高考英语读后续写专题二

高考英语读后续写专题（一）

-:典题技法指导

AtDana'syardsale,Timchoseabaseballfromihetoysspreadonthecardtableandasked

abouttheprice.DanatoldhimeverythingwasaquarterexceptNczumi,acottontoyrat.Itwas

graywithsomecottonsuckingoutfromtheholewhereancarhadbeentomoff."Nczumiisextra

special,sohe'stendollars.Heneedsasafenewhome."Danasighec.

Timlaughedsayinghedidn'thavetendollars.Danalaughed,tooandgaveNezumitoTimas

afreegiftbecausehewasherfriend.WhenTimwhispereditwassortofold.Danasaidoldtoys

werethebest.She(heninvitedTim(oherbirthdayparty(henextevening,adding(hatherparents

weregivingherarealratforherbirthday.Timwasamazedandaskedifitwasaliverat."Of

course,"Danasaid.

Athome,Tim'smothershewedhimthegiftshehadboughtforDana.Itwasaknittingspool

(编织线轴)shapedlikeamushroom.MomsaidDanacouldknitascarfforherdoll.Timsighed

thatDanawasn'taknittingkindoipersonbutaratkindofperson.Momlaughedalterknowing

whathadhappened.Togethertheydrovetothepetstore,whereTimsearchedandsearchedand

selectedaclearplasticball,oneinwhichtheralcouldrunaroundonihefloorsafefromcatsand

dogs.TimthoughtofNezumi'searanddecidedDana'snewralwouldneedIhisball.

Thenextday,Danabroughtcupcakestoclass.WhenshehandedacupcaketoTim,sheasked

ifTimbroughtNezumitoschoolasNezumilikedtorideinbackpacks.Timwasalalossbecause

Nezumiwasalhomeonhisbed.ThenDanaaskedwhatgifthewasgivingher.Timreplieditwas

asurprise.InsilencetheysatfcrawhilebeforeheheardDanasayherparentsweregivinghera

newbikeforherbirthdayinsteadofaliveratbecausetheyihoughlratswouldbitethings.

注意：

i.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.

Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea._

写作思路

1.确定主题：大主题是友谊。故事讲的是Dana将最好的玩具送给朋友Tim,并邀请

Tim参加生日派对。Tim为Dana的生日精心准备礼物。但是节外生枝，所买的礼物有点多

余了…，故事的最后应该是主要人物Tim为朋友买到称心的礼物，是一个意外的惊喜。

2.时空变化：注意三个时间,thenextevening,thenextday,thatafternoon,注意两个地点，

athome,还有第二段的最后部分应该到了Dana家。涉及时空变化的续写最容易跑题，应特

别小心。

3.续写难点：情节简单，无话可说。遇到此类续写最好的解决方法是多进行心理描写，

情感描写以及体现某一心理与情感的细节动作描写，或者是烘托情感的环境描写，要身临其

境，有代人感。

写作提纲

ParagraphI:A(home(hatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.

I.Withoutaliverat,thegiftheselectedseemedlikethefifthwheel.

2."It'sreallyasurprise!"hemuttered,withawrysmile.

3.Speechlessanddisappointed,Timstoodthere,notknowingwhattodowithit.

4.Itwasasifgloomysilencefilledhisroom.

5.Afterawhile,hebegantopaceupanddownintheroom,scratchinghisheadandglancing

around.

6.Thenhepouredoutrroiiiaboxallihcgillsheliked,trying(ochooseonefbrhisbest

friend,butinvain.

7.Justashedecidedtogiveup,hiseyesfellonNczumi-thctorncottontoyrat.

Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea.

I."Aha!"Timyelledwithdelightandjumpedintheair.

2."WhynotaskMomtomendtheholeinthedollandthenputitintotheplasticratball?"

Timsaidtohimselfwithanod."ItmustbeaperfectbirthdaygiftforDana."

3.With(hat,hedartedoutandcouldn'twaittotellhismotherabouthisidea.

4.Likemagic,theoldtorndollturnedintoalivelyratinhismother*shands,thoughit

wasnotarealrat.

5.Amazingly,therewasaword4tfriends''sewnonitsback.

6.Sureenough,itwasapleasantsurprise.

7.WhenDanareceived(hespecialgiftfromTim,shereachedoutandgavehimahugehug.

参考范文

Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.Withoutaliverat,the

giftheselectedseemedlikethefifthwheel."It'sreallyasurprise!"liemuttered,withawrysmile.

Speechlessanddisappointed,Timstoodthere,notknowingwhattodowithit.Itwasasifgloomy

silencefilledhisroom.Afterawhile,hebegantopaceupanddownintheroom,scratchinghis

headandglancingaround.Thenhepouredoutfromaboxallthegiftsheliked,tryingtochoose

oneforhisbestfriend,butinvain.Justashedecidedtogiveup,hiseyesfellonNezumi-thetorn

cottontoyrat.

Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea."Aha!"Timyelledwithdelightandjumpedin

theair."WhynotaskMomtomendtheholeinthedollandthenputitintotheplasticratball?"

Timsaidtohimselfwithanod."ItmustbeaperfectbirthdaygiftforDana."Withthat,hedarted

outandcouldn'twaittotellhismotherabouthisidea.Likemagic,theoldtorndollturnedintoa

livelyratinhismother'shands,thoughitwasnotarealrat.Amazingly,therewasaword

“friends"sewnonitsback.Sureenough,itwasapleasantsurprise.WhenDanareceived(he

specialgiftfromTini,shereachedoutandgavehimahugehug.

—:课后练习

IthadbeenayearsinceSusan,anattractiveyoungwomanof34,becameblindandshewas

suddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtocling

towasherhusband,Mark.

Mark,anAirForceofficer,lovedSusanwithallhisheartandhewasdeterminedtohelphis

wifegainthestrengthandconfidencesheneededtobecomeindependentagain.

Finally,Susanfeltreadytoretumtoherjob,buthowwouldshegetthere?Mark

volunteeredtodrivehertoworkeachday,eventhoughtheyworkedatoppositeendsofthecity.

Atfirst,thiscomfortedSusan.Soon,however,MarkdecidedthatSusanhadtostarttaking

thebusagainonherown.Butshewasstillsofragile,soangry-howwouldshereact?

Justashepredicted,Susanwashorrifiedattheideaoftakingthebusagain."Howam1

supposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou'reabandoningme."sherespondedbitterly.

Mark'sheartbroketohearthesewords,butheknewwhathadtohedone.Hepromised

Susanthathewouldridethebuswithher,fbraslongasittook,untilshegotthehangofit.

Fortwosolidweeks,Mwrk,inmilitaryuniformandall,accompaniedSusantoandfrom

workeachdav.Hetaughthereverythingtoadapttohernewenvironment,includingbefriending

thebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutfbrher,andsaveheraseat.

Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Mondaymomingarrived,shesaid

good-byetoMark,andfbrthefirsttime,theywenttheirseparatewzys.

Monday,Tuesday,Wednesday,Thursday...Eachdayonherownwentperfectly,andSusan

hadneverfeltbetter.Shewasdoingit!

OnFridaymorning,asshewaspayingthefaretogetoffthebusasusual,thedriversaid,

"Younglady,Isuredoenvyyou."

Surprisedandcurious,sheaskedthedriver,"Whydoyousaythatyouenvyme?"

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

ParagraphI：

Thedriverresponded,"1(mustfeelgoodlobetakenuarcofandproicctedlikeyouarc

everyday."

Paragraph2：

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'schecks.

参考文章

ParagraphI:Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlike

youareeveryday."Confusedbywhatthedrivertalkedabout,sheasked,"Whatdoyoumean?"

Thedriveranswered,"Everymorninginthepastweek,afinelookinggentlemaninamilitary

uniformhasbeenstandingacrossthestreetwatchingyougettingoffthebus.Hemakessureyou

crossthestreetsafelyandhewatchesuntilyouenteryourofficebuilding.Thenheblowsyoua

kiss,givesyoualitesaluteandwalksaway.Youareoneluckylady.

Paragraph?TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Withtearsofhappinessinher

eyes,shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreet,asifgazingatsomeone.

Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.Susanthoughtshe

wasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcan

bringlightwherethereisdarkness.JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoa

radiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.Finallyshefoundbackherselfblindbutattractive

andconfidentassheusedtobe.

高考英语读后续写专题（一）

-:典题技法指导

AtDana'syardsale,Timchoseabaseballfromihetoysspreadonthecardtableandasked

abouttheprice.DanatoldhimeverythingwasaquarterexceptNczumi,acottontoyrat.Itwas

graywithsomecottonsuckingoutfromtheholewhereancarhadbeentomoff."Nczumiisextra

special,sohe'stendollars.Heneedsasafenewhome."Danasighec.

Timlaughedsayinghedidn'thavetendollars.Danalaughed,tooandgaveNezumitoTimas

afreegiftbecausehewasherfriend.WhenTimwhispereditwassortofold.Danasaidoldtoys

werethebest.She(heninvitedTim(oherbirthdayparty(henextevening,adding(hatherparents

weregivingherarealratforherbirthday.Timwasamazedandaskedifitwasaliverat."Of

course,"Danasaid.

Athome,Tim'smothershewedhimthegiftshehadboughtforDana.Itwasaknittingspool

(编织线轴)shapedlikeamushroom.MomsaidDanacouldknitascarfforherdoll.Timsighed

thatDanawasn'taknittingkindoipersonbutaratkindofperson.Momlaughedalterknowing

whathadhappened.Togethertheydrovetothepetstore,whereTimsearchedandsearchedand

selectedaclearplasticball,oneinwhichtheralcouldrunaroundonihefloorsafefromcatsand

dogs.TimthoughtofNezumi'searanddecidedDana'snewralwouklneedthisball.

Thenextday,Danabroughtcupcakestoclass.WhenshehandedacupcaketoTim,sheasked

ifTimbroughtNezumitoschoolasNezumilikedtorideinbackpacks.Timwasalalossbecause

Nezumiwasalhomeonhisbed.ThenDanaaskedwhatgifthewasgivingher.Timreplieditwas

asurprise.InsilencetheysatfcrawhilebeforeheheardDanasayherparentsweregivinghera

newbikeforherbirthdayinsteadofaliveratbecausetheythoughtratswouldbitethings.

注意：

i.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.

Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea._

写作思路

1.确定主题：大主题是友谊。故事讲的是Dana将最好的玩具送给朋友Tim,并邀请

Tim参加生日派对。Tim为Dana的生日精心准备礼物。但是节外生枝，所买的礼物有点多

余了…，故事的最后应该是主要人物Tim为朋友买到称心的礼物，是一个意外的惊喜。

2.时空变化：注意三个时间,thenextevening,thenextday,thatafternoon,注意两个地点，

athome,还有第二段的最后部分应该到了Dana家”涉及时空变化的续写最容易跑题，应特

别小心。

3.续写难点：情节简单，无话可说。遇到此类续写最好的解决方法是多进行心理描写，

情感描写以及体现某一心理与情感的细节动作描写，或者是烘托情感的环境描写，要身临其

境，有代人感。

写作提纲

ParagraphI:A(home(hatafternoon.Timstaredattheplasticratball.

I.Withoutaliverat,thegiftheselectedseemedlikethefifthwheel.

2."It'sreallyasurprise!"hemuttered,withawrysmile.

3.Speechlessanddisappointed,Timstoodthere,notknowingwhattodowithit.

4.Itwasasifgloomysilencefilledhisroom.

5.Afterawhile,hebegantopaceupanddownintheroom,scratchinghisheadandglancing

around.

6.Thenhepouredoutrroiiiaboxallihcgillsheliked,trying(ochooseonefbrhisbest

friend,butinvain.

7.Justashedecidedtogiveup,hiseyesfellonNczumi-thctorncottontoyrat.

Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea.

I."Aha!"Timyelledwithdelightandjumpedintheair.

2."WhynotaskMomtomendtheholeinthedollandthenputitintotheplasticratball?"

Timsaidtohimselfwithanod."ItmustbeaperfectbirthdaygiftforDana."

3.With(hat,hedartedoutandcouldn'twaittotellhismotherabouthisidea.

4.Likemagic,theoldtomdollturnedintoalivelyratinhismother'shands,(houghit

wasnotarealrat.

5.Amazingly,therewasaword4tfriends''sewnonitsback.

6.Sureenough,itwasapleasantsurprise.

7.WhenDanareceived(hespecialgiftfromTim,shereachedoutandgavehimahugehug.

参考范文

Paragraph1:Athomethatafternoon,Timstaredattheplasticratball.Withoutaliverat,the

giftheselectedseemedlikethefifthwheel."It'sreallyasurprise!"liemuttered,withawrysmile.

Speechlessanddisappointed,Timstoodthere,notknowingwhattodowithit.Itwasasifgloomy

silencefilledhisroom.Afterawhile,hebegantopaceupanddownintheroom,scratchinghis

headandglancingaround.Thenhepouredoutfromaboxallthegiftsheliked,tryingtochoose

oneforhisbestfriend,butinvain.Justashedecidedtogiveup,hiseyesfellonNezumi-thetorn

cottontoyrat.

Paragraph2:Allofasudden,hehadanidea."Aha!"Timyelledwithdelightandjumpedin

theair."WhynotaskMomtomendtheholeinthedollandthenputitintotheplasticratball?"

Timsaidtohimselfwithanod."ItmustbeaperfectbirthdaygiftforDana."Withthat,hedarted

outandcouldn'twaittotellhismotherabouthisidea.Likemagic,theoldtorndollturnedintoa

livelyratinhismother'shands,thoughitwasnotarealrat.Amazingly,therewasaword

“friends"sewnonitsback.Sureenough,itwasapleasantsurprise.WhenDanareceived(he

specialgiftfromTini,shereachedoutandgavehimahugehug.

—:课后练习

IthadbeenayearsinceSusan,anattractiveyoungwomanof34,becameblindandshewas

suddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtocling

towasherhusband,Mark.

Mark,anAirForceofficer,lovedSusanwithallhisheartandhewasdeterminedtohelphis

wifegainthestrengthandconfidencesheneededtobecomeindependentagain.

Finally,Susanfeltreadytoretumtoherjob,buthowwouldshegetthere?Mark

volunteeredtodrivehertoworkeachday,eventhoughtheyworkedatoppositeendsofthecity.

Atfirst,thiscomfortedSusan.Soon,however,MarkdecidedthatSusanhadtostarttaking

thebusagainonherown.Butshewasstillsofragile,soangry-howwouldshereact?

Justashepredicted,Susanwashorrifiedattheideaoftakingthebusagain."Howam1

supposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou'reabandoningme."sherespondedbitterly.

Mark'sheartbroketohearthesewords,butheknewwhathadtohedone.Hepromised

Susanthathewouldridethebuswithher,fbraslongasittook,untilshegotthehangofit.

Fortwosolidweeks,Mwrk,inmilitaryuniformandall,accompaniedSusantoandfrom

workeachdav.Hetaughthereverythingtoadapttohernewenvironment,includingbefriending

thebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher.andsaveheraseat.

Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Mondaymomingarrived,shesaid

good-byetoMark,andfbrthefirsttime,theywenttheirseparatewzys.

Monday,Tuesday,Wednesday,Thursday...Eachdayonherownwentperfectly,andSusan

hadneverfeltbetter.Shewasdoingit!

OnFridaymorning,