Unit 4 Natural Disasters Reading for writing 课件 2022-2023学年高中英语人教版必修第一册

Unit4NaturaldisastersReadingforWriting:Writeasummary

Lookatthepictureandtitle,inferthetypeofthetextandpredictwhatthetextmightbeabout.

PredictionItisanewsreport.Itmightbeaboutthebigdamagethetsunamicaused.TsunamiWhatis“tsunami”?

Thegreatwaves“tsunami”

isaseriesoftravelingoceanwavesofextremelylonglengthgeneratedbyearthquakesoccurringbloworneartheocean,submarinelandslidesanderuptions.

新闻报道属于应用文体裁；包含六要素：人物who,事件what,时间when,地点where,原因why,过程how。

一般分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结语Whatisanewsreport?structureHeadlineleadbodyconclusionwhenwherewhowhatwhyPara.1Para.2Para.3detailsleadheadlinebodysummaryexplanation/summarydetailsandmoreinformationWhatmainpointscanweknowaccordingtothetitle?where,whatevent,effectReadtheleadWhatmainpointsarementionedinthelead?Howdoyouknow?(underlinetheinformationandcirclethekeyverbs.)Themostpowerfulearthquakeinthepast40yearscausedatsunamithatcrashedintocoastlinesacrossAsiayesterday,killingmorethan6500peopleinIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.causeeventwheneffectwhereTheDailyNewsbyRoberWoodhouseMonday,27December2004Paragraph1Themostpowerfulearth-quakeinthepast40yearscausedatsunamithatcrashedintocoastlinesacrossAsiayesterday,killingmorethan6,500peopleinIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.Fishermen,tourists,hotels,homes,andcarsweresweptawaybyhugewavescausedbythestrongcarthquakethatreachedamagnitudeof9.0.Theunderseaquakestruckaround7:00a.m,SundayoffthewestcoastofIndonesia'sSumatraIsland.Inthatareaalone,atleast1,870peoplewerekilled.过去40年来最强烈的地震引发的海啸昨天袭击了亚洲的海岸线，造成印度尼西亚、印度、泰国、马来西亚和至少四个其他国家的6500多人死亡。渔民、游客、酒店、住宅和汽车都被9.0级强烈地震引起的巨浪卷走了。这场海底地震发生在周日早上7点左右，印度尼西亚苏门答腊岛的西海岸。仅在那个地区，至少有1870人死亡。Mainidea:Time,place,eventOn27December2004atsunamikilled6,500peopleinSoutheastAsia.TimeEventPlaceDetailsParagraph2InSriLanka,some1,600kilometreswestofthequakecentre,thenumberofdeathsstoodat2,498,andonemillionmorewereaffectedbythetsunami,governmentofficialssaid.Indianofficialssaidasmanyas1,900hadbeenkilledalongthesoutherncoast.Another254werefounddeadinThailandand54inthreeothercountries.InsouthernThailand,1,900peoplewerehurtandmanymoreweremissing,localofficialssaid."Iwashavingbreakfastwithmythreechildrenwhenwaterstartedfillingmyhome.Wehadtoleaveeverythingandruntosafety,"saidChandraTheravit,alocalThaiwoman.政府官员说，在距离地震中心以西约1600公里的斯里兰卡，死亡人数为2498人，另有100万人受到海啸的影响。印度官员表示，南部海岸已有多达1900人丧生。另有254人在泰国被发现死亡，54人在其他三个国家被发现死亡。当地官员说，在泰国南部，1900人受伤，更多人失踪。“我正在和我的三个孩子吃早餐，这时家里开始进水。我们不得不放下一切，跑到安全的地方，”当地的泰国妇女钱德拉·塞拉维特说。Mainidea:damage：themissinganddeadThousandsofpeoplearemissinganddead.Details:tellingthenumberofpeoplemissinganddeadParagraph3Thousandsofpeoplearestillmissing,andthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrowevenhigheroverthenextfewdays.Foreignaidisbeingorganisedforthetsunami-hitcountries.However,dangerousconditionsanddamagedroadswillmakeitdifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies.成千上万的人仍然失踪，死亡人数预计在未来几天还会增加。正在为海啸受灾国家组织国际救援。然而，危险的条件和受损的道路将使运送食物和供应品变得困难。Mainidea:damageandeffect

Tousandsofpeoplearemissingandthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrow.Thedamagecausedbythetsunamimakesitdifficultforrescoueworkerstoprovideaid.ReadthesummaryofthenewsreportandcheckthemainpointsitincludeMainpointsinanewsreportWhat:

When:

Why:

Where:

How:Thetsunamicausedover6500peopledeathsandcausedgreatdamagetobuildings,carsandroads.On26December,2004,Thetsunamiwascausedbyapowerfulearthquake.InIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.Foreignaidisorganized,butsuppliesaredifficulttodeliverbecauseofthedamagedroads.1Whendidthetsunamihappen?2Whatcausedthetsunami?3Whywoulditbedifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies?Ithappenedaround7:00amSunday,26December2004.Averypowerfulearthquakeof9.0-magnitudewhichhappenedundertheseaoffthewestcoastofSumatraIslandinIndonesia.Becausedangerousconditionsanddamagedroadswouldmakeitdifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies.Summary:On26December2004,atsunamikilledmorethan6,500tourists,fishermen,andotherlocalsinSoutheastAsia.

Thousandsofpeoplearemissingandthenumberofdeaths

isexpectedtogrow.Thedamagecausedbythetsunamiis

makingitdifficultforrescueworkerstohelpthesurvivors.eventdateeffectplacefollowingeventsrescuework✓✓✓✓✓readthesummaryofthenewsreport&checkthemainpointsitincludedSummary

概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。

写作方法:1.定位——查找核心信息

通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息

在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性

核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。

writeasummaryforthetextonpage50.StepI.Readthetextandwritealistofthemaindetails.◎Strangethingshappenedinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake;◎Anearthquakehit_________Chinaon28July1976;◎________________________________________________________________________◎________________________________________________________________________◎____________________________________________________________________________________◎_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WritingasummaryTangshanThenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledorbadlyinjuredinthequakewasmorethan400,000;Nearlyeverythinginthecitywasdestroyed;Soldiersandmedicalworkerscametohelpthepeoplewhohadgreatlossandtotryandfindsurvivors;Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthecity'speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthquakeruins.

Organisetheideasanddraftyoursummary.SampleWriting

Forseveraldays,strangethingsoccurredinthecountrysideofnortheasternHebei.Then,on28July1976,anearthquakehit