高中英语写作技巧点拨三

1、写作技巧点拨三,想象性写作：未来生活 【题目要求】 假设你现在生活在2080年。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，描述一下你一天的工作和生活情况。 1你早上七点钟起床，九点钟在天津有一个很重要的会议； 2你洗澡的时候，机器人为你准备好了早餐； 3你设定好目的地和到达时间，汽车准时将你送达目的地；,4会后你去参观工厂，由于空气污染问题得到了解决，你能呼吸到新鲜的空气； 5下午三点你进行了一次体检，如果体检通过的话，你就可以去月球生活。 注意：1.词数：100词左右； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：目的地destination _,一、构思谋篇,二、关键词语,三、连词成句 1九点我在天

2、津有个会议要参加。 I had an important meeting to attend at 9：00 in Tianjin. 2我进入汽车，设定好目的地和到达时间，汽车就把我准时送达正确的地点。 I got in my car and set the destination and the arrival time, and the car sent me to the right place on time. 3如果我通过体检，我将获准去月球居住。 If I pass the physical examination, I will be permitted to move to t

3、he moon.,四、连句成篇 It was 7：00 when I woke up this morning. I got up quickly because I had an important meeting to attend at 9：00 in Tianjin. When I was having a shower, my robot prepared breakfast for me. I got in my car and set the destination and the arrival time, and then the car sent me to the rig

4、ht place on time. After the meeting, I visited some factories. They had solved the problem of air pollution, so I could breathe fresh air. I had a physical examination at 3：00 this afternoon. If I pass it, I will be permitted to move to the moon. Im looking forward to it.,亮点点评 亮点一：本文想象丰富，按照时间的先后顺序介绍

5、了一天的工作和生活情况，思路清晰，是一篇不错的范文。 亮点二：本文运用了多种复杂的句式结构，如和是when引导的时间状语从句；是because引导的原因状语从句；是(本句中第三个)and连接的并列句；是if引导的条件状语从句。这些复杂的句式结构的运用避免了文章句式的单调性，体现了作者具有较深的语言功底。,亮点三：文中还运用了许多高级词汇，如on timebe permitted to do sth.look forward to sth.等，大大提升了文章的档次。,写作提升 前一段时间，央视曾推出专栏节目中国梦我的梦你的梦想是什么，该节目引发网友的热议。请你结合该节目，根据自己高三的学情以及以

6、下提示，完成一篇短文。,注意：1.词数：120词左右。 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ 【自己动手写一写】 _,【范文背诵】 Almost everyone has many beautiful dreams. Some may want to improve their living conditions. Some may want to receive good education. And some may want to become wealthy and successful. As for me, being admitted into a famous universi

7、ty in China is my dream of this year. In my opinion, in addition to material basis, dream also enables us to have a solid foundation for anything significant. Our dream cannot be realized without constant effort.,In order to make our dream a reality, we need to work hard until we succeed. Besides, i

8、t is important to believe in ourselves and believe that we can do it under any circumstances. When we are faced with challenges, selfconfidence is the key to realizing our dreams. Whats more important, we should learn to take chances and risk failure in spite of the difficulties that we might come across. Only in this way can we live a meaningful life with a definite goal.,【亮点点评】 1非谓语动词的使用：being admitted into a famous university in China is.体现了作者的扎实写作功底。 2高级词汇：in addition to material basis, without constan