M4U1 writing(人物写作)--课件

1、,How to describe a person of achievement?,Writing,Jane Goodall,Jane Goodall,Jane has helped people understand more about the chimps and tried hard to protect them. Because of her research, we now know that chimps hunt and eat meat. Jane strongly believes that animals should be left in the wild and n

2、ot used for entertainment and advertisement. She has helped to set up special places for the chimps to live safely.,Para. 1,Para. 2,Para. 3,Her contributions,Comments(评价）,Jane Goodall is a great woman who has studied the families of chimps for many years. She was born in Britain. In 1960,she went to

3、 Africa to study the chimps in their environment.,General information,People all over the world think highly of Jane Goodall. Her spirit inspires all of us to be determined and devoted.,topic sentence,supporting details,Jane Goodall,Jane Goodall is a great woman who has studied the families of chimp

4、s for many years. She was born in Britain. In 1960,she went to Africa to study the chimps in their environment.,People all over the world think highly of Jane Goodall. Her spirit inspires all of us to be determined and devoted.,Lin Qiaozhi,Lin Qiaozhi ,a great woman doctor, was a specialist in women

5、s illnesses. She lived from 1901 to 1983. In 1929, She graduated from university and got a doctors degree in gynecology(妇科学）. Lin Qiaozhi worked hard to improve the medical work for Chinese women and children. She devoted herself to cutting down the death rate from having and caring for babies. She

6、wrote a book to teach women to keep babies clean and healthy. During her life she helped deliver 50,000 babies. She was regarded as one of the greatest women in the world. Her kindness, devotion and selflessness encourage all of us to learn from her.,General information,Her contributions,Comments(评价

7、）,sb was a great woman/man/a doctorwho, help sb. do. try hard to do work (hard) to do devote to,Read the two passages again and find some useful sentence patterns or phrases to describe a person of achievement,think highly of,inspire sb to do,encourage sb to do,be regarded as,be born in,5. get a doc

8、tors/masters degree in,4. graduate from,3. lived from to,5. get the Nobel Prize for gain receive win 6. sb was given the Nobel Prize for,Structure - 总分总 para.1: general information about the person- birth date, birth place, education para.2:the achievements, discoveries or contributions para.3:peopl

9、es opinion Paragraph: topic sentence supporting details,Summary,structure,Para. 3,Para. 2,Para.1,General information,Contributions,Comments,How to describe a Person of Achievement,Evaluation (评价）,clear structure3 paragraphs topic sentence and supporting details correct and proper sentence patterns a

10、nd phrases,How do we decide whether your writing is good or not?,Your school is going to hold a writing competition about “a person of achievement”. You are going to write something about Madam Curie according to the following given information.,Writing time,Madam Curie,Madam Curie tried hard to dis

11、cover new elements. We know Po and Ra now because of her hard work. She got the Nobel Prize for physics in1903. Eight years later, she got the Nobel Prize again, but for chemistry. They were great honours for her hard work. -万腾 She worked hard day and night in order to help people to learn more new

12、things. She gained . Also she was given -宁子雯,In 1891, she went to Paris where she studied for four years. With four years effort, she got two masters degrees in Because of her study, we know Po and Ra which we used in many areas. -王姝 She studied so hard that 4 years later, she got two masters degree

13、s in physics and chemistry.-付豪 Thanks to Madam Curie, we learn about Po and Ra now. -付力维,To be honest, its very difficult for a woman to gain two Nobel Prizes. She inspires us to study hard and devote ourselves to do which we like. -董雨霏 She inspires us to study hard, and her action make us look up t

14、o her.-回凤 Her experience inspires people all over the world that we should never give up and keep doing the things which we think is right.- 王钰玮,We will never forget what she did for the world. -启元 She has left an extraordinary impression on all of us for her determination and great devotion. -沙丽君 S

15、he was thought one of the greatest women in the world and her spirit inspired us to study harder and harder.-马伯轩,李玥,Madam Curie was a great woman scientist who devoted herself to the research of physics and chemistry. She was born in Poland and lived from 1867 to 1934. She went to Paris to study and

16、 after four years she finally got the masters degrees of physics and maths. Madam Curie spent her whole life discovering new elements. Because of her research, we now know Po and Ra which were the greatest discovery at that time. In 1903, she gain the Nobel Prize for physics and then the Nobel Prize

17、 for chemistry in1911.,Madam Curie is thought one of the greatest women of the world and she deserved it. Her spirit always encouraged us to study harder. Her experiences and achievements moved me and make me struggle for my life.,霍钰,Madam Curie was a great scientist who devoted herself to the physi

18、cs and chemistry research all her life. She was born in Poland and lived from 1867 to 1934. In 1891, she went to Paris to have further study. After four years effort, she got a masters degree in both physics and maths. Madam Curie devoted herself to finding new element all her life. Because of her p

19、ersistence, she tried her best to do her work, she made many contributions for the world. According to her research, we have already learned Po and Ra. Whats more, she received the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1903. Later on, she got the Nobel Prize for Chemistry in1911.,Madam Curie is regarded as one

20、 of the greatest women in the world. People all over the world think highly of her selflessness and her outstanding contributions. Her spirit of selflessness, determined and persistence encourage all of us to learn from her.,One possible version,Madam Curie，a great physicist and chemist，spent all he

21、r life on physics and chemistry research. She was born in Poland and lived from 1867 to 1934. In 1891,she went to Paris to study. Four years later, she got two masters degrees in physics and math. Madam Curie devoted herself to discovering new chemistry elements. Because of her research, we now know

22、 Po and Ra. In 1903 she got the Nobel Prize for Physics and again in 1911 she won the Nobel Prize for Chemistry. Madam Curie is regarded as one of the greatest women in the world. Her spirit inspires many of us to work hard.,1. Birthday and birth place was/ were born in (place)in(year/month)/ on (date) 2. Family background was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family 3. Education background be admitted to (college ) graduat