读后续写如何表达恐惧背默与仿写（词-句-文）讲义-解析版

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专题13读后续写如何表达恐惧背诵与仿写（词•句•文）讲义

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晨读背诵区：背诵迁移举一反三

一、晨读素材.必背单词

1.恐惧类形容词：

初阶terrible可怕的；糟糕的horrible使人恐惧的afraid害怕的；担心的frightening令人恐惧的fearful

恐惧的frightened害怕的；受惊的pale苍白的horrifying令人恐惧的scared害怕的scary使人惊

慌的

panicked惊恐的alarmed惊恐的；忧虑的alarming使人惊恐的terrified需怕的terrifying令人害

高阶怕的panic-stricken被惊恐袭击的terror-siricken被恐惧袭击的open-moulhed张大嘴的

tongue-tied说不出话的;结舌的frozen僵住的sweaty出汗的speechless无语的

2.恐惧类名词:

初阶fear恐惧、担心concern担心terror/horror恐怖

高阶panic惊恐dread恐惧fright害怕

3.恐惧类动词:

初阶fear害怕frighten害怕shake/trcmblc颤抖scare惊吓、害怕

高阶dread恐惧frown皱眉horrify使震惊，使感到恐怖panic使恐惧

二、晨读素材•高级语块

1.faceturnspale脸色变白

2.scare...todeath把……吓死

3.fearcreepsoversb.感到害怕

4.beseizedwithpanic惊慌失措

5.inpanic/terror害怕地、恐惧地

6.behalfdeadwithfear吓得半死

7.heartbeatviolently心跳得厉害

8.fromhead(ocoe全身颤抖

9.chokewithfear因为害怕而哽咽

10freeze/befrozenwithfear吓呆/吓傻

11shakc/trcmblcwithfcar/tcrror吓得发抖

12bescaredoutofone'swits吓得魂不附体

13aCloudoffcaiwellsupinsb从心底感到害怕

14standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡

15.shakealloverinacoldsweat浑身发抖，冒冷汗

三、晨读素材•佳句赏析

1.Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中充满恐惧。

2.Fearsqueezedherheart.恐惧攫住了她的心。

3.Hisfacewasdeadwithfright.他吓得面无人色。

4.Herhandswereshakingwithfear.她吓得双手颤抖。

5.AHoodoffearwelledupinhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。

6.Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。

7.[wasseized/overwhelmedbyasenseofhorror.我害怕极了。

8.Fearfloodedoverher,makinghershakeallover.她吓得浑身发抖。

9.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.我浑身发抖,手心都出汗了。

10Cottledashedin,lookingpanic-stricken.科特尔先生冲了进来，看上去惊慌失措。

11Mylegswereshakingandmyheartwaspoundingrapidly.我的腿在颤抖,心在砰砰跳。

12Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到这可怕的景象,我感觉

我的血液都凝固起来。

13Atthesightoftheferociouswolf.Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.当看到那只凶恶的

狼机我吓呆了，不敢动弹

14Anideaofbeingleftaloneinthedarkbighousemadeherhairstandonend.她一想到要独自留在那

所黑暗的大房子里,就毛骨悚然。

15Aburstofhorrorheldmetotallyinitspower,andIwasunable(omoveaninch.恐惧喷薄而出,将我

紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了。

测试反馈区：分级测试步步为赢

一、晚练•高频语块汉译英

1.脸色变白______________________

2.把……吓死______________________

3.感到害怕______________________

4.惊慌失措______________________

5.害怕地、恐惧地______________________

6.吓得半死______________________

7.心跳得厉害______________________

8.全身颤抖______________________

9.因为害怕哽咽______________________

10.吓呆/吓傻______________________

11.吓得发抖______________________

12.吓得魂不阳体______________________

13从心、底感至U害怕____________________

14.吓得呆若木鸡____________________

15.浑身发抖冒冷汗___________________

【参考答案】

l.faceturnspale脸色变白

Z.scare...todeath把...吓死

3.fearcreepsoversb.感到害怕

4.beseizedwithpanic惊慌失措

5.inpanic/terror害怕地、恐惧地

6.behalfdeadwithfear吓得半死

7.heartbeatviolently心跳得厉害

8.fromheadtotoe全身颤抖

9.chokewithfear因为害怕而哽咽

lO.freeze/befrozenwithfear吓呆/吓傻

1Lshake/tremblewithfear/terror吓得发抖

12.bescaredoutofone'swits吓得魂不附体

13.afloodoffearwelisupinsb从心底感到害怕

14.standrootedtothespotwithfear吓得呆若木鸡

15.shakealloverinacoldsweat浑身发抖，冒冷汗

二、晚练•佳句赏析汉译英

I.他心中充满恐惧。（flood）

2.恐惧攫住了她的心。(squeeze)

3.他吓得面无人色。(fright)

4她吓得双手颤抖。(shake)

5.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。(well)

6.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。(creep)

7.我害怕极了。(overwhelm)

8.她吓得浑身发抖。(flood)

9我浑身发抖,手心都出汗了。(tremble)

10.科特尔先生冲了进来，看上去惊慌失措。(dash)

11.我的腿在颤抖，心在砰砰跳。（pound）

12.看到这可怕的景象，我感觉我的血液都凝固起来。（freeze）

13.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。（scared）

14她•想到要独自留在那所黑暗的大房子里,就毛骨悚然。（end）

15.恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了。（burst）

【参考答案】

1.Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中充满恐惧。

2.Fearsqueezedherheart.恐惧攫住了她的心。

3.Hisfacewasdeadwithfright.他吓得面无人色。

4.Herhandswereshakingwithfear.她吓得双手颤抖。

5.Afloodoffearwelledupinhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。

6.Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。

7.Iwasseized/overwhelmedbyasenseofhorror.我害怕极了。

8.Fearfloodedoverher,makinghershakeallover.她吓得浑身发抖。

9.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。

10Cottledashedin,lookingpanic-stricken.科特尔先生冲了进来，看上去惊慌失措。

11Mylegswereshakingandmyheartwaspoundingrapidly.我的腿在颤抖,心在砰砰跳。

12Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到这可怕的景象,我感觉

我的血液都凝固起来。

13Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.当看到那只凶恶的

狼也我吓呆了，不敢动弹。

14Anideaofbeingleftaloneinthedarkbighousemadeherhairstandonend.她-想到要独自留在那

所黑喑的大房子里,就毛骨悚然。

15.Aburstofhorrorheldmetotallyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.恐惧喷薄而出>将我

紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了。

仿写实战区：模仿借鉴学以致用

一、读后续写情景运用一单句

A）“脱险”主题卜的“恐惧、惊恐请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把卜面的语篇补充完整。

Suddenly,thebaseofthepoleburstintoflames!Diaz1（shiver）withachilloffear.He

knewitcarriedthousandsofvolts（伏特）.Hethoughtofhiswifeandfive-year-oldsonathome.2

（他的心猛地一颤，独十主格）.“RutIcan'tleaveherhere,"herhonght.inaflashhe

3（忍住恐惧）andsteppedtowardRena.Ashedid,thepowerfulcurrentstunghis

feet.Buthedidn'tstop.

【参考答案】

1.shivered

2.hisheartgivingahorriblejolt

3.swallowedhisfear

B）“被猛兽追赶”主题下的“恐惧、惊恐”。请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。

Asthepolarbearapproached,Istoppeddead.4（恐惧万分，无灵主语句）.1

turnedtomywife,and5（看见了她惊恐、煞白的脸）."Comeon,run,run!"I

yelled,6（声音里含着无法抑制的恐惧，形容词短语作状语）。I

triedtopullheraway,butshecouldn'tmove,7（嘴巴惊恐地张得老

大，独立主格）

【参考答案】

4.Fearfloodedoverme

5.sawherscaredwhiteface

6.unabletokeepthefearoutofmyvoice

7.hermouthopenwithterror

二、读后续写情景运用一段落

请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledand

bitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

__________________1____________________L恐惧喷薄而出，将我紧紧包围，我已经寸步难行了）.

2（惊恐不已.我觉得两腿发抖.手心冒汗）.Besidemewasmy

wife,whowasrootedto（heground,3（吓呆了）.At（hesight

ofthepolarbear'sbloodymouth,4（吓得要死）.Thefurry

creaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.

5csight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandI

triedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgun

shellsintotheair.

【参考答案】

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledand

bitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedal（hewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhoirorheldme

entirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.ExtremelyfriRhtened/i）anickcdJfeltmyIces

tremblingandmvpalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,^howasrootedtotheuroundXrozenwith

fear.Atthesightofthepolarbear'sbloodymouth,shewasnearlydeadwithfriqht.Thefurrycreature

launchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wcfeltthattheblondincur

bodycooled/frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatsti/htenedandourkneesfeltweak.

RlliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthehear,hitpotshard,andfiredblank

shotgunshellsintotheair.

三、读后续写情景运用一语篇

1.（24-25•河南焦作・开学考试）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

OncetherewasaslavenamedAndrocles,whowassobadlytreatedbyhismasterthatheresolvedtorunaway

fromhim.Hethereforesecretlylefthismaster'shouseandhidhimselfinaforest,somemilesdistantfromthe

city.

Afterwanderingaboutforsometime,hecametoalargecave,andovercomebyhungerandtiredness,helay

downinit,andsoonfellfastasleep.

Hewassuddenlyawakenedbytheroarofawildbeast;agreatlionstoodrightatthemouthofthecave.Therewas

nowayhecouldescape!

Androclcsexpectednothingelsethantobeatoncetorntopieces,buttohisgreatsurprise,thelioncamegently

towardshim,withoutshowinganysignsofanger.Itgaveforthalowandmournful（悲哀的）sound,asifitwere

beggingfbrhisassistance.Asthelionapproachedhim.henoticed（hatoneofitsfeetwasswollen.

He（henwentuptothelion,tookholdofthewoundedpaw（爪子）andexamineditasasurgeonwouldexaminea

patient.Hewasnotlonginfindingoutthecauseoftheswelling,lorhesawintheballofthefootaverylarge

thorn（刺）.Theslavepulledoutthethorn,andpressedoutofthewoundaquantityofmatter,whichgavethelion

immediaterelief.

Then,thelionbegantoshowhisgratitudebyeverymeansinhispower.Hejumpedaboutlikeaplayfulspaniel

（匪班牙猎犬），waggedhisgreattail,andlickedthehandsandfeetofhisphysician.FromthatmomentAndrocles

becamehisguest;thelionalwayssharedhisprey.

Theslavecontinuedtolivelikethisforseveralmonths.Atlength,wanderingcarelesslythroughthewoods,he

wasseizedbyacompanyofsoldierswhoweresentbythemastertosearchforhim.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

Hewassentencedtobetornbyalioninthepublicarena（竞技场）.

Paragraph2:

However,theliondidn'tactasmosthadimagined.

【答案】

Hewassentencedtobetornbyalioninthepublicarena.Sittingatthecornerofarena,Androcleswas

overcomebyastrongsenseoffearanddespair,withhisheartbeatingwildly.Whenthelionwasreleased

fromthecage,丁thiindorciisAnnlTi1*。hurstcutfrcmfhpAiidipncp.“Thereisnowaycut!”Hesigheddeeply,

thelastRlcamoflightfadingawayinhiseves.Takingadeepbreath,Androclesstoodupandwalkedtohis

enemywithslowandheavysteps.

Howevei;theliondidn'tactasmosthadimagined.Noroaring,nofighting,notevenasignofanger.Itseemed

thatthelionhadforgottenitsmissionasabeast.uGo!Go!Eathim!”TheaudiencekeptveHin?crazily.Muchto

theirsurprise,thelionvvaHsedhis?ruattaileenUyatAndroclesandlickedhis能et."It'syou!MyfYiend!”

Androclescriedinrelief.At(heverymoment,(helioncarriedhimonhisback,stomedoutofthearenaand

disappearedinthedistance.

【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。

【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作从前有一个名叫安卓可利斯的奴隶，他受到主人的虐待，决定从主人

那里逃走。因此，他偷偷地离开了他主人的家，躲在一个森林里。在森林中他遇到了一个受伤的狮子，并

帮狮子处理伤口，狮子非常的感谢安卓可利斯。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他被判处在公共竞技场被狮子撕咬，所以应该写他在被送到竞技场后

他的无助。要详细描述安卓可利斯的无助和失望以及对自己无处可逃，没有生还机会的内心的挣扎等。第

二段开头是：然而，狮子并没有像大多数人想象的那样行动。本段应该写狮子的反常，安卓可利斯对发现

这正是自己在森林里所救的狮子的惊讶以及狮子带着自己的救命恩人逃跑。

续写时要求注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：besentencedto,burstout,fadeaway,take

adeepbreath,muchtotheirsurprise,inrelief等高级词汇；非谓语动词Androcleswasovercomebyastrong

senseoffearanddespair,withhisheartbeatingwildly.时间状语从句Whenthelionwasreleasedfromthecage,a

thunderousapplauseburstoutfromtheaudience.

金句再练

1.安德罗克勒斯被强烈的恐惧和绝望感所征服，他的心疯狂地跳动着。

2.他深深地叹了口气，最后一丝光芒在他眼中渐渐消失。

3.深吸一口气，安德罗克勒斯站了起来，用缓慢而沉重的步伐走向敌人。

4.令他们大吃一惊的是，狮子轻轻地向安德罗克勒斯摇了摇尾巴，舔了舔他的脚。

5.就在这时,狮子背着他，冲出了竞技场，消失在远处。

参考答案

1.安德罗克勒斯被强烈的恐惧和绝望感所征服，他的心疯狂地跳动着。

Sittingatthecornerofarena,Androcleswasovercomebyastrongsenseoffearanddespair,withhisheart

beatingwildly.

2.他深深地叹了口气，最后一丝光芒在他眼中渐渐消失。深吸一口气，安德罗克勒斯站了起来，用缓慢而

沉重的步伐走向敌人C

Hesigheddeeply,thelastgleamoflightfadingawayinhiseyes.

3.深吸一口气，安德罗克勒斯站了起来，用缓慢而沉重的步伐走向敌人。

Takingadeepbreath,Androclesstoodupandwalkedtohisenemywithslowandheavysteps.

4.令他们大吃一惊的是，狮子轻轻地向安德罗克勒斯摇了摇尾巴，舔了舔他的脚。

Muchtotheirsurprise,thelionwaggedhisgreattailgentlyatAndroclesandlickedhisfeet.

5.就在这时，狮子背着他，冲出了竞技场，消失在远处。

Attheverymoment,thelioncarriedhimonhisback,stormedoutofthearenaanddisappearedinthe

distance.

2.（24-25•山西太原•开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完

整的短文。

Imustadmit,Ihaven'talwayslikedanimals.Infact,Idistrustedthemgreatlywhilegrowingup,andIstillfear

theonesIdon'tknowpersonally.Whatsetmybeliefsinstonewasbeingattacked—notoncebutmanytimes,

including（hesummeraftersecondgradewhenIwasbittenbyarabbit.Then,whenIwasnineandridingmydirt

bikedowntheroad,alargedogchargedmeandtriedtobitemyankle.Afterallthosenegativeexperiences,there

wasonething1knewforsure:Allcreatures,greatandsmall,werenofriendsofmine.

AftercollegeinCalifornia,IreturnedtolivethesinglelifeinLasVega.ThenImetLisa.Innotimeatall,wefell

inlove,marriedandmovedintoanewhouse.Despitemyavoidanceofanimals,LisahadadogcalledBailey.

Baileydidn'tlikeme,buthetoleratedmyexistenceonceherealizedIwasn'tgoinganywhere.

Thingschangedasspringcame.Wcwelcomedanewmemberofourfamily:oursonEvan.OneeveningEvan

grabbedholdofthedog'stail.Theirritateddogpausedandturnedtolookathisstucktailbutwaitedpatiently

untilbeingreleased.Stillthestoriesrdheardofanimalsattackingbabiesworriesme.

Thenmyworstfearoccurred.Isatonthecouch（沙发）readingafteralongdaywhilemywifeworkedatthe

dining-roomtabicpayingthebills.1sawEvancrawlacrossthefamily-roomcarpetashemadehiswaybehindthe

couch.Oneminute,allwasquietandthenBaileyenteredtheroomandheadedtowhereEvanhadcrawled.1

nearlyjumpedoutofmyskinwhenIheardthedogstartafearfulbarkingbehindme.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Throwingthebookaway,Irushedaroundthecouchwithgreatfear.

Havingwitnessedourdogkillingascorpion（蝎了）andsavingmyson,/wasspeechless.

【满分范文】

Throwingthebookaway,Irushedaroundthecouchwithgreatfear.Thedamndogwasbarkingdirectlyatahuge

scorpioninfrontofEvan'schin.Evanlayonhisbelly,hisheadheldhigh,frozeninfrightasBaileycontinued

tobarkatfullvolumemereinchesaway.Thehugescorpionhaditstailupandwaspreparedtostrike.Without

hesitation,thedogrushedtoattackthescorpionandkilleditwithonebite.Itwassuchaclosecall.Lisascooped

upourcryingchild.

Havingwitnessedourdogkillingascorpion（蜗子）andsavingmyson,Iwasspeechless.Unconsciously,tears

rolleddownmycheek.Withoutworryandfearanylonger,Ikneltdownandgavethatbravedogsome

kisses.Baileyseemedtohavefullyunderstoodmyfeeling,helayinmyarmstocomfortme.Ilwasacrucial

mcmentwhichshowedhowbothhumanandbeastcanliveinharmony.Ihadanewbeliefinlove.Icisthatsome

animalsarehuman'sgoodfriendsindeed.

【导语】本文以情感发展为线索展开，讲述了作者从小不喜欢个动物，但是在儿子遇险，宠物狗保护了作

者的儿子之后，作者终于相信人却动物之间也有爱。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“扔掉了书，我非常害怕地绕过沙发冲了过去。可知，笫一段可描写作者绕过沙发冲

过去，准备制止并责骂Bailey,却发现地上有个蝎子冲着儿子爬过去，Bailey勇敢地冲上去，一口把它咬

死了。

②由第二段首句内容“亲眼看见我们的宠物狗咬死了蝎子救了我儿子，我无话可说。”可知，第二段可描写

作者被Bailey的行动感动了，并相信人和动物之间也有爱。

2.续写线索：看见大蝎子——Evan害怕——蝎子准备进攻——Bailey把它咬死——流泪——吻

Bailey------Bailey依偎作者----感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①冲：rushed/raced/hurried

②进攻：strike/attack/charge

③展示出：showed/displayed

情绪类

①吓得僵住了：frozeninfright/frozeninterror

②千钧一发：aclosecall/anarrowescape

［点睛］［高分句型l］Evanlayonhisbelly,hisheadheldhigh,frozeninfrightasBaileycontinued:obarkatfull

volumemereinchesaway.（独立主格结构）

［高分句型2］Ilis山alsomeauimaharchunian'sguudfiicndsindeed（表语从句）

3.（2023上•河北邢台・高三校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

Ourflightdidn'tleaveuntilSundaynight,soIworkedasusualduringthedayonSunday,playingthepiano

duringbrunchatagolfresortlocateddowninthevalley.Ilovedmyjobandmycustomers,mastofwhom

fai:hfullydinedeverySunday.

Thatmorning,Tdtoldmycustomers（hatmysweetdaughterhadloanedmemoneyforanairlineticketsoIcould

flyoutwithherandmygrandchildrentoseemyfatherforwhatwebelievedwouldbethelasttime.

Oneofmyfavcritecnstomi?rscameoverbeforesheleftandgavenieahugehug.Intheprocess,sheslippedahill

inmyhandinsteadofdroppingitinmytipbasket.Hervoicesoundedserious.t4Thisisfbryourtrip.It'snottopay

billsandnottopayyourdaughterfbrtheplaneticket.^^

MyeyeswateredasIstaredatthefifty-dollarbillinmyhand."Thankyou,butIcan,tacceptthis.It?swaytoo

muchmoney.”

EverySunday,thiswomanleftmeamorethan-generoustip,butthisseemedtoomuch.WhenIrefusedthebill

andtriedtohanditback,shegentlypushedawaymyhand."Iknowyou'llfindtheperfectusefbrit.Havefun.

I'llseeyouwhenyougetback.”

Iwasstrugglingtomakeendsmeet,sothatextrafiftywouldhavecomeinhandyfbrbillsorgroceries.Yetmy

customer'swordskeptechoing（重复）throughmyhead.Aftertalkingitoverwithmyhusband,heagreed.1

shouldtakethefiftywithmeandhonormycustomer'swishes.

Ourplanetookofflate,andwhenwelanded,mydaughterandIdashedthroughtheairportwithtwoyoung

children,terrifiedofmissingourconnectingflight.

Whenwefinallyreachedourgate,Ispottedayoungmotherwithtearsstreamingdownherfacesearchingthrough

hercarry-onbags,obviouslylosingsomething.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Iwalkedoverandputmyarmaroundher.

Igrabbedthewoman'shandandslippedherthemoney.

【满分范文】

Iwalkedoverandputmyamiaroundher.MAreyouokay?CanIhelp?^^Betweensobs,t