2013英语六级考试之翻译、写作评分标准及样卷

1、2013年12月份六级考试 作文翻译,For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of information explosion by referring to the saying “a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being

2、 distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.,审题： 1. the impact of information explosion(negative impact) 2. citing the saying 3. examples and measures,一、评分标准,2分（2-4）条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分（5-7）基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分（

3、8-9）基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分（11-13）切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分（14-15）切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 (注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。),评分原则 ： Global Scoring 启示：转变思路，四级作文不要写的过于随意，完全按自己的意图来写，而是应该揣测阅卷老师喜欢看到什么养的文章。 阅卷老师喜欢的文章的特点： 字迹工整，卷面清晰，结构明晰， 句式复杂，词汇多变，语言闪光， 紧扣提纲

4、，论证充分，字数合理。 应该用一些能够显示、证明自己英语水平的句子或词语,语言第一位（句式多变+词汇升级） 结构第二位（三段论，总分总原则，123原则，关联词eg. In addition, moreover, furthermore, however, whereas） 内容第三位(围绕主题进行论证，不跑题即可，不需要创新),14分,The rapid development of technology has accelerated the accumulation of information. Nowadays, when you turn on your computers, ton

5、s of information will be at your fingertips. It is no exaggeration to say that we are entering an age of information explosion.,Though information can benefit us, too much of it can also create a poverty of attention, as a saying shows, because we are likely to be distracted by the irrelevant inform

6、ation and fail to concentrate on what were interested in. For example, when we surf the Internet to find some information we need for our essay writing or study, plenty of irrelevant information rushes into our sight. We will have to, as a result, distinguish the useful from the junk information, wh

7、ich is time-consuming and may also add the chance of errors.,To avoid being distracted by irrelevant information, we should, first of all, try to concentrate on what we really want and pay no attention to other things. Secondly, we can use the website better by using more accurate key words. Finally

8、, measures should be taken by authority to alleviate the influence of the information explosion.,评语: 语言流畅规范，内容较丰富，逻辑层次清楚，思想连贯，语言干净利落，结构丰富，允许一两处小的语言错误。,11分,As communication technology develops faster, we gradually enter a period of information explosion. It brings opportunities and also problems. As

9、the famous saying goes, a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. I strongly favor the point.,There are several examples in our life. Students in college find themselves addicted in social network. They cant concentrate on their courses and homework for there is always new information

10、hidden in their phones and computers. This phenomenon results in loss of knowledge absorption and deep thoughts. Another example is relying too much on information. Whatever people do, they want to search all medias such as newspaper, magazines and networks. However, if a person spends most of his t

11、ime on searching and collecting information, he would be lack of time to digest.,How can we save ourselves in such situation? First of all, learn to concentrate on what we are doing and resist the temptation from phones and network. Additionally, when we need to collect some information, try not to

12、be bothered and distracted by the irrelevant and junk information. 评语： 思路清晰，内容表达完整，但不够丰满，句子结构平淡，连贯性差，逻辑表达不够到位，有少量语言错误，但基本上没有低级语言错误。缺乏精彩之处，有表达不准确不到位之处。,8分,In nowadays, peoples life has changed deeply with the development of science technology and society. We can easily get a lot of information throug

13、h kinds of ways like TV, Internet, newspaper, radio and so on. In a word, its a information explosion society. Information explosion makes our living easily. If you want to buy a ticket, just open your computer. If you want to read newspaper, just read your cellphone and App can help you. How conven

14、ient it is!,But a saying goes that “a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.” We have to recognize that there are many kinds of useless information appear in our eyes everyday and they bother our normal life more or less. So what can I do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant inform

15、ation. In my opinion, I just drop the irrelevant information what is meaningless to my life. The first thing is that you must know what information is useful for you. The other way to avoid being distracted is reading more and more books to expand your horizon!,评语： 内容较完整，句子结构还在，基本都能看懂，但表达不到位，各种语言错误太

16、多，大约有1/3的句子有错。但时态、语法、拼写、人称等方面都有错。有少量严重错误，背了一些词汇和句式，但用起来有些生搬硬套。学会说问题，驾驭句子的能力不是很好。英语表达受母语影响较明显。,5分,It is known that we are now at the information stage, and more and more media instruments are producted. Our society is filled with the information explosion. People dont need to stay at home wait for th

17、e news time. Instead of that, the majority of them who own mobile phone can scan the news in Weibo and other useful Apps. Nowdays, people can easily public news and informations they met, just by photograh the event and put it on the Internet. In a short time, it will reveal many comments and many o

18、ther people know that.,Due to the connvenience of the approach to get information and communication about what happened, the information explosion break. Now matter how important or unimportant, the information gives off on the Internet, and whether it is true or not, most people believe in it. That

19、 result in lack attention to true information.,So, in my opinion, we should prevent us from being lost ourself in information explosion. We should think it over before we begin to make comments on the information which we get in the internet. 评语： 错误满目皆是，偶尔有几个对句子，有一些错误让人不知所云。但能明白大部分意思且基本切题，句子结构简单，汉式英

20、语较明显，严重结构性语言错误较多。,3分,Nowadays, with the encominog the technology development, people are more and more easy get information from different medias. Such as cell-phone, Internet, Newsdays that give people such huge conveient could at their likes news. In contrast, booming news every where lead readers

21、 wrong, and cause them make not good idea.,But we involving a big huge data. We can not refused the booming news everyday. So we need to learning a skill which can distract us the news. Moreover, we need to taking action to avoided harm us the irrelevant information. First of all, read books more an

22、d more, which can premote our thinking ability. Then, we can choice the information that display some good idea to read. Finally, I adcice government could take some law to cut the raal and virturle world informatioin.,In my point, we students as a high degree people, we should dayly do more positiv

23、e things. Also we can relevant information in local. Finally, if everyone could do some positive things and it avoid some no-good news, our courty will become better. 评语： 逻辑混乱，句句有错。有一些词汇，甚至一些大词，但用得不恰当，内容还是与作文题目相关。,翻译,1. 中国人自古以来就在中秋时节庆祝丰收。 2. 这与北美地区庆祝感恩节的习俗十分相似。 3. 过中秋节的习俗于唐代早期在中国各地开始流行。 4. 中秋节在农历八月十

24、五，是人们拜月的节日。 5. 这天夜晚皓月当空，人们合家团聚，共赏明月。 6. 2006年，中秋节被列为中国的文化遗产，2008年又被定为公共假日。 7. 月饼被视为中秋节不可或缺的美食。 8. 人们将月饼作为礼物馈赠亲友或在家庭聚会上享用。 9.传统的月饼上带有“寿（longevity）”、“福”或“和”等字样。,翻译评分标准,本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次；13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标准如下： 13-15分：译文准确表达了原文的意思。用词贴切，行文流畅，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 10-12分： 译文基本上表达了原文的意思。文字较

25、连贯，但又少量语言错误。 7-9分：译文勉强表达了原文的意思。文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6分：译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思。连贯性差，有相当多的严重语言错误。 1-3分： 除个别词语或句子，绝大部分文字没有表达原文意思。 0分：未作答，或只有几个孤立地词，或译文与原文毫不相关。,参考答案,1. 中国人自古以来就在中秋时节庆祝丰收。 1. Since ancient times, the Chinese have celebrated the harvest during mid-autumn. During/ around,2. 这与北美地区庆祝感恩节的习俗十

26、分相似。 2. It is quite similar to the celebration of Thanksgiving in North America.,3. 过中秋节的习俗于唐代早期在中国各地开始流行。 3. The custom of celebrating it as a festival started to gain popularity all over China during the early Tang Dynasty. Became popular,4. 中秋节在农历八月十五，是人们拜月的节日。 4. The festival falls on the 15th d

27、ay of the eighth month of the lunar calendar. It is a festival on which people worship the moon. Admire/ worship,5. 这天夜晚皓月当空，人们合家团聚，共赏明月。 5. On this day, a full bright moon hangs in the sky and families get together to enjoy the bright moon. Watch/ appreciate,6. 2006年，中秋节被列为中国的文化遗产，2008年又被定为公共假日。 6.

28、 The Mid-autumn Festival was listed as Chinas cultural heritage in 2006, and made a public holiday in 2008.,7. 月饼被视为中秋节不可或缺的美食。 7. Moon cakes are regarded as an indispensable delicacy during the Mid-Autumn Festival. Indispensable/ necessary delicacy./ food,8. 人们将月饼作为礼物馈赠亲友或在家庭聚会上享用。 8. They are give

29、n as gifts to relatives and friends or eaten at family gatherings.,9.传统的月饼上带有“寿（longevity）”、“福”或“和”等字样。 9. Traditional mooncakes bear on top the Chinese characters for “longevity”, “happiness” or “harmony”. Bear sth on the top,a celebration or other special event falls on a particular day or date, i

30、t happens to be on that day or date. 适逢 (某日),If something bears a particular mark or characteristic, it has that mark or characteristic. 带有 (标记或特征) The houses bear the marks of bullet holes and the streets are practically deserted. 房屋带有子弹的痕迹，街道几乎是被废弃了。 例： .notepaper bearing the presidential seal. 盖有

31、总统印章的信笺。,14分,1.2. Chinese people started to celebrate the harvest in mid-autumn from the ancient times, which is similar to the customs of celebrating the Thanksgiving Day in north America. 3. The custom of Mid-autumn Festival has been popular all over the country since the early Tang Dynasty. 4. It

32、 is on August 15th in lunar calendar and is a festival for people to show their respect and worship to the moon.,5. At that night, with the bright and beautiful moon hanging in the sky, families will get together to appreciate the bright moon. 6. In 2006, Mid-autumn Festival was listed as a Chinese

33、cultural heritage and later in 2008 the public holiday. 7. The moon cake is also regarded as an essential dish of feast. 8. People send moon cakes as gifts to their relatives and friends, or enjoy the cakes in family parties. 9. There are also some characters on the moon cakes, such as “Shou”(Longev

34、ity), “Fu”(luck), and “He”(harmony).,12分,1. 2. Chinese people have been celebrating harvest on mid-autumn since long time ago, which is quite similar to the tradition of having Thanksgiving Day in Northern America. 3. The custom of celebrating Mid-Autumn Festival started to be popular all over China

35、 in Tang Dinasty. 4. The Mid-Autumn Festival, on Aug. 15th in lunar calendar, is a festival for people to admire the moon.,5. On this day each year, the moon is always round and bright at night, and families get together to enjoy the beautiful scene of the moon. 6. In addition, the Mid-Autumn Festiv

36、al was listed in the Chinese Cultural Relic in 2006, and it was set to be a rest day for all of Chinese in 2008. 7. Moreover, the moon cakes are the delicious food that cannot be deserted. 8. People usually give them to relatives and friends as gifts or enjoy them on the meal shared with family. 9.

37、The traditional moon cakes have some characters on them, which means longevity, luck and peace.,8分,Chinese people are used to celebrate the good harvest at the middle autumn in a long history. This is very similar to the custom of the Thanksgiving in some places such as the USA, Canada and so on. Th

38、is custom became popular in lots of place of China at the early Tang. The Mid-Autumn Festival is at 15th August of the calendar, when people watch the moon and pray for it.,5. The moon is big and light in the sky at night, the family members often sit together and watch the moon. 6. This festival became the cultural thing of China in 2006, and it became a politic holiday in 2008. The mooncake is the necessary and delicious food at this day. People often given the mooncake to their friends and families as a gift or have this