雅思大作文四段式

1、How to achieve band 7,IELTS Writing,Leon,四段式 概述,Introduction Body Paragraph 1 (BP 1) Body Paragraph 2 (BP 2) Conclusion,四段式 构思 Plan = Brain Strom + Organise,Prons,Cons,1. 2. 3.,1. 2. 3. 4.,四段式 构思 Plan = Brain Strom + Organise,根据之前优缺点的分析，哪种有思路写哪种。确定文章结构,四段式 如何写Introduction,Introduction 简单明了两句话 转述题目句

2、+ 中心思想句 第一句简单的转述题目 第二句用although 或者 while 句型来提出自己的观点,四段式 如何写Introduction,举个例子 These days, an increasing number of youngsters choose to work or study overseas. Although this might be frowned upon by some for certain reasons, I tend to contend that young people are likely to benefit from overseas exper

3、ience. Technological progress has taken place throughout the course of human history. While early technologies certainly changed the lives of normal people, I believe that recent breakthroughs have had an even greater impact.,四段式 如何写BP,Firstly, Secondly and Finally structure (FSF段式) 中心句 观点一+论述一 观点二+

4、论述二 观点三+论述三 总结句,四段式 如何写BP,Firstly, Secondly and Finally structure (FSF段式) 举个例子 Topic: The disadvantages of living in a city. 先想出几个可写观点 尽量简单、具体会有助于写作 用简单的思路去说服自己，不要用中文的思维去反驳质疑自己的观点 想不出多的就把大的细分,四段式 如何写BP,Firstly, Secondly and Finally structure (FSF段式) 生活成本高、社会问题多、生活质量差,四段式 如何写BP,Firstly, Secondly and

5、Finally structure (FSF段式) City lives have several drawbacks. Firstly, the cost of living in a city is usually higher than in a small town or village. For example, inhabits of cities often have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Secondly, urban ares tend to suffer from social

6、 problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparsion with rural areas. Finally, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and streets and public transport system are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealty and stressful. (93 words, Band 9),中心

7、句 观点一+论述一 观点二+论述二 观点三+论述三 总结句,四段式 如何写BP,反面论述段 只论述 只论述，不反驳。 基本和正面的FSF结构段写法差不多,四段式 如何写BP,反驳段 论述+反驳 委婉语气论述反面观点，然后再反驳 Those people who think . might argue with that . Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, . Therefore, .,四段式 如何写BP,反驳段 举个例子 Some people think sport games can bring peace to our society, y

8、et some believe that it may cause tension between nations 我的观点是体育可以带来和平，在第一段FSF论述后，第二段如下，进行反面论述。 On the other hand, there are many conflicts related to sport games, and this might be why some people think sports would cause tension between nations. For example, some fans might have arrgessive action

9、s after the team that they favour lost. Nevertheless, in my opinion, the major reason of why certain sport fans tend to have offensive actions is that they lack good manners themselves, and the games are just being an excuse for their bad behaviours. Therefore, sports are not to blame for such confl

10、icts, and it would in fact improve relationship between nations if the players and fans of both sides repect each other. 自己写的，语言不太地道，可能有语病，但是7分段没问题。,四段式 如何写BP,Causes and solutions 段（遇见原因+方法的文） 用类似于FSF 段落的写法，只要ideas丰富，很容易组织起来的。,四段式 如何写Conclusion,Conclusion 短小精简 重述观点 不引入新的东西 只用 In conclusion, 开头，不需要用别

11、的（To sum up 等等）,四段式 如何写Conclusion,举个例子 In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education. In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect peoples choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators. In co

12、nclusion, the issue of smoking is challenging and complex, but it is by no means insurmountable. The measures mentioned above would be effective ti prevent more people from smoking In conclusion, i believe that the government should take measures to strictly regulate the violent contents in movies.,

13、四段式 如何整体布局（第一种）,Introduction BP 1 (FSF 正面论述) BP 2 (反驳式 反驳反面) Conclusion,四段式 如何整体布局（第一种）举个例子,People have different attitudes towards changes. Although some individuals prefer to do one job in their lives, I tend to believe that it would be better if we are used to changes. To begin with, changes can

14、in fact have beneficial outcomes. Firstly, the experience of engaging in different occupations would be an advantage for careers. This is because employers usually value those with a wide range of working skills. Secondly, adapting to a new working environment also means meeting new colleagues and f

15、riends, and this is likely to enlarge ones social circle. Therefore, I think people, especially youngsters, can benefit from changes by gaining various living and working experience. On the other hand, those who avoid changes in their lives also have understandable reasons. One concern might be that

16、 people would have to learn new professional skills to adapt to the new position, which seems to be counterproductive. Additionally, some individuals do not want to change jobs simply because they are satisfied with the current ones. However, as far as I am concerned, we should learn how to adapt to

17、 changes anyway because the whole world is changing rapidly itself. As a result, less and less occupations can be regarded as life-long today. For example, many postmen might lose their jobs, even if they have been doing it well, because of the ubiquity of Emails. In conclusion, people should get us

18、ed to changes. This is not only because changes can often be positive, but they are sometimes inevitable. （自己写的，估计7分）,四段式 如何整体布局（第二种）,Introduction BP 1 (FSF 正面论述) BP 2 (FSF 论述反方观点) Conclusion 正论和反论的顺序可变,四段式 如何整体布局（第二种）举个例子,Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each othe

19、r, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past. There are t

20、wo main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices

21、 are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend

22、 on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care. However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We

23、also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology

24、, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world. In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.,四段式 如何整体布局（第三种）,Introduction BP 1 (从一个角度用 FSF 正面论述 ) BP 2 (从另一个角度 FSF 正面论述) Conclus

25、ion,四段式 如何整体布局（第三种）举个例子,band9tourismItissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments.Icompletelydisagreewiththisidea.Theargumentinfavourofhigherpricesforforeigntouristswouldbethatculturalandhistoricalattractionsoftendependonstatesubsidiestokeepthemgoing,whichmeansthatresidentpopulationalreadypaysforthesesitesthroughthetaxsystem.However,Ibelievethistobeaveryshortsightedview.Foreigntouristscontributetotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices,includingfood,s