高中英语写作公开课道歉信写作技能提升

1、,假定你是李华，目前在新西兰作交换生。不久前，你在当地一家旅行社（travel agency）预定了“澳大利亚八日游”，但因故不得不取消出游计划。请你给旅行社负责人写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.说明情况 2.表示歉意. 3. 询问是否退还定金（deposit）. 注意：词数100词左右，可适当增加细节。 Dear Sir / Madam, _ yours, Li Hua,新西兰 交换生 旅行社 预定 取消 歉意 澳大利亚八日游,New Zealand an exchange student travel agency book / reserve cancel cancelled cancell

2、ing apologize to sb. for sth. express ones apology for a trip to Australia for 8 days an 8-day Australia trip,How to express apology,1.我写这封信是因取消旅行向你道歉。 2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。 3.对我所做的我感到很抱歉，但我并非故意取消。,I am writing this letter to apologize to you for cancelling the trip.,Please accept my apology for cancelling

3、the trip.,I am really sorry for what I did, but I have no intention to cancel it.,How to express apology,4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境(设身处地为我考虑)，并接受我的道歉。 5.对造成的不变再次表示歉意。,Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.,I really hope you can understand my situation/ think in my position, and accept my apology

4、.,How to express apology,6.错过了这次旅行我感到非常遗憾。 7.我真心希望可以再找一个时间参加你们旅行社组织的旅行团。,I am terribly sorry for missing the trip.,I sincerely hope I can fix another time for a trip organized by your agency.,Dear Sir or Madam, I am li Hua, an exchange student in New Zealand. Last week, I booked a holiday to Austral

5、ia for 8 days in your agency. But now I am sorry to tell you that I have to cancel my booking. (写作目的) I was really looking forward to enjoying the holiday. However, I was informed this morning that I would not be able to take those days off as planned. I do apologize for not letting you know earlier

6、， which I hope will not cause you any problems. Besides, I would be very grateful if you could let me know whether I can get my deposit back at your earliest convenience. （歉意和请求） Yours sincerely,Teaching Objective,Three writing skills:,Attributive Clause There be Because,I hope you can happy every d

7、ay.(婉婷) I am expecting to travel to Australia, where has lovely Kangaroos and breath-taking scenery. (然) I am writting to express my regret.(君) I look forward to receive your letter.(信) And the last question is that whether you can return my deposit. （肖） Australia is a beautiful city that people wan

8、t to go and live. (彦蓉),漏了be 动词,关系词错误,不用双写t,to 是介词啊！,多了一个引导词,还是关系词错误！,I hope you can be happy every day.(婉婷) I am expecting to travel to Australia, which has lovely Kangaroos and breath-taking scenery. (然) I am writing to express my regret.(君) I look forward to receiving your letter.(信) And the last

9、question is that whether you can return my deposit. （肖） Australia is a beautiful city where people want to go and live. (彦蓉),Skill 1,Attributive Clause a. to join sentences b. to expand sentences,Join sentences合成定从,I had to go to the hospital to look after my grandfather. He was very ill. (蓝),I had

10、to go to the hospital to look after my grandfather, who was very ill.,I very like Australia. I went to visit it 12 years ago (峰),I like Australia very much, which I visited 12 years ago.,Join sentences合成定从,Yesterday I received a letter from my family, it said my grandfather was ill. (豪),Yesterday I

11、received a letter from my family, which said my grandfather was ill.,Join sentences合成定从,I will have an important exam on Monday. I cant miss it.,I will have an important exam on Monday, which I cant afford to miss.,Join sentences合成定从,Expand sentences扩展句子,Beijing is a famous historic city.,Beijing is

12、 a famous historic city, _.,which has a long history of more than 3000 years and a large number of historic spots, such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and so on.,Mr.Luo is a warm-hearted man.,Mr.Luo is a warm-hearted man, who always lends a helping hand to others.,Expand sentences扩展句子,Nowadays

13、parents do everything for their only children.,Expand sentences扩展句子,Nowadays parents do everything for their only children, which makes the children rely on their parents badly.,1.I would like to do a part-time job， which _. 2. Class 106 is a big family, which _. 3.President Xi recently advised youn

14、g people not to stay up late，which _. 4.I would like to do voluntary work，which _.,1.I would like to do a part-time job， which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience. 2. Class 106 is a big family, which consists of 19 boys and 37girls. 3.President Xi recently advised young people

15、not to stay up late，which we should bear in mind. 4.I would like to do voluntary work，which allows me to make a contribution to society.,Skill 2,There be,Unluckily, there was something happened on my family.(权) But now there are something made me unexpected.(蓝),Unluckily, there was something happeni

16、ng to my family.,But now there is something unexpected which makes me unable to go travelling.,有许多人持相反意见。 有一条河从城中流过。,There are a number of people holding the opposite opinion. There are a number of people who hold the opposite opinion.,There is a river flowing through the city. There is a river whic

17、h flows.,There be +主语 + 现在分词/定语从句,满山都是学生种的树。 有一个人被困在废墟里。,There are trees all over the mountain planted by students. There are trees all over the mountain which were planted by students.,There is a man trapped in the ruins. There is a man who is trapped in the ruins.,There be +主语 + 过去分词/定语从句,下星期我要参加一

18、个重要的考试。 我有一个会议要参加。,Next week there is going to be an important examination for me to take.,There is a meeting for me to attend.,There be +主语 (for sb ) to do,Skill 3,Because,1.I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go. Because I have just found that I have something to do. (祺婷) 雨君 雨桃 卓文

19、铸斌,I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go travelling because I have just found that I have something important to do.,I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go travelling for the reason that I have just found that I have something important to do.,1.I am terribly sorry t

20、o tell you that I am unable to go. Because I have just found that I have something to do. (祺婷) 雨君 雨桃 卓文 铸斌,Because I am badly ill, I can not take a trip to Australia.,Being badly ill, I can not take a trip to Australia.,Because she saw nobody at home, she left them a note.,Seeing nobody at home, she left them a note.,Because I wrote the essay hurriedly, I made many spelling errors.,Writing the essay hurriedly, I made many spelling errors.,Because I am in bad need of money, I want to get my deposit back.