摘要错误答案2013博士.ppt

1、1). 探讨人包皮成纤维细胞的生物学特性，为人胚胎生殖细胞长期体外培养打下基础。 wrong:To study the biologic characters of human foreskin fibroblasts, so we can lay the foundation for a long-term culture for human embryonic germ cells in vitro. Correct: To study the biologic characteristics of human foreskin fibroblasts to (in order to )(

2、so as to) lay the foundation for a long-term culture of human embryonic germ cells in vitro.,2)观察不同剂量的当归多糖对D-半乳糖致衰老小鼠模型是否具有抗衰老作用. wrong: This study was designed to investigate whether there was effect on anti-aging caused by D-gallactase in rats which were injected with ASP in a certain dose. Correc

3、t: To investigate whether ASP at a certain dose (at different doses) (different doses of ASP) has (have)any anti-aging effect on aging mouse models induced by D-gallactase.,1. 无主语句子 1)应用甲基丙烯酸甲酯对兔肝动脉（HA)和门静脉(PV)进行铸型再用扫描电子显微镜观察肝内微循环分布 wrong: Using methyl methaorylate to produce the corrosin casts, obs

4、erve the HA, PV and BD by scanning electron microscopy Correct: The corrosin casts of hepatic artery and portal vein of rabbits were made with the use of methyl methaorylate. Intrahepatic microcirculation was observed by scanning electron microscopy.,回顾分析了687例颅内新生物的临床资料。 Wrong: Retrospectively analy

5、ze the clinical data of 687 cases of intracranial颅内的neoplasms新生物 Correct: The clinical data of 687 cases of intracranial neoplasms were analyzed retrospectively.,随机检查20例患阻塞性睡眠呼吸暂停综合征患者，应用螺旋CT和MR 检查患者，并归纳所有患者的症状。 Wrong: Randomly check-up 20 patients of OSAS(obstructive sleep apnea syndrome), and appl

6、ied spiral CT and MR examinations for them and sum up symptoms, for all the patients. Correct: 20 patients with OSAS were randomly selected and examined by spiral CT and MR. The symptoms of all patients were summed up.,主语不当 1) 所有病例均拔除4个第一双尖牙。 Wrong：All cases were extracted 4 premolars（尖牙） Correct： 4

7、 premolars were extracted from all patients. 4 premolars were extracted in all cases.,3)在深度麻醉下灌注4%的多聚甲醛固定 nDB和nDnB组的组织，然后去除6-8段胸椎的脊髓。 Wrong: Group nDB and nDnB were directly fixed tissue through infusing 4% parafomaldehyde under deep anesthesia, then extracted spinal cord of thoracic 6-8. Correct: T

8、issues in Group nDB and Group nDnB were fixed through the infusion of 4% parafomaldehyde under deep anesthesia; then the spinal cord of thoracic segment 6-8 was extracted.,记录是否有皮肤瘙痒，肝功能结果，血肝胆酸，羊水污染情况，分娩方式，分娩孕周，新生儿评分。 Wrong: Maternal pruritus, liver function test, glycocholic acid, amniotic fluid con

9、dition, the time and the way of termination of pregnancy, Apgar score were examined. Correct: Maternal pruritus were diagnosed. Liver function, glycocholic acid, and amniotic fluid were tested. The time and way of termination of pregnancy , and Apgar score were recorded.,Correct: Sprague-Dawley rats

10、 were induced to develop liver cirrhoses through hypodermic injection of carbon tetrachloride olive oil solution (400ml/L), intragastrically lavaged with ASP solution of different concentrations for 14 days, and peritoneally injected with endotoxin (3mg/kg). The time (length)of coma and the number o

11、f coma rats were recorded within 12h. The ammonia concentration in blood plasma was determined. The apoptotic cells and GFAP positive cells were counted. Glutamine synthetase was analyzed by western blotting.,病例组非沉淀性淀粉酶水平与对照组无明显差异。 Wrong：The nonprecipitated amylase levels of the patients were not di

12、fferent from the controls. Correct：The nonprecipitated amylase levels in the patients were not different from those in the controls.,烧伤组IFITI表达较正常对照组显著增高，烧伤组JABI表达较正常对照组显著降低。 Wrong: After burned, the expression level of hepatic IFITI significantly increased than normal control, and the expression le

13、vel of JABI significantly decreased than normal control. Correct:In the burns group, the expression level of hepatic IFITI significantly increased , while the expression level of JABI significantly decreased , as compared with those in the normal control group. 或： The expression level of hepatic IFI

14、TI was significantly higher in the burns group than in the normal control group, while the expression level of JABI was significantly lower in the burns group than in the normal control group.,B组神经元数量、阳性细胞、评分在多个时相点要好于A组。 Wrong: B group was significantly higher than A group in multitude time point fo

15、r neurons, GAP-43 positive cells, BBB score. Correct:At multitude time points, the number of neurons and GAP-43 positive cells were bigger, and BBB scores were higher in group B than in group A . 或：group B demonstrated a bigger number of neurons and GAP-43 positive cells , and higher BBB scores than group A,句子短语化 无水乙醇注射治疗17 例, 出现并发症2例;开腹手术48例,复发4例; 腹腔镜手术21例,复发1例。 Wrong: Injection of ethanol (17 cases): recurrence 2 cases (11%). Open surgery (48 cases): recurrence 4 cases (8.3%). Laparoscopic surgery (21 cases): recurrence 1 case( 4.