读后续写话题练(五)　亲情篇

读后续写话题练(五)亲情篇(分值：25分)授课提示：对应专题检测题题过85页阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2025·山西部分学校模拟)Lilystoodbythewindow,watchingtheheavyrainpourdown.Theraindropsrandowntheglassinlines,creatingarhythmicpatternthatmatchedhergrowingrestlessness.Theoutsideworldseemedsoinviting,butshewasstuckinside.Withasigh(叹息),sheturnedtohermom,whowasbusyfoldinglaundry.“Mom,canIgooutsidetoplay？”Hermomdidn'tevenlookup,continuinghertaskasthewashingmachinemadeanoiseinthebackground.“No,sweetheart,it'spouringoutthere.You'llgetwet.”Lily'slippushedoutslightlyasshefeltdisappointmentgrowinsideher.“Thencanweplayagameinstead?Thenewboardgamewegotlookssofun.”Hermomgaveasmallshakeofherhead.“Notrightnow,honey.Istillhavealottofinishup.Maybelater.”Feelingmoreupsetwitheach“no”，Lilyglancedaroundtheroomandnoticedhermomironingclothes.Thesoundoftheironreleasingsteamwassurprisinglyrelaxing,andshecouldn'thelpbutwatch,curiousabouthowthehotmetalmovedsmoothlyoverthefabric.“Mom,canIhelpyouwiththeironing？”sheasked,steppingcloser.“No,Lily，”hermomrepliedfirmlywithoutevenlookingather.“Idon'twantyouanywhereneartheiron.”Lilyfeltasuddenurgetotry.“I'llbereallycareful.Ipromise.”Hermomstoppedandthenmetherlookwithaseriousexpression.“No,sweetie.Thisirongetsveryhot.Justlastweek,littleTimmynextdoorburnedhishandwithone.Idon'twantyoutogethurt.”Lilystoodthere,feelingamixofcuriosityandfrustration.Theironsatquietlyontheboard,thesteamnowgone.Shecouldalmostpictureherselfusingit,buthermom'swarningstayedinhermind.Lilyknewhermomwasjusttryingtokeephersafe,buttheconstant“no”madeherfeelupsetandmisunderstood.Shestaredattheshinyiron,wishingshecouldbetheonetofigureitoutforherself,butinstead,shesighed,knowingshehadtolistentohermom.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Lilyreachedoutcautiouslytowardtheiron.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hearingthenoise,Momquicklyreturnedtotheroom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Lilyreachedoutcautiouslytowardtheiron.Despitehermom'swarningsechoinginhermind,curiositygotthebetterofher.Herfingertipswerejustabouttotouchtheironwhen,suddenly,asharphisssoundedassteamburstout.Lilyyelpedinsurpriseandpulledherhandbackquickly,butitwastoolate.Asmall,redburnappearedonherfinger.Tearswelledupinhereyesaspainshotthroughherhand.Shestoodthere,frozen,notknowingwhethertocallforhermomorhidehermistake.Hearingthenoise,Momquicklyreturnedtotheroom.HereyeswidenedinhorrorasshesawLilyclutchingherhandandtheironstillsteaming.“Oh,Lily！”sheexclaimed,rushingover.ShegentlytookLily'shandandexaminedtheburn,herexpressionamixofworryandregret.“I'msosorry,sweetie.Ishouldhaveexplainedbetter.”Momcarefullyputacool,wetclothontheburnandhuggedLilytightly.“Ijustwantedtoprotectyou，”shewhispered.Lilysniffled,feelingbothguiltyandcomforted.Fromthatdayon,Lilyunderstoodwhyhermomsaid“no”sooften,andMomlearnedtofindbetterwaystoexplainthedangerstohercuriousdaughter.【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了小女孩Lily(莉莉)在下雨天因一系列愿望被妈妈拒绝后，在好奇心的驱使下，忍不住去触碰熨斗的故事。【详解】1．段