Unit 1 The Changing World 变化的世界（单元写作精练）（解析版）

PAGE2Unit1TheChangingWorld.变化的世界单元写作精练【写作主题】本单元的话题是“变化的世界”，写作时应围绕着对比人或事物的过去与现在展开。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。[教材典句]①Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplace.②Theroadusedtobenarrowanddirty.③Thismadeitdifficultforlocalstobringproductstothemarketortodevelopindustry.④Thereusedtobesandstormsallthetime,andthefieldsweregettingsmallerandsmaller.【词汇积累】①inthepast在过去②atpresent目前；现在③yearsago多年前④takeplace发生⑤greatchanges巨大变化⑥liveabetterlife过上更好生活⑦keepupwith跟上⑧withthedevelopmentof随着……的发展⑨usedtodo过去常常做⑩nowadays如今；现今⑪becomemoreandmore变得越来越……⑫convenientandfast便捷又快速⑬wayoflife生活方式⑭makeprogress取得进步⑮bringmuchconvenience带来许多便利【句式积累】开头句Greatchangeshavetakenplaceintheworldaroundus.我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。Ourworldischangingfasterthaneverbefore.我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。Ifwecomparethepastwiththepresent,wecanseemanydifferences.对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。Timesarechangingandourlifehaschangedalot.时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。Withtimegoingby,theworldhaschangedgreatly.随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。中间句Peopleusedtogooutonfootorbybike.人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。Nowmorepeoplechoosecarsandhigh-speedtrainstotravel.如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。Inthepast,peoplecommunicatedbyletters.过去人们靠书信交流。Nowadayswechatonlineanytimeandanywhere.如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。Lifewassimplebuthardmanyyearsago.多年前生活简单却很艰苦。Atpresent,ourlifeismuchmorecomfortableandconvenient.现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。Technologymakesourdailylifemucheasier.科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。Ourhometownlooksquitedifferentfromwhatitwasbefore.我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。People’slifestylehaschangedcompletelyovertheyears.这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。Therapiddevelopmentbringsusbothadvantagesandnewchallenges.快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。结尾句I’mproudofthegreatchangesinourworld.我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。Ibelieveourworldwillbecomeevenbetterinthefuture.我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。Weshouldacceptchangesandkeeplearningallthetime.我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。Changesmakeourlifecolorfulandmeaningful.变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。Astheworldchanges,wealsoneedtoimproveourselves.世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。【原题呈现】（25-26九年级上·河南驻马店·期中）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华,你校英语俱乐部正以“TheGreatChangesinMyHometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示：要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；(3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Myhometownhaschangedgreatlytheseyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题构思】写作步骤【第一步：审题立意】确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时明确要点：过去和现在的环境状况，对家乡美好未来的期待确定人称：第一人称（I/my）注意事项：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称【第二步：构思布局】三段式结构：开头段：开门见山，点明核心主题——家乡近些年发生巨大的变化主体段：今昔对比，描述过去落后的环境状况和现在家乡环境改善后的结果结尾段：展望未来，表达对家乡变得更加美丽和生活更加美好的期待【范文欣赏】Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Myhometownhaschangedgreatlytheseyears.Inthepast,theroadswerenarrowanddirty,andtheairwasn’tfresh.Therewerefewtrees,sobirdsseldomcame.Butnow,everythinghaschanged!Theroadshavebecomecleanandwide,withcolorfulflowersonbothsides.We’veplantedmanytrees,andtheairisfreshagain.Birdssinginthegreenparkseverymorning.Inthefuture,Ihopemyhometownwillbemorebeautiful.Maybewe’llhavemorebikepathstoprotecttheenvironment.Factorieswillusecleanenergy,andriverswillbeclearer.Ibelieve“greenmountainsaregoldmountains”willcometruehere!Let’sworktogethertomakeithappen.【亮点解析】要点一：过去的环境theroadswerenarrowanddirty/theairwasn’tfresh/Therewerefewtrees/birdsseldomcame/Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere等要点二：现在的环境Theroadshavebecomecleanandwide/withcolorfulflowersonbothsides/We’veplantedmanytrees/theairisfreshagain/Birdssinginthegreenparkseverymorning/Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversarecleanerandtheskyisbluer等要点三：未来的展望美好期望：Ihopemyhometownwillbemorebeautiful/Ihopeourlivingenvironmentwillgetmuchbetter等提出建议：Maybewe’llhavemorebikepathstoprotecttheenvironment/Factorieswillusecleanenergy/riverswillbeclearer/wewillsetupmorecommunitygardens等信心表达：Ibelieve“greenmountainsaregoldmountains”willcometruehere/Ibelievethefutureofmyhometownwillbebetterandbetter等发出呼吁：Let’sworktogethertomakeithappen/Let’stakesmallactionstogethertoprotectourlovelyhometown等【基础必做】一、高分句式训练。1.教材原句：Thereusedtobesandstormsallthetime,andthefieldsweregettingsmallerandsmaller.仿写：过去我的家乡有很多野生动物。_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thereusedtobemanywildanimalsinmyhometown.2.教材原句：Havethesechangesgreatlyimprovedyourlives?仿写：自从你来中国以后，你学习中国文化了吗？_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HaveyoulearnedaboutChineseculturesinceyoucametoChina?3.教材原句：Inthepast,itwasdifficulttotravelinGuizhou.仿写：那一刻他很难作出选择。_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Itwasdifficultforhimtomakeachoiceatthatmoment.4.教材原句：Ittook10hourstogettoNairobifromMombasabytrain.仿写：我每天乘公共汽车回家要花半个小时。_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ittakesmehalfanhourtogohomebybuseveryday5.教材原句：...,andthepeoplewholiveherehavebecomerich.仿写：你认识独居的那个老妇人吗？_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Doyouknowtheoldwomanwholivesalone?二、句子升级。1.It’sanencouragingachievement.（升格为感叹句）_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whatanencouragingachievement(itis)!2.Ourcountryhasturnedmanysandyareasintogreenland.Ourcountryhastakentheleadinmakingtheworldgreener.（用“notonly...butalso...”升格）_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Notonlyhasourcountryturnedmanysandyareasintogreenland,butithasalsotakentheleadinmakingtheworldgreener.3.Welookbackatthepast.Thenwecantrulyrealizehowmuchourmotherlandhasachieved.（用onlywhen引导的条件状语从句进行倒装升格）_______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onlywhenwelookbackatthepastcanwetrulyrealizehowmuchourmotherlandhasachieved.【提升必做】1．假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“ChangesinMyHometown”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。要求：文中不得透露个人真实信息；可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。ChangesinMyHometownChangeshavegreatlytakenplaceinmyhometowninrecentyears.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ChangesinMyHometownChangeshavegreatlytakenplaceinmyhometowninrecentyears.First,theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.Streetsarewideandcleanwithmanytreesandflowersonbothsides.Tallbuildingsandnewcommunitieshaveappeared.Peopleenjoywalkingintheparksafterdinner.Second,people’sliveshasimprovedalot.Morefamilieshavetheirowncars,sotravellingiseasierthanbefore.Somefamiliesevendrivetovisitothercitiesonweekends.Ifeelproudofthesechanges.Ihopemyhometownwillbecomemorebeautifulinthefuture.Let’sworktogethertomakeitbetter.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：讲稿（文体为应用文），以一般现在时为主明确要点：环境变化（宽阔洁净的道路、花草树木、高楼与新社区）、居民生活变化（更多家庭拥有私家车，出行更便捷）确定人称：第一人称（I/we）注意事项：词数80左右[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：总起句，概括家乡近些年发生了巨大变化主体段：分别介绍环境变化与居民生活改善两大板块结尾段：总结感受，展望家乡更美好的未来[第三步：要点展开]要点一：整体环境变化环境改变：theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter/theenvironmentismorepleasant/ourhometownlooksgreener道路样貌：streetsarewideandclean/roadsbecomesmoother/streetsarelinedwithplants建筑变化：tallbuildingsandnewcommunitieshaveappeared/newhousingareasarebuilt/moremodernbuildingsstandhere居民休闲：enjoywalkingintheparksafterdinner/takeawalkaftermeals/dosportsinpublicparks要点二：人们的生活变化出行条件：morefamilieshavetheirowncars/morepeopleownprivatecars/manyfamiliesbuyfamilycars生活便利：travellingiseasierthanbefore/tripsbecomemoreconvenient/it’ssimplertogoout休闲拓展：drivetovisitothercitiesonweekends/goonroadtripsatweekends/traveltonearbytownsbycar2．请以GreatChangesinMyHometown为题，根据以下提示介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。1.过去：道路狭窄，出行不便，生活简单；2.现在：道路宽阔，交通便利，环境优美，科技让生活更便捷；3.谈谈你的感受与展望。词数：100词左右提示词：narrow,convenient,becoveredwith,high-tech,digitalpayment注意:1.表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥；2.词数100词左右。3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。GreatChangesinMyHometown_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GreatChangesinMyHometownGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninrecentyears.Inthepast,theroadsherewerenarrowandbumpy.Peoplehadinconvenienttrafficandlivedasimpleandplainlifewithfewentertainmentways.However,thingsaretotallydifferentnow.Thestreetsbecomewideandsmooth,makingourtravelveryconvenient.Thewholetowniscoveredwithgreentreesandcolorfulflowers,creatingabeautifulenvironment.Besides,high-techproductsmakeourlifemucheasier.Wecanfinishshoppinganddailybillseasilywithdigitalpaymentanytime.Ifeelproudoftheseamazingchanges.Ibelievemyhometownwillbecomeevenmorewonderfulinthefuture.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：话题作文，一般现在时为主辅以一般过去时和一般将来时明确要点：家乡的过去，家乡的现在，自己的感受和对未来的展望确定人称：第一人称注意事项：100词左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校、地名等信息[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：开篇点题，指出家乡近些年发生巨变主体段：详细介绍家乡的过去和现在结尾段：表达自己的感受以及对未来的期望[第三步：要点展开]要点一：家乡的过去描述过去：theroadsherewerenarrowandbumpy/hadinconvenienttraffic/livedasimpleandplainlife/withfewentertainmentways/technologicallybackward等要点二：家乡的现在描述现在：streetsbecomewideandsmooth/makingourtravelveryconvenient/iscoveredwithgreentreesandcolorfulflowers/creatingabeautifulenvironment/high-techproductsmakeourlifemucheasier/finishshoppinganddailybillseasily/withdigitalpayment/has‌betterenvironment‌/easieraccesstoinformation等要点三：自己的感受和对未来的展望自己的感受：feelproudoftheseamazingchanges/lovemyhometown/feelhappy等展望未来：willbecomeevenmorewonderful/willbecomemorebeautiful等3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony即将来安徽研学，他特意写信询问安徽的特色与近年变化。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封回信。要点:1.家乡特色:一处代表性景点（如黄山/三河古镇）、一种特色文化（如黄梅戏/文房四宝）；2.近年变化:交通更便利（地铁/高铁）、环境更优美（公园增多/天更蓝）；3.发出邀请:期待见面，愿意做他的向导。注意:1.书信需包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearTony,I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoAnhuiforstudytoursoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtomeetingyousoon!Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearTony,I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoAnhuiforstudytoursoon.Anhuiisagreatplacewithwonderfulviewsandrichculture.Huangshanisfamousforitsstrangerocksandbeautifulclouds.AndHuangmeiOperaissopopularthatmanypeopleloveitdeeply.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceheretheseyears.Wehavemorehigh-speedtrainsandsubways,makingtripsmucheasier.Therearealsomorebeautifulparks,andtheskyisclearerthanbefore.I’dlovetobeyourguideandshowyouaroundwhenyoucome.I’msureyouwillsurelyhaveagreattimehere.Lookingforwardtomeetingyousoon!Yours,LiHua【详解】[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：这是一篇书信作文，以一般现在时为主，现在完成时为辅明确要点：介绍安徽的特色和近年变化（特色：景点黄山、特色文化黄梅戏；变化：交通更便利、环境更优美）确定人称：第一人称（I）为主注意事项：不提及真实姓名和校名，80-100词，语气自然[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：总领全文，表达对笔友要来安徽研学的欢迎（已给出）主体段：分别介绍家乡特色以及近年的改变——景点黄山、特色文化黄梅戏、交通更便利、环境更优美，适当增加细节结尾段：发出邀请，表达期待见面[第三步：要点展开]要点一：表达欢迎：I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoAnhuiforstudytoursoon.等要点二：安徽特色和近年变化安徽特色：Anhuiisagreatplacewithwonderfulviewsandrichculture.Huangshanisfamousforitsstrangerocksandbeautifulclouds.AndHuangmeiOperaissopopularthatmanypeopleloveitdeeply.等近年变化：Greatchangeshavetakenplaceheretheseyears.Wehavemorehigh-speedtrainsandsubways,makingtripsmucheasier.Therearealsomorebeautifulparks,andtheskyisclearerthanbefore.等要点三：发出邀请，表达期待：I’dlovetobeyourguideandshowyouaroundwhenyoucome.I’msureyouwillsurelyhaveagreattimehere.等4．马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“TheChangesinMyHometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。TheChangesinMyHometownInrecentyears,myhometownhasgreatchanges.Nowletmesharesomewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案TheChangesinMyHometownInrecentyears,myhometownhashadgreatchanges.Nowletmesharesomewithyou.Theenvironmenthaschangedalot.Thehousesarenewerandbrighter,andtheroadsarewideandcleanwithbeautifulflowersonbothsides.Asforpeople,theyliveahappierlife.Theyaremoreconfidentandkind.Ourfarmproductsarerichandsellwellonline,bringingmoremoneytous.Iamproudofthesechanges.Ilovemyhometownandhopeitwillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意］确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主明确要点：人们的变化、房屋道路的变化、农产品变化、个人感受确定人称：第一人称（李华）注意事项：不得透露真实人名和校名，内容积极向上[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：总起句，引出家乡变化（已给出）主体段：分点描述人们、房屋道路、农产品的具体变化结尾段：表达感受与展望，升华主题[第三步：要点展开]要点一：people变化描述：happier/moreconfident/kinder/morehardworking/moreunited等具体表现：wearnicerclothes/smilemoreoften/helpeachother/worktogether/liveabetterlife等要点二：houses,roads房屋变化：newer/brighter/taller/morebeautiful/modern等道路变化：wider/cleaner/smoother/linedwithtrees/withstreetlights等位置/环境描述：onbothsidesoftheroad/infrontofhouses/aroundthevillage等要点三：farmproducts产品种类：rice/fruits/vegetables/tea/honey/flowers等销售方式：sellwellonline/shippedtobigcities/soldinsupermarkets/exportedabroad等带来好处：bringmoremoney/improvelivingstandards/makefarmersproud等要点四：yourfeelings感受词汇：proud/happy/excited/hopeful/thankful/amazed等5．请以“ChangesaroundMe”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校论坛投稿，讲讲近几年发生在你身边的变化。包含以下要点：changesinthepastnowhometownquiet,small,…popular,Internet-famouscity…thewayIstudytextbook,dictionarystudyappssuchas…myself……注意：1.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息；3.词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。ChangesaroundMeTimefliesandgreatchangeshavetakenplacearoundmeovertheyears.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ChangesaroundMeTimefliesandgreatchangeshavetakenplacearoundmeovertheyears.First,myhometownhaschangedalot.Itusedtobeaquietandsmalltown,butnowithasbecomeapopularInternet-famouscity.Manytouristscometovisititeveryyear.Second,thewayIstudyisdifferent.Inthepast,Ionlyusedtextbooksandpaperdictionaries.Now,IusestudyappssuchasBilibilitolearnnewthings,whichismoreconvenient.Finally,Iusedtobeshy,butnowIammoreconfidentandactive.Ibelievethesechangesmakeourlifebetter.【详解】写作步骤[第一步：审题立意]确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时和现在时为主，讲述身边的变化明确要点：从家乡、学习方式、自身三个方面对比过去与现在的变化确定人称：第一人称（I）注意事项：词数80左右，不透露真实信息，语言流畅

[第二步：构思布局]三段式结构：开头段：总起点明身边发生了巨大变化主体段：分别从家乡、学习方式、个人三个角度对比过去与现在的变化结尾段：总结变化让生活更美好

[第三步：要点展开]要点一：家乡变化过去：quietandsmalltown/oldnarrowroads现在：popularInternet-famouscity/tallbuildingsandwidestreets要点二：学习方式变化过去：onlyusedtextbooksandpaperdictionaries/borrowedbooksfromthelibrary现在：usestudyappstolearnnewthings/attendonlineclasses要点三：个人变化过去：shyandquiet/afraidtospeakinpublic现在：moreconfidentandactive/takepartinclassdiscussions要点四：总结启发启发：thesechangesmakeourlifebetter/weshouldkeepupwiththetimes6．假如你校英文报发起了一项以