Unit 4 Developing ideas Writing 教学设计-2022-2023学年高中英语外研版2019选择性必修第一册

选择性必修一Unit4DevelopingideasWritingPage1Greeting“Hey,everyone.It’sgreattoseeyouagain.Todaylet’scontinueournewlesson-SelectiveRequiredCourse,Book1Unit4DevelopingideasWriting.”Page2AnalysisofthematerialFirstofall,let’slookatwhatwearegoingtolearntoday.本部分的范文是一封艺术展的邀请函。通过对邀请函的学习，初步掌握邀请函的写作内容和写作方法；熟悉邀请函的结构和内容；感知邀请函的语言风格。通过完成阅读任务和学习邀请函的写作，学生最终运用所学知识为艺术展写一篇邀请函。Nowlet’sstartourlesson!Page3Leading-in“Inthepreviousreadinglessons,welearnedsomethingaboutthreeartists,Hofman,TanDun,andYangLipingalongwiththeirartworksandhowtheygettheirinspiration.Also,wetalkedabouthowtechnologyaffectsart:Ithasapositiveeffectonart;inthemeantimeitbringsaboutsomeproblems.Well,intoday’ssession,wewilltalkaboutinvitingsomeonetoacertainArtFestival.Asimplequestionforyou:ImagineyourschoolwillholdanArtFestivalnextmonth,andyouwantalltheteacherstojoininit.Sowhatcanyoudo?”“Correct!Youcanwriteaninvitation.”Buthowdoyouwriteaninvitation?Let’stakealookatourpassagefirst.(click1time)Page4KnowledgelearningInthispart,wewilldiscussthestructureoftheinvitationanditsstyle.Pleaselookatthepicturesonthescreen.Thepictureontheleftisaninvitation.Thepicturenexttotheinvitationisaninvitationcard.Findingthemainideaofeachparagraphoftheinvitationhelpsyoulearntowriteaninvitation.Usually,thetopicsentencelocatedatthebeginningortheendofaparagraphisthemainideaofaparagraph.Butifthetopicsentenceishardtofind,trytofindoutthekeywordsandputthemtogethertogetthemainidea.Now,let’sstartourlearning.Readtheinvitationandansweraquestion:whatisthetopicofeachparagraph?Underlinetheusefulwordsandexpressionswhilereading.好，给大家一些时间。(1分半后)Time’sup.Haveyoufinished?Let’schecktheanswers.Page5Tosummarizethetopicofparagraph1,weshouldfindsomekeywords,suchas“theopeningofTechArtFestival”,talkingaboutthenameoftheevent;(click2times)Thephrases“onthetwelfthofNovember”,“at6pm”,and“at8pm”talkabout“thetimeoftheevent”;(click4times)Also,thephrase“atWilliamsSportsCentre”indicates“theplaceoftheevent”.(click2times)Sowecansaythefirstparagraphincludessomebasicinformationoftheevent.Page6Thefirstsentenceinparagraph2ismainlyaboutthedurationoftheevent（活动的持续时间）andthefeatureoftheevent（活动的特点）(click1time).Thesecondsentencetellsusaboutwhatthevisitorswillseeandexperience.Sothisparagraphisaboutthecontentoftheevent.(click1time)Page7Inthelastparagraph,theauthorexpresseshisorherlongingtohearfromthereceiver.Andthisistheendingoftheinvitation.Page8Youalldidagoodjob.Allright,it’stimeforustosummarizethestructureofthebodyofaninvitationletter.Inthefirstparagraph,youneedtotellthereceiverthebasicinformationoftheinvitation,suchasthename,placeandtimeoftheevent.(click2times)Inthesecondparagraph,youhavetogivemoredetailedinformationontheevent,thatistosay,paragraph2isthecontentoftheevent.(click2times)Inthelastparagraph,youendyourinvitationbyexpectingthereceivertowriteback.(click2times)Page9Ok,class,wehavediscussedthestructureofthebodyofaninvitation.Togetsomedetailedinformationofthisinvitationletter,readthepassageagain,trytotakenoticeofthewordingandthenansweranotherquestion:Istheinvitationwritteninformalorinformalstyle?Givethreeexamples.给大家一些时间考虑。（1分半后）Time’sup.Haveyougotyouranswers?Let’schecktheanswers.Theinvitationiswritteninformalstyle.(click1time)First,ithasaninvitationcard(click3times);Second,thelanguageisformal,like“…requeststhehonorofyourpresenceat…”(click1time)Third,itcontainsaspecificdateandaddress.Haveyougottherightanswers?(click1time)Page10补充1​:正式邀请函的注意事项​：从右侧learningtolearn部分的内容来看，有两点需要注意一​、邀请人可以使用第三人称或者第一人称we，通常所涉及的活动地点和日期​要完整拼写出来；二​、用词和说话的语气​应​正式​。​(click2times)‌Page11补充2:邀请函的格式：Usuallyaformalinvitationconsistsof6parts:dateofwriting写信日期,InsideAddress信内地址。​信内地址包括收件人的姓名、地址及邮编等信息。在一般的书信中，信内地址通常省略，但在正式的信函中不可省略。(click4times),Page12Salutation称呼,usuallywewanttousethesewordstoshowyourrespectforthereceiver,suchasMr/Mrs/Miss/Ms;Sir/Madam;Dr;ProfessorBodyoftheInvitation正文,正文通常为三段式；Conclusion结束语：较为标准的结束语为Sincerely/YoursSincerely/SincerelyYours；andthelastoneisSignature签名，需要手写.(click8times)Page13Next,let’sfocusonsomeusefulwordsandexpressionsinthispassage.Numberone文章第一段第一行WoodsHighSchoolrequeststhehonorofyourpresenceattheopeningofTechArtFestivalonthetwelfthofNovember.其中requestthehonorofyourpresence(oryourcompany)中文译为“敬请出席”。Forexample,werequestthehonorofyourcompanyatdinner.(click2times)Page14Numbertwo文章第一段第三行TheeventwillbeginatWilliamsSportsCenterat6pmwithawelcomeaddressfollowedbyawardsceremony,withtheeveningclosingat8pm.Inthissentence,“address”meansaformalspeechthatsomeonemakestoagroupofpeople,中文译为“演讲，演说”Forexample,atelevisionaddress.Besides,“address”alsocanbeusedasaverb,whichmeans“tomakeaformalspeechtoalargegroupofpeople”,即“对…发表演说”。e.g.Thechairmanwillnowaddressthemeeting.(click4times)Page15Anotherword“ceremony”inthissentencemeans“animportantsocialorreligiousevent,whenatraditionalsetofactionsisperformedinaformalway”.InChinesewesay“仪式，典礼”,forinstance,“theopeningceremonyoftheOlympicGames”,“theclosingceremonyoftheOlympicGames”,asweoftenseeintheSportsnews.(click2times)Page16Numberthree文章第二段第一行TechArtwillrunfromthetwelfthtothesixteenthofNovemberandwillfeaturetheworksofoveronehundredofourstudents.Payattentiontotheword“run”.Inthissentence,“run”means“tocontinueforthespecifiedperiodoftimewithoutstopping”,中文意思是“持续;延续”。E.g.ElectioncampaignsinBritainrunforthreeweeks.Italsomeans“toorganizeorbeinchargeofanactivity,business,organization,orcountry”,中文意思为“经营；管理”Hereisanexample:Forawhile,sheranarestaurantinBoston.(click4times)Page17Anotherword“feature”inthissentencemeans“toincludeorshowsomethingasaspecialoranimportantpartofsomething”,中文意思“以……为特色，是……的特征;起重要作用”。Forexample：TheexhibitionfeaturespaintingsbyPicasso.(click1time)Page18Numberfour文章第三段第二行Pleasereplytoconfirmyourattendance.“Confirm”meanstotellsomeonethatapossiblearrangement,date,orsituationisnowdefiniteorofficial,中文意思是“肯定，确认（安排、日期或情况）”。Forexample:Theyconfirmedtheirhotelbookingbyphone.(click2times)Page19Thereisalsoanimportantmeaningof“confirm”.Thatis“toshowthatsomethingisdefinitelytrue,especiallybyprovidingmoreproof”,inChinesewesay“证实，证明”.Forexample:ToconfirmmydiagnosisIneedtodosometests.Thelastword“attendance”canbedescribedas“theactofbeingpresentataplace”,译为“出席参加”。Hereisanexample:“Ourclasshasperfectattendancetoday.”(click2times)Page20LanguagepracticeLet’spracticethelanguage.Afterlearningthepassage,let’sseeifyouunderstandtheinvitationcorrectly.NowtranslatethefollowingsentencesintoChinese.给大家一些时间完成。（1分半后）Page21Time’sup.Let’schecktheanswers.NumberoneWoodsHighSchoolrequeststhehonorofyourpresenceattheopeningofTechArtFestivalonthetwelfthofNovember.Thetranslationshouldbe“伍兹高中诚邀您出席我校11月12日举行的科技艺术节开幕式”.(click1time)Page22ThesecondoneTheeventwillbeginatWilliamsSportsCentreat6pmwithawelcomeaddressfollowedbyawardsceremony,withtheeveningclosingat8pm.Thetranslationis“本活动将于晚六点在威廉姆斯体育馆举行，分欢迎致辞和颁奖仪式两个环节，于晚八点结束”.(click1time)ThelastsentenceTechArtwillrunfromthetwelfthtothesixteenthofNovemberandwillfeaturetheworksofoveronehundredofourstudents.Thetranslationis“科技艺术节将从11月12日持续到11月16日，并将重点展出100多个学生的作品”.(click1time)Page23PracticalapplicationNowwearegoingtoputwhatwehavelearnedintopractice.Imagineyouarehelpingtoprepareanartfestivalinyourschool.Answerthefourquestionstohelpyouwritetheinvitation.YoucandiscusswithyourpartnerthebasicinformationoftheArtFestival,suchasitstopic,thedate,theplace,theartworksoftheArtFestival,andtheinvitationstyle.(click2times)Theinsideaddressisgiven.Beforeyouwritethepassage,let’sgooversomewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnedandthinkaboutthemeaningsinyourmind.Nowpleasereadafterme!requestthehonorofyourpresence/requestthehonorofyourcompanyawelcomeaddressfeatureconfirmyourattendancetheopening/closingceremonyGoodjob!Remember,whenyouarewriting,donotforgettousethewordsandexpressionsabove.Nowlet’sstartyourwriting!给大家一些时间来写。（2分钟后）Page24Time’sup!Haveyoufinished?Firstofall,I’dliketoshowyouaninvitationletterwrittenbymystudentLiHua.10October2020MrDavidSmith18RiversideDriveRoadFushan100567Page25DearMrSmith,TheNationallibraryrequesthonoroffyourprocessceremonyoftheChinesecalligraphyexhibitionon10thofNovember.Theexhibitionwillheldinthelobbyat10:00am.Theawardsceremonywillafterjudgeshavevoted.TheexhibitionfeaturestheChineseCalligraphy.TheworkswillvividlyshowthegreatnessoftheChineseculture.Page26Wedohopeyouareabletojoinourexhibition.Pleasereplytoconfirmyourattendance.Yourssincerely,LiHuaTheNationallibrary学生一稿部分能够运用邀请信结构进行写作，仿照例文语言进行表达，基本能将文意表达清楚，但文中有较多的语言错误。Page27Nowlet’sseeLiHua’sanotherversionaftercorrection.10October2020MrDavidSmith18RiversideDriveRoadFushan100567Page28DearMrSmith,TheNationalLibraryrequeststhehonorofyourpresenceattheopeningceremonyoftheChinesecalligraphyexhibitionon10thofNovember.Theexhibitionwillbeheldinthelobbyat10:00amwithawelcomeaddressfollowedbyawardsceremony,withthemiddayclosingat11:45am.ThisexhibitionfeaturestheartworksofChinesepeopleexpressingtheirinnerworld.Andtheartworkswillvividlyshowthewriter’sspeed,strengthandagility(agility敏捷，灵活)aswellasthegreatnessoftheChineseculture.Page29Wedohopeyouareabletojoinourexhibition.Pleasereplytoconfirmyourattendance.Yourssincerely,LiHuaTheNationalLibrary经过修改，学生一稿中的语言错误得以纠正，内容得当丰富，能正确运用本节课中学过的词语表达，表意更加明确，更加符合语用的要求。Page30HereisagoodversionofastudentnamedLiHong,whoisalsofrommyclass.DearMrSmith,RedroseHighSchoolrequests