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1、高考作文的最常考的几种文体 一 书信 1 书信写作 2 E-mail 写作 书信满分作文的基本框架 书信：,(Your address_) Date, Month, (year)_ (Receivers address_) Dear_, I am extremely pleased to hear from you, and I would like to write a letter to tell you that _. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am look

2、ing forward to your replies at your earliest convenience. Best regards for your health and success. Sincerely yours, Wang Yan,名师提供最易得满分的关键点 It 作形式主语 通常来说，不定式 或主语从句做主语时，为了避免主语冗长，常使用it 做形式主语。如： That he wakes up early every day is a good habit. (It is a good habit of him to wake up early every day) To

3、study English is important for him. (It is important for him to study English),it 做形式主语通常有两种形式：Its of sb. to do sth. 与 its . for sb to do sth. 当表语形容词说明不定式的逻辑主语具有某种品质时，常用its of sb. to do sth. , 如： Its very kind /nice of you to help me. 当表语形容词说明不定式具有某种特征时，用itsfor sb. to do sth. 如： Its hard for the Chi

4、nese students to learn Russian.,满分作文汉译（1）：,书信,尊敬的先生： 我叫王军，是中国西安西北大学电脑科学系的一名21岁的学生。明年夏天，我就要毕业了。毕业后，我希望去美国继续深造我的专业。 我选择去美国留学有三个原因。 第一，继续接受本专业的高等教育或培训对我来说很重要。我将得到实践经验，获得更多的知识。第二，这有助于我的英语口语。最后，我可以因此了解一种新的文化，理解这种文化熏陶下的人民和社会。看得越多，视野越宽。 我相信，贵校能提升我以后的事业。我请求得到您的帮助并获得一些有关的信息。请看一下我过去的成绩，告诉我我是否有机会被录取，如果方便，请尽快答复

5、我，不胜感激。 最诚挚的友人,Dear Sir, I am Wang Jun, a 21-year-old student in Computer Science Department at Northwestern Polytechnic University, Xian, China. (自我介绍). Next summer I will graduate. I hope to go to the United States for further studies in my major.(提出请求).,Three reasons can explain my choice. Firstl

6、y, it is important for me to get an advanced education of training in my major. I will get practical experience, and be more knowledgeable. Secondly, I will improve my spoken English there. Finally, I will know a new culture, understand its people and society. By seeing the world, I will widen my ho

7、rizons.(想出国的三个原因),I believe, your school will help shape my future career. I am requesting your help as well as information. Please look at my history of education and let me know if I can have such a chance. I will appreciate any kindness you reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Wa

8、ng Jun,练笔,假如你是李明，2010年3月6日，你在Yinchuan Evening News 银川晚报上看到一则招聘广告，阳光公司（Sunlight Company)招聘2010 年暑假电脑工程师，你想去应聘。请根据下列个人资料，写一封100字左右的应聘信。 1.姓名：李明 2.学历：宁夏大学一年级学生) （freshman） 3.社会活动及收获：2008年至今，银川电子竞技（E-sports)俱乐部成员；2009年获银川市软件大赛 二等奖。 4.联系电话Dear Sir, Im writing this letter to apply for the po

9、sition of a computer engineer in Sunlight Company for the 2010 Summer Vacation, which you have advertised in Yinchuan Evening News of Mar.6th . I am li Ming from Yinchuan ,a freshman in Ningxia University. As an E-sports lover, I have been a member of Yinchuan E-sports Club since 2008. In 2009, I wo

10、n the second prize in Yinchuan Software Designing Competition.,Im interested in the job and I believe that I can do it well. My phone number is I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Li Ming,满分作文汉译（2）： E-mail 亲爱的汤姆， 高兴收到你的来信，得知你要来中国学习汉语的消息我很兴奋。 我已经为你找到了一间公寓，这间公寓位于复兴门大街，离东方汉语学校不

11、远。从公寓出发，乘公交1路只一站地就能到达学校。这个公寓位于3层，45平米，3个房间，一间卧室，其他两间为浴室和厨房。有一张床、一个沙发、一个书桌和几把椅子。每个月的房租为2500元。,它也许没有你想象的那么好，不过我会尽量满足你的要求。如果你觉得不合适，回信告诉我，我会再找一个好一点的地方。 希望你尽快到来。 万事如意！ 你的朋友,DearTom, _ Hope you will come here soon! All the best! Yours, Lee,最易打动阅卷老师的满分作文(2) （二）E-mail Dear Tom, Im very happy to receive your

12、 e-mail, and Im glad to hear that you will come to China to learn Chinese here.(问候) I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fuxingmen Street, which is not far from Dongfang Chinese School. Bus No.1 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor

13、with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There is,a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 45 square- meter small flat, and the rent is 2,500 yuan per month.(交代租房详细信息). Maybe this flat is not as good as you wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If i

14、t is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another one. Hope you will come here soon! All the best! Yours, Lee,二 建议书 建议书是书信的一种，格式和一般书信大致相同。可以有题目，也可以没有。建议书的内容由两部分组成： 写建议的理由（reasons） 建议的具体内容（details） 满分做文的基本框架 Dear editor, Im _ and Im a _. I have some opinions about the topic that _.,Ma

15、ybe most people will hope _. But I dont think so. Because on the one hand _, on the other hand_. . Most of all ,_. In a word,_. Best wishes! Li Hua,帮你巩固写满分作文的基础,表示建议：youd better (not) do. You should /ought to do. I suggest that Why not Why dont you? Im afraid How /what about.?,表示观点：in my view In my

16、opinion I (dont) think that Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that But other people take an opposite side.,They firmly believe that As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. Some people are in favor of the opinion that As far as I am concerned,表示结论：at first first of all On the one ha

17、nd, on the other hand To start/ begin with Whats more besides Most of all,表示总结观点：from above, we can predict that In short As a result All in all In a word,最易得满分的关键点 助动词do (does/did) 在这种强调句式中，do没有实际意义 只用于加强语气。如： He does know the place well. Do write to me when you get there.,满分作文汉译（3）： 建议书（1） 亲爱的新同学们

18、： 我市北京大学计算机科学系的大四毕业生，我有一些话要对你们说，希望这些话能对你们有用。 首先，新生要转变思想以适应大学生活，这点非常重要。在中学时代，我们通常依靠老师和家长。 但是，独立性在大学校园的学习和生活中至关重要，它会让你的心理日趋成熟。在我看来，我们最好把独立性时刻记在心里。,还有就是必须学好英语。一方面，只有拿到四级证，我们才能毕业。另一方面，当我们找工作的时候，英语水平也是一个决定性因素。因此，我强烈希望你们所有人都能深刻地理解学好英语的必要性。 你们最真挚的朋友 Dear freshmen （大学一年级学生）， _ Sincerely yours,Dear freshmen,

19、 I am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Peking University. I would like to say a few words to you, which I hope would be helpful to you. To begin with, the change of ideas is of most importance for freshmen to adapt yourselves to campus life. During the middle school days, we usually de

20、pend upon our teachers at school and parents at home.,However, the life and study on university campus features independence, which is essential to our psychological development. In my view, we had better always bear in mind the idea of independence. Whats more, English learning is a must. On (the)

21、one hand, without CET4 certificate, we can not get our degree when we graduate from university. On the other hand, when we hunt for jobs, English level is a deciding factor.,Therefore , I do hope that all of you will have a good understanding of the necessity of learning English well. Good luck to y

22、ou! Sincerely yours,练笔：3,随着全球变暖及人类对环境的，环境问题日益严峻，五种灭绝速度加快。请你以What can we do for our earth?为题，以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，倡议青少年朋友立即行动起来保护我们的环境，保护我们的地球。 词数：120 左右,提纲：第一段：环境严峻的原因 第二段：怎样做改变现状 最后: 作者的想法,注意： 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 词数120-150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 文中不得提及考生自己所在学校和本人姓名。,Dear teachers and schoolmates, Its a gr

23、eat pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. _ Thanks for listening,What can we do for our earth? Dear fellow students, The earth we are living on is seriously damaged by human beings. The air we breathe is already polluted and it is difficult for us to

24、find clean and unpolluted rivers. More and more trees are being cut down; many kinds of plants and wild animals are in danger of extinction. Many populated areas suffer from floods, droughts or other natural disasters.,What will our earth be like if this continues? Can we survive in such an environm

25、ent? Shouldnt we teenagers do something we can to protect the environment and save the earth? For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, plant more trees and save water and energy. I believe we can make a difference and make the earth a beautiful place again. Students Union,满分作

26、文汉译（4） 建议信 （2） 亲爱的史蒂文： 非常高兴收到你的来信。你在信中询问怎样避免近视。保护视力对我们每个人都很重要。在这里我和你分享一下我的看法。 第一,不要长时间工作。不要长时间盯着电视和电脑。每当学习一个小时左右，做好用向远方眺望的方法来休息一下。,第二，注意下面几点：不要在阳光下或光线暗的地方读书；不要躺着或在坐车的时候看书。当你看书的时候，应该把书放在离眼睛大约一英尺的地方。 第三，每天做眼保健操。它可以帮助你保护视力。 我想，如果你能做到这几条，你就可以避免近视。 你的朋友 简,练笔：4 假如你叫李华。最近，你的好友林丹来信说他升入高中以后感到不大适应，不知道如何尽快结交新朋

27、友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。 注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及考生自己所在学校和本人姓名,Dear Lin Dan, I am glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you are facing the problem on _. Best regard ! Sincerely yours, Li Ming,Dear Lin Dan, I am glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know

28、you are facing the problem on how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions. First, you should be concerned about others and try to be friendly. If you are always ready to help others, your classmates will know you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good liste

29、ner. That way, people will feel comfortable to be with you. Besides, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show,show your talent. I hope my advice will be useful to you. I wish you happiness in your new school! Yours,四 日记,日记的格式将在满分作文的基本框架中列出。 由于记载的内容通常已经发生，谓语动

30、词多用一般过去时，但也可根据具体情况，用其他时态。如记叙天气、描写景色，为了描写生动，可以使用现在时，以展现当时的情况。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了，有连贯性。若有文字提示，则应重视提示，把握要点。,满分作文的基本框架 Monday July 20， 2010 Cloudy This morning (time), I went to _(place) for _(do sth) with _ (sb.). While walking around _( place), I/ we _. I hope that _. / I had a nice day t

31、oday./ We had a wonderful/ bad time today./ We enjoyed ourselves today.,满分作文汉译（7） 日记 2010年 6月3日 星期三 晴 今天，老师在课堂上讲到：“由于贫困，现在很多农村的孩子上不起学，你们能帮帮他们吗？” 放学后，我回到了家里。当我进屋的时候，我看到了我存零花钱的小盒子。尽管我想买一个MP4， 但我决定把它们送给那些更需要这些钱的孩子们。我立刻开始给他们写信，写完后，我到邮局把信和钱一起寄给了他们。 今天我感到非常高兴，因为我做了一件有意义的事。,Wednesday June 3, 2010 Fine This

32、 morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. _.,Wednesday June 3, 2010 Fine This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, “Now in the countryside many children still cant go to school because of poverty. “Can you help them?”(老师倡导献爱心活

33、动). After school, I went home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money. Though I wanted to buy a MP4 player, I decided to send my money to,the children who are eager to go to school. I began to write a letter to them at once. After finishing it, I went to the pos

34、t office and posted all my pocket money with the letter together.(实施爱心行动) I felt very happy today because Ive done a good deed.(感想).,满分理由：本篇日记格式正确，内容简单明了，记叙自然连贯，时态运用恰当，定语从 句等语法结构运用娴熟。,练笔6 请根据下列要求，用英语写一篇日记，日期为3月5号，晴 词数：120左右 1星期天上午你在友谊商店遇见一位外国朋 友，他因语言不通陷入困境。 2他说他要买一套瓷器。你帮他问清价格，选 中了他要的瓷器。他很感谢你，夸你英语讲 得

35、好。 3第一次使用英语，并帮助外国朋友解决问题 使你很受鼓舞，你决心进一步学习英语。,Sunday Mar 5 Fine This morning, I met with a foreign friend in a shop. He wanted to buy something, but nobody around knew what he wanted as he couldnt make himself understood. He looked rather worried. I went up and asked what I could do for him in English. He told me that he wanted to buy a set of china but didnt know the price for that, and asked me if I could help