概要写作指导Getting up early.ppt

1、a,1,概要写作指导,a,2,提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； (3)上下文的连贯性； (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。,a,3,评分原则 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。 词数少于40或多于80的，从总分中减去2分。 评分时，应主要从以下4个方面考虑： 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 书写较差

2、以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。,(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； (3)上下文的连贯性； (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。,a,4,a,5,Summary:,Summary is a short passage giving the main points of an original article.,What is a summary?,What should we pay attention to when we write a summary?,文体,时态,人称,主题,write a summary,记叙文,议论文,说明文,a,6,概要写作解

3、题步骤： 一、区别文体，看清结构； （文体+结构） 二、把握大意，找主题句； （大意+主题句） 三、分析段落，切中要点； （段落+要点） 四、同意置换，串句成文。 （置换+串联）,a,7,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the who

4、le day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some thing

5、s more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day. Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That is why many people getting up early do physica

6、l exercise year after year. We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the breakfast for the whole family. Children will have enough time t

7、o catch the school bus, and husband will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is in order. What a harmonious scene! However, if we get up late, well probably have to do everything in a great hurry, making it in a mess. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit. If you are a late

8、 riser, you may find it difficult to form the habit of getting up early. You will have to make efforts to do so. If you want to get up early, sleeping earlier the night before expect to be successful. Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone whom you know will be awake at that time to ca

9、ll you. If you stick to getting up early every day, you will certainly benefit a lot from it.,reasons,topic/phenomenon,suggestions,a,8,体裁：_ 主题：_ 结构：_,Step 1. Read for the topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）,Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息),Step 3. paraphrase (改写),

10、Step 4. polish the passage (改良),Write a summary with the steps& tips,Step 1. Read for the topic and structure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）,expository writing(说明文),getting up early,topic() reasons() suggestions(),a,9,Step 2. Explore for the key information of each paragraph (划主题句,找关键信息),Write a summary with the ste

11、ps& tips,Getting up early is of great importance to us all.,para.1:,para.2:,In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.,para.3:,If we get up early and do some morning exercise, Without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier.,para.4:,We will

12、 also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day ,para.5:,sleeping earlier the night before Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone to call you.,a,10,Write a summary with the steps& tips,Getting up early is of great importance to us all.,para.1:,2. It

13、 is _.,1.Getting up early is of great _ to us all. /Getting up early is _ to us all.,3. Getting up early plays_ in our life.,4. We should attach great importance to getting up early./Great importance should be attached to getting up early.,Step 3. paraphrase (改写),significance,significant,important f

14、or us to get up early.,an important part,Tips: 1). paraphrase with synonyms(同义词) 2). rewrite sentence structure(改句型),a,11,Write a summary with the steps& tips,In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.,para.2:,1. We are usually in the best conditions with

15、_ of a day.,2.In the morning,we can learn more things because of the freshest air and peoples best conditions.,3. The reason is that morning is a fantastic time of a day to enjoy the freshest air and the experience of memorizing things quickly.,Step 3. paraphrase (改写),the freshest air,a,12,Write a s

16、ummary with the steps& tips,para.3:,1. _we can be healthier with the help of exercise.,If we get up early and do some morning exercise, Without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier.,2.We can be increasingly healthy by _in the morning.,3. Whats more, people who stick to physical ex

17、ercise in the morning, thus, have stronger bodies.,4. Getting up early to do some physical exercise can help us keep healthy.,Step 3. paraphrase (改写),There is no boubt that,working out,a,13,Write a summary with the steps& tips,para.4:,We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for ou

18、r work or study of the day ,1.It enables us to _the day.,2. Time will be _.,3. Whats more beneficial is that enough time can be got to make a plan for work or study of the day if we get up early.,4. Whats more, not only can we have much time to make a schedule but also make prepartions for our work

19、and study.,Step 3. paraphrase (改写),5. And the most important thing is that getting up early can help us do everything in order and let us make good use of the limited time.,make good preparations for,enough for us to make preparations for the day.,a,14,Write a summary with the steps& tips,para.5:,sl

20、eeping earlier the night before Besides, you can set your alarm clock or ask someone to call you.,1.Sleeping ealier and setting an alarm clock or asking someone to call us are the _ for the late risers.,2.Finally, we should try some proper ways to make ourselves stick to getting up early, such as, s

21、leeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or ask someone to call us.,3. However, if you are a lazy man, why not make use of an alarm clock or ask someonr for help.,Step 3. paraphrase (改写),4. As a late riser, you can overcome it by sleeping early and setting an alarm clock or asking.,suggestions,a,1

22、5,Step 3. paraphrase (改写),Write a summary with the steps& tips,Getting up early is of great importance to us all., the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.,para.1:,para.2:,para.4:,para.5:,Without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Thats why do phys

23、ical exercise,We will also have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day ,Getting up early is significant to us all.,We are usually in the best conditions with the freshest air of a day.,para.3:,We can be increasingly healthy by working out in the morning.,It enables

24、 us to make a good preparation for the day.,sleeping earlier the night before Besides, you can set your alarm oclock or ask someone to call you.,Sleeping ealier and set an alarm clock or ask someone to call you are the suggestions for the late risers.,a,16,Step 4. polish (改良),Tip3: Polish with conne

25、ctives(连接词) to make it coherent(连贯).,Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to getting up early. _, morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the freshest air and have a more accurate memory. _, people who stick to physical exercise in the morning will be in better health._, getting up e

26、arly can enable us to make good preparations for the day. _, sleeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or turning to others are the suggestions for the late risers.,a,17,Since ancient times, great importance has been attached to getting up early. Firstly, morning is a fantastic time to enjoy the f

27、reshest air and have a more accurate memory. Secondly, people who stick to physical exercise in the morning will be in better health. Finally, getting up early can enable us to make good preparations for the day. As a result, sleeping earlier and setting an alarm clock or turning to others are the s

28、uggestions for the late risers.,a,18,No standard answer Nowadays shyness is common and there are several reasons. Firstly, many scientists believe shyness is genetic so that some people are born shy. Secondly, family size might result in shyness. Young children or the only child are more likely to b

29、e shy. Finally, the birth place may lead to shyness. People in Israel are less shy than people in Japan because of different attitudes to failure. To overcome shyness, scientists also give useful suggestions.,a,19,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since an

30、cient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and got up early, we would be energetic the whole day. Nowadays, people still hold the same view. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the

31、 freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than at any other time of the day. Additionally, if we get up early and do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, without doubt we can build our bodies and become much healthier. That