方一些建议，注意不要遗漏要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍自己对“平凡”和“不凡”的理解，并分享自己邻居当快递员的例子；第二步，提出建议；

第三步，书写结语，表达“把我们的心放在平凡中，我们就能创造不平凡”的感悟。

[亮点词汇]

①infact实际上②befilledwith充满③take...asanexample以……为例④tryone’sbesttodosth竭尽某人全力做某事⑤o...把……变成……[高分句型]

①Once,hefoundanimportantdocumentinaparcelandwentoutofhiswaytoreturnittotheownerimmediately,whichsavedtheowneralotoftrouble.(which引导非限制性定语从句)11．（2025·上海静安·一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）假设你是陆遥（LuYao），英国友好学校学生代表团即将访问你校。你校英语社团（EnglishClub）负责为来访者举办交流活动，为此征集活动的建议。请给英语社团社长林东（LinDong）写一封电子邮件，分享你设计的活动方案，并说明设计理由。注意：1.文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格；2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearLinDong,I’mLuYao.I’mexcitedtohearthattheBritishstudentdelegationiscomingtovisitourschool.Here’smyactivityplanfortheexchange.Wecanstartwithaculturalexhibition.WecanpreparesomedisplayboardsshowingtraditionalChinesefestivals,liketheSpringFestivalandMid-AutumnFestival,withpicturesandexplanations.Then,wearrangealanguagegamesession.Forexample,weplayChinesetonguetwisters,whichcannotonlybringlaughterbutalsohelpthempracticeChinesepronunciation.Afterthat,agroupdiscussionaboutthedifferencesbetweenChineseandBritishschoolscanleteveryonesharetheirthoughtsfreely.ThereasonforthisdesignisthatitcanletthemexperienceChineseculturedeeplyandatthesametime,promotecommunication.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LuYao【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要说明设计理由，注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题，表达对英国友好学校学生代表团即将访问学校感到兴奋，并介绍自己有一个活动方案；

第二步，详细介绍自己的活动方案；

第三步，介绍活动方案的设计理由；第四步，期待反馈。[亮点词汇]

①forexample例如②notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……③atthesametime同时

④lookforwardto期待

[高分句型]

①I’mexcitedtohearthattheBritishstudentdelegationiscomingtovisitourschool.（that引导宾语从句）

②Forexample,weplayChinesetonguetwisters,whichcannotonlybringlaughterbutalsohelpthempracticeChinesepronunciation.（which引导的定语从句）③ThereasonforthisdesignisthatitcanletthemexperienceChineseculturedeeplyandatthesametime,promotecommunication.（that引导表语从句）12．（2025·上海杨浦·一模）你是学校图书馆的志愿者李枫，负责每周一下午的图书馆整理工作。这周你因为某个原因而忘记了图书馆的任务。你需要写一封道歉信给你的图书馆负责人Mr.Wang，表达你的歉意。道歉信内容须包括：·表达歉意；·解释缺席的原因；·提出补救措施。注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2.照