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热考文体十一征文投稿——抓住时机，直抒胸臆写作架构征文投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行的写作，所投稿件在内容上应紧贴主题，新颖、创新、实用，符合字数要求等。具体写作结构为：提分佳句先声夺人开头句——点明主题1．Lastmonth,ourschoolhadacompetitiononplayingmusicalinstruments.Havinglearnedthepiano/theviolinfornearlyfiveyears,Iparticipatedinthisactivitywithouthesitation.2．(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟卷)LastSaturday,ourschool'sGreenCluborganizedameaningfulvolunteeractivityatalocalpark,aimingtoraiseourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.引人入胜篇中句——介绍基本情况1．(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟卷)Twentystudentsparticipatedincleaninguplitterandplantingtrees.Armedwithglovesandtrashbags,weworkedinteamstocollectscatteredwasteandsortrecyclables.2．(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟卷)Additionally,wesetupposterspromotingeco-friendlylifestyles.3．(2025·河南名校联盟冲刺三)TogetherwevisitedplacesofinterestinAustraliaandtookpartinmanyinterestingactivitiesatthecamp.画龙点睛结尾句——总结感想和祝福1．(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟卷)Thisexperiencedeeplyimpressedme.Notonlydidwecontributetoenvironmentalprotection,butwealsolearnedtheimportanceofteamwork.2．(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟卷)Ifeltproudtotakerealactionforourplanetandrealizedthateveryone'ssmalleffortscanmakeabigdifference.3．Itwassucharewardingexperiencethatitnotonlyenrichedmyschoollifebutalsotaughtmethevalueofcommunityengagement.Iamgratefulforthisopportunityandlookforwardtomoresuchactivitiesinthefuture.典例感悟(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。YouthandMe__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】(一)审准题，谋好篇——定方向不偏(二)找要点，抓内容——保质量为先1．显性要点题干找①祝贺《青年》创刊十周年。(投稿目的)Congratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.②我一直是个忠实的读者。我订阅了报纸。(读报经历)IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.③

我被它迷住了，每一期都从头到尾读一遍。(读报经历)BecauseIwasfascinatedbyit,Ireadeachissuefromcovertocover.④“中国文化”是我最喜欢的栏目。(喜爱的栏目)ThecolumnofChineseCultureismyfavourite.⑤作为《青年》的忠实读者，我建议刊登一些关于外国青少年生活的文章。(表达期望)AsafanofYouth,Irecommendthatitshouldcarrysomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeignteens.⑥我希望它会变得更好、更受欢迎。(表达祝福)Ihopethatitwillbecomebetterandevenmorepopular.2．隐性要点关联好⑦它有各种各样的专栏。(栏目介绍)Itboastsvariouscolumns.⑧它介绍了丰富的文化知识。(栏目内容)Itintroducesrichculturalknowledge.⑨它重视优秀文化的传承并增强我们的文化自信。(栏目内容)Itvaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantcultureandstrengthensourculturalconfidence.(三)用亮词，升格句——造靓丽文案1．various→a_variety_of(句⑦)2．rich→abundant(句⑧)3．Fascinated_by_it,_I_read_each_issue_from_cover_to_cover.(用非谓语动词升级句③)4．Not_only_does_it_introduce_abundant_cultural_knowledge_but_it_also_values_the_inheritance_of_brilliant_culture_and_strengthens_our_cultural_confidence.(用notonly...butalso...合并⑧、⑨句并改为倒装句)【佳作赏析】YouthandMeCongratulationsonthe10thanniversaryofYouth.IhavebeenadevotedreadersinceIsubscribedtothenewspaper.Fascinatedbyit,Ireadeachissuefromcovertocover.Itboastsavarietyofcolumns,ofwhichChineseCultureismyfavourite.Notonlydoesitintroduceabundantculturalknowledgebutitalsovaluestheinheritanceofbrilliantcultureandstrengthensourculturalconfidence.AsafanofYouth,IrecommendthatitshouldcarrysomearticlesaboutthelifeofforeignteensandIhopethatitwillbecomebetterandevenmorepopular.演练提能(2025·河北全国统一考试模拟)假定你是李华，你校英文报新增设了“CultureTravel”栏目，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1．地点介绍；2.你的文化体验和感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Lastsummer,Ihadtheopportunitytovisit参考范文：Last

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visittheForbiddenCityinBeijing,aplacethathasalwaysfascinatedme.AsIwalkedthroughthemassiveredwallsandancienthalls,Icouldn'thelpbutfeeltransportedbackintime.TheForbiddenCity,nowknownasthePalaceMuseum,wastheimperialpalaceoftheMingandQingDynasties.ItisatreasureofChineseartandarchitecture.ThistriptotheForbidden