人教版七年级上册英语Unit5太空之旅写作Writing课件太空旅行计划范文完整版

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Section3Writingspacesuit/ˈkɪləmiːtə(r)//kə'lekt//fləʊt/floatcollect收集漂浮航天服kilometre/ˈspeɪssuːt/千米Reviewtie/taɪ/(用线、绳等）拴Lead-inleaveweak

breatheweigh虚弱的低于通常数量的重呼吸离开/liv//wiːk//ləʊ//weɪ//briːð/ReviewlowLead-inDoyouwanttohaveatriptospace?Let'senjoyashortvideoaboutspace.Lead-inDavidwantstohaveaspaceadventuresomeday.Let’stalkaboutwhatheisgoingtodo?Wheretogo?Howtogo?Hewilltakeatriptospace.Hewillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Whatwillhedo?Lead-inHewillvisitaspacestationanddosomeexperiments.ReadDavid’spostandcheckyouranswer.

IhopeIcantravelintospacewithmyfamilyoneday.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.First,myfamilyandIwillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Whenwegetintoorbit,wewillvisitaspacestation.Itwilltakeusaboutsixhourstogetthere.Thingsareverydifferentinspace.Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleep.Wewillalsohavetowashourhandsandbrushourteethinadifferentway.

Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirstlookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.Afterthat,Iwouldliketodosomeexperiments.Ireallywanttostudyhowplantsgrowinspace.Next,I’mgoingtoputonaspacesuitandgoonaspacewalk.Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday—itwillbeanamazingexperience!IntroductionThingsIwillhavetodothere.Pre-writingaWhatthetripwillbelikebThingsIamgoingtodotherecThingsIwillhavetodotheredIntroductionWhatthetripwillbelike?第一人称一般现在时一般将来时Pre-writingMindmapcanhelpyouorganizeyourideasandplanyourwriting.Pre-writingaWhatthetripwillbelikebThingsIamgoingtodotherecThingsIwillhavetodotheredIntroductiondcbaDaviddrewamindmapbeforehewroteabouthisdreamtrip.Completethemindmapandthenreadtheposttoseeifyouwereright.(p.76)Step1Thinkaboutwhereyouwanttogo(e.g.theMoon,Mars).Then,listthethingsyouwanttowriteabout.UsethemindmapinExercise1tohelpyouorganizetheinformation.PlanIntroductionWhere:When:How:howlong:Withwhom:onaspaceshipwithmyparents/friends/family/classmates…itwilltakeus…togettheretheMoon/Mars/aspacestation/spacehotel…2053Nowwriteapostaboutyourdreamtriptospace.Pre-writingThingsIwillhavetodothere.Becauseofthelowgravity:tiethesleepingbagtothewalldoexerciseeverydaywashandbrushinadifferentwayBecause

ofnoair:wearaspacesuittohelpmebreatheThingsIamgoingtodothere.1.lookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth2.dosomeexperimentse.g.growplants3.goonaspacewalk4.collectMoonrocks5.findotherlivingthings…Nowwriteapostaboutyourdreamtriptospace.Pre-writingwonderful,amazing,exciting,unforgettable,a…memory,a…experience,helpmelearnmoreaboutthespacemakemydreamcometrue…Whatthetripwillbelike?Nowwriteapostaboutyourdreamtriptospace.Pre-writing主题？TimeMarkersWriteyourpostnow!Thebeginningandendinghavebeengiven.

IhopeIcantravelto...(e.g.theMoon,Mars)withmyparents/friends/family/classmatesin2053.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.First,wewillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Itwilltakeus...togetthere.

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......(thingsyouaregoingtodothere）Ireallylookforwardtotravellingto...someday---itwillbea(n)amazing/wonderful/exciting/unforgettableexperience.Fromnowon,Iwillstudyhardtomakemydreamcometrue.While-writingReply得分评分标准13-15符合题意，内容完整，结构严密，语句通顺。无语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数符合要求。10-12符合题意，内容较完整，语句较通顺，仅有少量语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词数基本符合要求。7-9基本符合题意，但句子较简单，表达不够清楚，语法、拼写错误较多。4-6不符合题意，逻辑混乱，语法或标点错误太多。0-3不符合题意，未能给读者传递任何信息；内容太少；字迹混乱无法看清等。Let’sexchangeandgivethescorePost-writingHomework寒假就要来临了，你和朋友们打算去香港游玩一天，而你的妈妈不在家，出发之前你要写一封信告诉她这一天的行程。WritingTask时间具体安排早上8：30从深圳北站(ShenzhenNorthRailwayStation)出发上午10：00香港迪士尼乐园(HongKongDisneyland)游玩，坐旋转木马(merry­go­round)，与卡通人物(如米老鼠、唐老鸭、白雪公主等)拍照，欣赏影片等。下午去香港街头品尝各种各样的小吃，同时去书展(HongKongBookFair)买书下午16：30返回深圳遣词造句(1)离开深圳前往香港________________________________(2)拍照________________________________(3)各种各样的________________________________(4)那儿有很多卡通人物，如米老鼠、唐老鸭、白雪公主。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________(5)我们将在下午返回深圳。Wewill___________________________________intheafte