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ContinuationWriting

读后续写

重生之我是编剧上一世,你只是一个酷爱追剧的小孩;看得正高兴的时候,什么!编剧居然把你最爱的角色写死了!什么!编剧居然把你最磕的cp拆散了!一气之下,一口气没过来,还好重生一世,你变成了一个编剧;这一次你要夺回你的一切......

假如你是一个编剧,那么,读后续写对你来说,等同于丢给你一个没写完的剧本,让你创作

主题人与社会

人与自我

人与自然

(温情或化险为夷的故事,表达人间有真情、大爱)(主角的自我发展、变化或成长)(人与动物或自然和谐相处)初识读后续写-----是什么读后续写:提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生根据所提供的

进行续写;词数要求:

,将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。通过阅读原文、思考剧本,利用语言描写、动作描写、心理描写、环境描写等等,推动故事情节发展,完成续写方法:十句五定法(续写10句,有5句可固定)材料内容两段开头语150词左右the6basicelements6大要素:who;when;where;what;why;how主要目的themainideavocabularysentence词汇

句型structurelinkingwords,结构

连接词theplotandfeeling情节和感受thetense时态themaincharacter主要人物thestyle写作风格语言生动,高级完成一篇“剧本”的基本步骤写剧本---整洁书写befullandattractive情节完整

有吸引力读剧本---审题思剧本---构思情节合理的情节1.原文2.读两段提示语读后续写-----如何应对找出主角人物、主要情节和冲突、情感变化“剧本”写作指南三大原则01原文一致原则内容要前后衔接,上下连贯语言表达风格一致。03曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏,其中人物会遇到困难或问题,但最终能解决。02正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,但最终一定成功了;吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处;犯错了,最后一定会改过自新,重新做人;贼逃了,最后一定是绳之以法,等等。

MyparentsranasmallgrocerystorenearmyhouseinSanFrancisco.Theyalwayskeptabigboxbytheentrancewherepeoplecoulddonatecansofsoupandstufftoourlocalfoodbank.“Forsomereason,ourfood-donationboxjustisn’tfillinguplately,”saidmydad.“Maybeit’stimetothinkofawaytoremindfolksaboutthefoodbank,”repliedmymom.Wetalkedabouthavingfireworks,butMomsmilinglysaiditwasalittleoutsideourbudget.Dadsuggestedatalentshowbecauseitwasfunandpeoplecouldpayforticketswithfooddonations.Weallgladlyagreed.Wordforthetalentshowgotout.Whilemyparentspostedinformationonlineabouttheevent,wekidsmadesomesigns.MyfriendMareyacameovertohelpout.“I’dliketodoanactintheshow,butIdon’tknowwhattodo,”ItoldMareya.“Well,sincethefood-bankthingisaboutsharing,”saidMareya,“Whynotwriteasongaboutthat?”ItoldMareyathatwritingasongwasnotaproblem.ButI’dbetoonervoustosingit.Plus,Ididn’tthinkIwasgoodenough!Sheshrugged.“Whatifwesangittogether?”SinceMareyahadtheworld’sprettiestvoiceandalsohappenedtoplaytheguitar,Iagreed.Theactwouldbeahugesuccess.Youwouldn’tbelievehowmanypeoplecamebythestoreoverthenextweektosignuptoperform:dancers,Hula-Hoopers,banjoplayers,comedians,poets,andaboywhodidtrickswithhisadorablepoodlesSaltandPepper!MareyaandIpracticedandpracticed,andIwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butonthemorningoftheperformance,Mareyacalledwithbadnews.Shehadaseriousstomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.开头已给出。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________350词左右的语言材料

未完成的剧本两段开头语Paral:“There’snowayI’mgoingonwithoutyou,”Itoldher.___________________________________________________________Para2:OnceIwasoffthestage,ashamed,mymomwrappedmeinabighug.____PartOne读剧本

读什么续什么读什么十句五定法读情节(人物&事件)、情感、伏笔续什么Para1第一句

情绪/动作Para1最后一句

根据Para2第一句过渡Para2倒数第二句

紧贴首段/问题解决Para2第一句

情绪/动作Para2最后一句

升华(成长/亲情/友情)所见,所闻,所感,所说,所做五句填细节五句定框架读后续写要求续写词数为150词左右。若一句话平均15个词,则10句话左右则可以完成。读剧本之找人主角+配角Whoareinthestory?

MyparentsranasmallgrocerystorenearmyhouseinSanFrancisco.Theyalwayskeptabigboxbytheentrancewherepeoplecoulddonatecansofsoupandstufftoourlocalfoodbank.“Forsomereason,ourfood-donationboxjustisn’tfillinguplately,”saidmydad.“Maybeit’stimetothinkofawaytoremindfolksaboutthefoodbank,”repliedmymom.Wetalkedabouthavingfireworks,butMomsmilinglysaiditwasalittleoutsideourbudget.Dadsuggestedatalentshowbecauseitwasfunandpeoplecouldpayforticketswithfooddonations.Weallgladlyagreed.Wordforthetalentshowgotout.Whilemyparentspostedinformationonlineabouttheevent,wekidsmadesomesigns.MyfriendMareyacameovertohelpout.“I’dliketodoanactintheshow,butIdon’tknowwhattodo,”ItoldMareya.“Well,sincethefood-bankthingisaboutsharing,”saidMareya,“Whynotwriteasongaboutthat?”ItoldMareyathatwritingasongwasnotaproblem.ButI’dbetoonervoustosingit.Plus,Ididn’tthinkIwasgoodenough!Sheshrugged.“Whatifwesangittogether?”

SinceMareyahadtheworld’sprettiestvoiceandalsohappenedtoplaytheguitar,Iagreed.Theactwouldbeahugesuccess.Youwouldn’tbelievehowmanypeoplecamebythestoreoverthenextweektosignuptoperform:dancers,Hula-Hoopers,banjoplayers,comedians,poets,andaboywhodidtrickswithhisadorablepoodlesSaltandPepper!

MareyaandIpracticedandpracticed,andIwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butonthemorningoftheperformance,Mareyacalledwithbadnews.Shehadaseriousstomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.“There’snowayI’mgoingonwithoutyou,”Itoldher.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnceIwasoffthestage,ashamed,mymomwrappedmeinabighug._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读剧本之找时间Whendid/doesthestoryhappen?决定续写需要用的主要时态

MyparentsranasmallgrocerystorenearmyhouseinSanFrancisco.Theyalwayskeptabigboxbytheentrancewherepeoplecoulddonatecansofsoupandstufftoourlocalfoodbank.“Forsomereason,ourfood-donationboxjustisn’tfillinguplately,”saidmydad.“Maybeit’stimetothinkofawaytoremindfolksaboutthefoodbank,”repliedmymom.Wetalkedabouthavingfireworks,butMomsmilinglysaiditwasalittleoutsideourbudget.Dadsuggestedatalentshowbecauseitwasfunandpeoplecouldpayforticketswithfooddonations.Weallgladlyagreed.Wordforthetalentshowgotout.Whilemyparentspostedinformationonlineabouttheevent,wekidsmadesomesigns.MyfriendMareyacameovertohelpout.“I’dliketodoanactintheshow,butIdon’tknowwhattodo,”ItoldMareya.“Well,sincethefood-bankthingisaboutsharing,”saidMareya,“Whynotwriteasongaboutthat?”ItoldMareyathatwritingasongwasnotaproblem.ButI’dbetoonervoustosingit.Plus,Ididn’tthinkIwasgoodenough!Sheshrugged.“Whatifwesangittogether?”SinceMareyahadtheworld’sprettiestvoiceandalsohappenedtoplaytheguitar,Iagreed.Theactwouldbeahugesuccess.Youwouldn’tbelievehowmanypeoplecamebythestoreoverthenextweektosignuptoperform:dancers,Hula-Hoopers,banjoplayers,comedians,poets,andaboywhodidtrickswithhisadorablepoodlesSaltandPepper!MareyaandIpracticedandpracticed,andIwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butonthemorningoftheperformance,Mareyacalledwithbadnews.Shehadaseriousstomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.Tense:_____________simplepasttense(一般过去时)读剧本之找事情节

主题Whathappened?Events(Whathappened)MyparentsranasmallgrocerystorenearmyhouseinSanFrancisco.Dadsuggestedatalentshowbecauseitwasfunandpeoplecouldpayforticketswithfooddonations.“Forsomereason,ourfood-donationboxjustisn’tfillinguplately,”saidmydad.“Maybeit’stimetothinkofawaytoremindfolksaboutthefoodbank,”repliedmymom.Butonthemorningoftheperformance,Mareyacalledwithbadnews.Shehadaseriousstomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.MyfriendMareyacameovertohelpout.“Whatifwesangittogether?”MareyaandIpracticedandpracticedwhenwheresomedayTense:_____________simplepasttensehome;stagewhoDad,Mom,Mareya,Ifirstpersonperspective第一人称视角开端Beginning高潮Climax结局EndingStoryMountain发展情节转折结局Parentsplannedatalentshowtoraisemoneyforthelocalfoodbank.MareyaandIchoseaduetandpracticedhardforweeksafterschool.Onthebigday,Mareyagotaseriousstomache!Shefeltterribleandcouldn'tperformatall.Iwasshockedandanxious,butIknewtheshowmustgoonforthecharity!Isangoursongalonebravely.Theaudiencecheeredwildlyanddonatedmorefood!故事线Plot:Charity→Practice→Crisis→Action情感线Hopeful→ExcitedNervous满心紧张Determined&Proud坚定且自豪PartOne创作剧本

十句五定法Para1①接第一句所给内容②调配演员,描写情绪(可有对话)③动作/环境/语言④关键情节⑤接第二段的第一句(从第二段第一句倒推)Para2①接第二段第一句所给内容②关键情节(各个角色做什么)③动作/环境/语言(可有对话)④交代结局:问题解决(积极向上,符合价值观)⑤点睛升华:价值观/感叹/谚语

已知信息Tip1:由已知信息推理未知信息

GiveninformationNewinformation

新信息读什么续什么五句定框架+五句填细节十句五定法读后续写要求续写词数为150词左右。若一句话平均15个词,则10句话左右则可以完成。

P1:“There’snowayI’mgoingonwithoutyou,”Itoldher.

P2:OnceIwasoffthestage,ashamed,mymomwrappedmeinabighug.I紧张,上台唱歌下台,母亲拥抱我母亲骄傲,我倾诉紧张大获成功,各种物资勇敢突破自我、直面恐惧,坚持收获惊喜所感:害怕独自表演,浑身颤抖所闻:朋友和家人的鼓励所做:登台演唱,赢得掌声,自我突破所做:倾诉,沟通(和母亲、朋友)所感:踏出舒适圈,挑战自我①情绪/动作②③④⑤

根据para2衔接⑥

情绪/动作⑨

问题解决⑩

升华⑦⑧读什么续什么①情绪/动作I紧张,上台唱歌②所感:害怕独自表演,浑身颤抖③

所闻:朋友和家人的鼓励④

所做:登台演唱,赢得掌声,自我突破⑤

根据Para2衔接下台,母亲拥抱我⑥

情绪/动作母亲骄傲,我倾诉紧张⑨

问题解决大获成功,各种物资⑩

升华勇敢突破自我、直面恐惧,坚持收获惊喜⑦

所做:倾诉,沟通(和母亲、朋友)⑧

所感:踏出舒适圈,挑战自我续写微技能情绪描写语段衔接万能升华所见Atthesightof...,sb....所闻Uponhearingthenewsthat,sb....所说“...”,sb.saidina/anadj.voice,“...”所做

sb.didsthanddidsthsb.didsth,doing(anddoing)done,sb.didsth,doing所感Itwasatthemomentsb.realizedthat...It(suddenly)occurredtosb.that“There’snowayI’mgoingonwithoutyou,”Itoldher._______________________________________________________________________1.满心沮丧,甚至萌生了放弃表演的念头(情绪低落)Para.12.Mareya一直鼓励我,强调我之前的努力(受到鼓励)3.不能因困难就选择放弃(思想转折)4.深吸一口气,决心独自登台,为公益也为好友(做出决定)5.走向舞台,心中紧张却又无比坚定(迈向舞台)6.完美完成表演ThinkingfortheendingPara.2OnceIwasoffthestage,ashamed,mymomwrappedmeinabighug.1.她为我感到骄傲2.我告诉她我在台上是多么紧张几乎不能克服。3.母亲安慰我:“尽管如此,你还是做到了,你是最棒的。”4.Mareya打电话给我,告诉她一直在听我唱歌,她就知道我一定能做到5.演出获得巨大成功,收获了很多食物捐赠。我也明白了人只要踏出自己的舒适区一定会有别样的体验。读什么续什么Theboyrushedtothesea,tookoffhisclothesand

jumpedintothewater.男孩冲向大海,脱掉衣服,跳入水中。所做

sb.didsthanddidsthsb.didsth,doing(anddoing)done,sb.didsth,doing动作描写动作链,体现动作先后顺序公式1:谓语1,谓语2and谓语3读什么续什么△Havingworkedhardforamonth,sheattendedtheexamandpasseditsuccessfully.所做

sb.didsthanddidsthsb.didsth,doing(anddoing)done,sb.didsth,doing动作描写动作链,体现动作先后顺序公式1:谓语1,谓语2and谓语3公式2:Havingdone(动作1),谓语2and谓语3努力了一个月,她参加考试,顺利通过了。△Sheworkedhardforamonth,attendedtheexam,

andpasseditsuccessfully.读什么续什么△Sittingonthesubway,theoldmanstaredathisphone,knittinghisbrows.所做

sb.didsthanddidsthsb.didsth,doing(anddoing)done,sb.didsth,doing动作描写动作面,同一时间内发生多个动作公式1:谓语,doinganddoing(doing,谓语,doing)老人坐在地铁上,盯着手机,皱着眉头。△Theoldmansatonthesubway,staringathisphone

and

knittinghisbrows.读什么续什么所做

sb.didsthanddidsthsb.didsth,doing(anddoing)

done,sb.didsth,doing动作描写动作面,同一时间内发生多个动作公式1:谓语,doinganddoing公式2:done,谓语,doingEncouragedbytheteacher'swords,XiaoMingraised

hishand,exclaiming“Ivolunteer”.被老师的话鼓舞,小明举起了手,大声说“我来”读什么续什么1.他欣喜若狂,又唱又跳。(动作面)Hewasoverwhelmedwithjoy,singinganddancing.2.他坐在水池边,双臂低垂,思考今天吃点啥。(动作面)Hesatbesidethepool,armsdropping

and

wonderingwhattoeattoday.3.被生活折磨着,他艰难地前进,感到痛苦。(动作面)Tornbythetoughlife,heploddeddownthehall,feelingsorrowful.4.排了三个小时的队,他被告知票卖完了,感到非常绝望。(动作链)Havingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout,

feelingdesperate.Translatethefollowingsentences

读什么续什么Happinessseizedme.Suddenly,

astrongsenseofhappiness

seizedme.Asenseofhappiness

seizedme.我开心:Iwashappy.换主语:开心(的情绪)抓住了我加介短:一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我加副词:突然,一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我加时间状从:当我听到那好消息时,一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我公式1:asenseof情绪名词+seized+sb+when+句子Suddenly,

astrongsenseof

happinessseizedmewhenIheardthegoodnews.无灵主语+有灵动词情绪描写1读什么续什么情绪描写2△Hopelessandhelpless

,heraisedhishead,murmuring,“IamanxioustoreviewmathbutIdon’tknowhowtodo”.△Relievedanddelighted,hecalledhissisteraftertheexam,expressinghisjoyandgratitude.Readthesentencesandtrytosummarizethestructure.公式2:情绪adj1+情绪adj2,sbdosth,doingsth读什么续什么公式3:情绪adj+as

sb+was,

sbdidsth情绪描写3Translatethefollowingsentence.尽管很辛苦,Marc尽全力准备考试。Althoughhewasnearlywornout,hesparednoeffortstopreparefortheexam.Wornout

ashewas,读什么续什么情绪描写4△Withtearsrollingdownhisface,

hethankedhissisterinadelightedvoice.△Hethankedhissisterinadelightedvoice,withhisheartbeatingwithhappiness.Readthesentencesandtrytosummarizethestructure.公式4:With+n+非谓语,

sbdidsth读什么续什么1.当他看着一堆堆作业时,一股悔恨的情绪涌上心头。(无灵主语)Asenseofregretseizedhimwhenhesawloadsofhomework.2.感到紧张和害怕,他努力走上台,开始发表他的演讲。(adj1+adj2)Nervousandscared,hemanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.3.尽管有些担心,他勇敢面对挑战。(as)Worriedashewas,hefacedthechallengebravely.4.他眼里含着泪水笑着说“我做到了”。(with)Withhiseyesfulloftears,

hesmiled,“Imadeit.”Translatethefollowingsentences

读什么续什么万能升华灵魂顿悟式余音绕梁式情景交融式Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatmadesb.realize/understand...Haditnotbeenforthisexperience,sb.wouldhaveneverknownthat...Yearslater,lookingbacktothestory,sb.stillfeltitadj.,thinkingthat...Withthesunlightgreetingsb.gentlyandwarmly,sb.did...读什么续什么人际关系亲子---家庭关爱同辈---亦师亦友陌生---助人为乐师生---良师益友个人成长读什么续什么升华---亲情/友情模板句-亲情/友情亮点解析Theloveandclosenesssharedbyfamilymembers/friends

isareminderthatnomatterwhatchallengesweface,weareneveralone.

...sharedbyfamilymembers

非谓语做后置定语,修饰前面的名词

areminderthatnomatter...that引导同位语从句读什么续什么升华---助人为乐模板句-助人亮点解析Truehappinessandfulfillmentcanbefoundinthesimpleactofhelpingothersandmakingapositivedifferenceintheirlives.

fulfillment满足感

ma

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