Englishwriting_铜仁

1、EnglishWriting,byChenXueminfromSuzhou,Whodoyouadmiremostinyourfamily?Whathaveyoudoneforyourmother?Haveyouevercookedforyourmother?,FreeTalk,Today,letscookfriedriceforourdearestmothers.,假如明天是你妈妈的生日，你想为妈妈做一份炒饭，请根据所给内容提示，写一篇你做炒饭的过程。参考词汇：1.friedricecookedmeatoilsaltgreenonions(葱)2.cookcutputfryadd3.caref

2、ullyfinely(细微地)slowlylightly要求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；2.书写工整、规范；3.根据所给内容及参考词汇，可适当发挥。,Writing,【2014年铜仁中考英语作文】,Whatstepsdoyoufollowwhendoingwriting?,Discuss,Writingsteps,1.Consideritcarefully,4.Formapassage,5.Beautifyyourwriting,3.Listthemainpoints,2.Drawupanoutline,Style(体裁)：_Person(人称)：_Tense(时态):_,说明文,第一

3、人称,一般现在时,据实描写：适当发挥：,炒饭过程,炒饭细节、妈妈感受,审,Consideritcarefully,文章结构,1.beginning点题，概括全文,2.body记述，层次分明,3.ending小结，呼应主题,构,Drawupanoutline,构,Drawupanoutline,把握文章框架结构。开头和结尾的句子要注意简洁、漂亮。,Tomorrowismymothersbirthday.Iwanttomakefriedriceforherinordertoexpressmylove.,Nowthefriedriceisready,Beginning,Ending,MainBody

4、,Theprocessofcookingfriedrice,列,Listthemainpoints,列,Matchthepicturewithitsdescription,cutsomecookedmeatfinely,putsomeoilinthepan,frythemeatlightly,addthericeslowlyandfryitforafewseconds,addsomesaltandgreenonions,Friedriceisready！,列,Listthemainpoints,cutsomecookedmeatfinely,putsomeoilinthepan,frythem

5、eatlightly,addthericeslowlyandfryitforafewseconds,addsomesaltandgreenonions,Friedriceisready！,连,Formapassage,Tomorrowismymothersbirthday.Iwanttomakefriedriceforher.IamsureIcancookitwell.,Nowthefriedriceisready.,Beginning,Ending,MainBody,Nowletmeshowyouhowtocookit.First,cutsomecookedmeatfinely.Next,I

6、needtoputsomeoilinthepan.Thenfrythemeatlightly.Afterthat,Ineedtoaddthericeslowly.Fryitforafewminutes.Finally,addsomesaltandgreenonions.,连,Someconjunctions,表并列：and,besides,inaddition,whatsmore,表转折：but,yet,however,onthecontrary,表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Fin

7、ally表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,表总结陈词：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking,美,Beautifyyourwriting,Tomorrowismymothersbirthday.Iwanttomakefriedriceforher.IamsureIcancookitverywell.First,cutsomecookedmea

8、tveryfinely.Next,Ineedtoputsomeoilinthepan.Thenfrythemeatlightly.Afterthat,Ineedtoaddthericeslowly.Fryitforafewminutes.Finally,addsomesaltandgreenonions.Nowthefriedriceisready.,Nowletmeshowyouhowtocookit.,inordertoexpressmylove,Ihopemymotherwillenjoyit.,美,Waystobeautifyyourwriting,善用各种词汇,2.活用多种句型,3.

9、妙用各关联词,4.巧用引文谚语,1.审2.构3.列4.连5.美,文体、时态、人称,连字成句、连句成文,变换句型，使文增色,把握结构、增加细节,Summary,列出要点、注意重点,Romeisnotbuiltinaday.,Tips:1.卷面工整2.条理清晰3.多读美文4.积累素材,Practicemakesperfect!,假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂”活动，最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案?”为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成,但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以“Thinkbeforeyousearchonline”为题用英语写一篇短文。,Haveatry,2014年苏州市中考英语作文,注意：1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，不要遂词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺；3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。ThinkbeforeyousearchonlineSomestudentsnowhaveanewusefortheInternethelpingth