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1、现象解释模板试题八一、题目：directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：the impact of pesticides on public health and the environment. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤，广大

2、农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所； 2农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现；3我的看法。二、类型：现象解释型三、方法提示：1审题：第一步：结合提纲推断题意：这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步：根据题目给出的提纲可知文章应包含如下三个基本部分：现象部分：随着城市的扩展与日益拥挤，广大农村也成了各种农药的肆虐之所；解释部分：农药对人们健康及生态环境的影响和表现；表明作者态度部分：我的看法。完全符合现象解释型作文的结构。2选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。3结合题意套用模板：现象解释四级作文模板。四、范文与点评1.模板一：it is true that _. nowadays,_. what impr

3、esses us most is _. of course, _.there is also a growing concern over _. the main reason for this is _. what is more, _. as a result, _.considering all these reasons, personally, _. on the one hand, _. (11) on the other hand, _. (12) in a word, _.2.范文范文点评the impact of pesticides on public health and

4、 the environmentit is true that over the past thirty years or so the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. nowadays while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also bee

5、n affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. what impresses us most is that there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a who report. of course, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people wou

6、ld become victims.there is also a growing concern over the contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. the main reason for this is that fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. what is more, la

7、rge use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. as a result, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.considering all these reasons, personally, despite some beneficial effects on the agricultural i

8、ndustry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the environment. on the one hand, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) on the other hand, research

9、 indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations（异变） and congenital defects（先天缺陷）. (12) in a word, the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.首句通过deteriorate指出一个与人们生

10、活密切相关的问题：在某些领域，科技进步恶化了人们的生活质量。使用连词while点出城市和农村的现存问题，对首句进一步具体化。世卫组织提供的确切数据令人信服地表明问题之严重。urgent measures点明了问题的迫切性起到了承上启下的作用;该句运用了虚拟语气。分词结构sprayed with 与定语从句the people who 用得不错，做到了句型的多样化。endanger进一步阐明的严重后果。表让步关系的介词despite令作者的观点更加客观全面。，(11)从生态及人类健康两方面再次总结出农药的危害。(12)总结全文，提出呼吁。3.模板二：nowadays, wherever you

11、go, _. as is known to all, _. in a word,_.there are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. first, _. second, _. and consequently, _. and finally, _.in fact, _ in the long run. besides, _. (11) and whats more, _. (12) therefore, lets remember

12、that _.4.范文范文点评the impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentnowadays, wherever you go, you will find that the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. as is known to all, while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowd

13、ed due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides. in a word, if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.there are plenty of contributing causes among which, the follo

14、wing ones are particularly worth mentioning. first, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. second, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. and consequently, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, pl

15、ants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered. and finally, the killing of insects by pesticides has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds.in fact, it pays to limit the use of pesticides to t

16、he minimum in the long run, and this would do good to both public health and the environment. besides, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations and congenital defects. (11) and whats more, the killing of insects by pesticides will break the balanc

17、e in the nature. (12) therefore, lets remember that the impact of pesticides on our health, wildlife and the environment has become so urgent a problem that it should not be ignored any more. 首句通过deteriorate指出一个与人们生活密切相关的问题：在某些领域，科技进步恶化了人们的生活质量。使用连词while点出城市和农村的现存问题，对首句进一步具体化。urgent measures点明了问题的迫切

18、性起到了承上启下的作用;该句中运用了虚拟语气。分词结构sprayed with 与定语从句the people who 用得不错，做到了句型的多样化。endanger进一步阐明的严重后果。loss of balance in the ecology点明了农药对环境的最终危害。limit the use与do good to 表明了作者的观点。，(11)从人类健康及生态两方面再次总结出农药的危害。(12)总结全文，呼吁人们关注农药对人类健康及环境的影响。5.模板三： as is known to all, _. for one thing,_. for another,_. it is obvi

19、ous that _.there is an increasing concern over _. first of all, _. in addition, _. therefore, _.as far as i am concerned, _. as we all know, _. (11) furthermore, _. (12) in a word, _.6.范文the impact of pesticides on public health and the environmentas is known to all, over the past thirty years or so

20、 the quality of many peoples lives has deteriorated in some respects because of technological progress. for one thing, nowadays, while towns and cities have become larger and overcrowded due to the growing urban population, the countryside has also been affected by the large-scale use of pesticides.

21、 for another, there are more than 1 million human pesticide poisonings and over 20,000 deaths each year according to a who report. it is obvious that if urgent measures were not adopted to limit the use of pesticides, more and more people would become victims.there is an increasing concern over the

22、contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. first of all, fruit and vegetables sprayed with chemicals may have some poisonous effect upon the people who eat them. in addition, large use of pesticides will pollute the groundwater and surface water. therefore

23、, the people, domestic animals, fish, birds, plants and wildlife living in and using the water would be greatly endangered.as far as i am concerned, despite some beneficial effects on the agricultural industry, large use of pesticides would do considerable harm to our health, wildlife and the enviro

24、nment. as we all know, the killing of insects has resulted in a loss of balance in the ecology, because insects, although a nuisance to farmers, provide food for birds. (11) furthermore, research indicates that long-term effects of pesticide exposure can lead to cancer, mutations and congenital defe

25、cts. (12) in a word, the farmers should limit the use of pesticides to the minimum and we all should preserve the environment both for our children and ourselves.试题九一、题目：directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic： college students job-hunting. you s

26、hould write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1.随着大学的不断扩招，越来越多的毕业生体会到了找工作的压力；2.大学生就业难的原因；3.我的看法。二、类型：现象解释型三、方法提示：1.审题：第一步：结合提纲推断题意：这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步：根据题目给出的提纲可知文章应包含如下三个基本部分：现象部分：随着大学的不断扩招，越来越多的毕业生体会到了找工作的压力；解释部分：大学生就业难的原因；表明作者态度部分：我的看法。完全符合现

27、象解释型作文的结构。2.选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。3.结合题意套用模板：现象解释四级作文模板。四、范文与点评1.模板一：it is true that _. nowadays,_. what impresses us most is _. of course, _.there is also a growing concern over _. the main reason for this is _. what is more, _. as a result, _.considering all these reasons, personally, _. on the on

28、e hand, _. (11) on the other hand, _. (12) in a word, _.2.范文college students job-huntingit is true that with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before.nowadays, college

29、students employment has been a hot topic in china.what impresses us most is that a survey conducted recently suggests that about 80 percent of college students listed pressure in job-hunting as their top headache. of course, many graduates fail to get a satisfactory job and have to lower their expec

30、tations.there is also a growing concern over the various reasons for this phenomenon. the main reason for this is that since chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in china has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the suppl

31、y of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. what is more, most graduates have too high expectations for their future jobs. as a result, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside.considering all these rea

32、sons, personally, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened. on the one hand, the universities employment centers should play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offeri

33、ng comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) on the other hand, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) in a word, it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense competition in

34、the job market. 3.模板二：nowadays, wherever you go, _. as is known to all, _. in a word, _.there are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. first, _. second, _. and consequently, _. and finally, _.in fact, _ in the long run. besides, _. (11) and

35、 whats more, _. (12) therefore, lets remember that _. 4.范文college students job-huntingnowadays, wherever you go, you will find college students employment has been a hot topic in china. as is known to all, with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year,

36、 the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before. in a word, there is a growing concern over the great pressure college graduates face in job-hunting.there are plenty of contributing causes among which, the following ones are particularly worth mentioning. first, s

37、ince chinese colleges and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in china has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. second, most graduates have too high expectations for their fut

38、ure jobs. and consequently, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside. and finally, many employers also raise their standards when recruiting new staff.in fact, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap be

39、tween the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened in the long run. besides, the universities employment centers should also play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) and

40、 whats more, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the market. (12) therefore, lets remember that it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense competition in the job market.5.模板三:as is known to all, _.

41、for one thing,_. for another,_. it is obvious that _.there is an increasing concern over _. first of all, _. in addition, _. therefore, _.as far as i am concerned, _. as we all know, _. (11) furthermore, _. (12) in a word, _.6.范文college students job-huntingas is known to all, nowadays, college stude

42、nts employment has been a hot topic in china.for one thing, with 2.12 million graduates from various universities flooding into the job markets this year, the employment situation for college students is no longer as optimistic as before.for another, a survey conducted recently suggests that about 8

43、0 percent of college students listed pressure in job-hunting as their top headache. it is obvious that many graduates fail to get a satisfactory job and have to lower their expectations.there is an increasing concern over the various reasons for this phenomenon. first of all, since chinese colleges

44、and universities enlarged their enrollment in 1999, the number of college graduates in china has been on the steady rise for the past four years and the supply of graduates is greater than the demand of the market. in addition, most graduates have too high expectations for their future jobs. therefo

45、re, a lot of graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable jobs than go to small cities, let alone the countryside. as far as i am concerned, if both colleges and students take measures, the gap between the employers demands and college students expectations could be shortened. as we

46、all know, the universities employment centers should play a vital role in collecting job information through different channels and offering comprehensive job-hunting services to graduates. (11) furthermore, the students should improve themselves and develop special skills to meet the needs of the m

47、arket. (12) in a word, it calls for the joint effort of the whole society to help graduates to cope with the intense competition in the job market. 试题十一、题目：directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：the role of man in modern family. you should write

48、 at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:1.越来越多的男人参与到家务活或教育子女的活动中；2.男人在工作之余承担家庭义务的原因及优点；3.我的观点。二、类型：现象解释型三、方法提示：1.审题：第一步：结合提纲推断题意：这是一个鲜明的观点。第二步：根据题目给出的提纲可知文章应包含如下三个基本部分：现象部分：越来越多的男人参与到家务活或教育子女的活动中；解释部分：男人在工作之余承担家庭义务的原因及优点；表明作者态度部分：我的观点。完全符合现象解释

49、型作文的结构。2.选择王长喜十二句作文模板中的现象解释型模板。3.结合题意套用模板：现象解释四级作文模板。四、范文与点评1.模板一：it is true that _. nowadays,_. what impresses us most is _. of course, _.there is also a growing concern over _. the main reason for this is _. what is more, _. as a result, _.considering all these reasons, personally, _. on the one h

50、and, _. (11) on the other hand, _. (12)in a word, _.2.范文the role of man in modern familyit is true that in the past men had no real place in the home and that their only real value to their children was to provide for their financial needs. nowadays, with the rapid advancement of our society, our fa

51、mily life have underwent many changes. what impresses us most is that more and more men recognize that bringing up children involves a partnership of equals and their family roles are just as important as their career roles. of course, mens active participation in doing family duties besides earning

52、 money can do a lot of good to their family life.there is also a growing concern over the benefits of male participation in assuming family responsibilities for the healthy development of the child. the main reason for this is that fathers positive and sensitive attitudes toward their babies are rel

53、ated to their childrens problem solving competence later in their childrens lives. what is more, in a family where the roles of men and women are not sharply separated and where many household tasks are shared to a greater or lesser extent, notions of male superiority are hard to maintain. as a resu

54、lt, in such a home, the growing boy and girl can learn to accept that equality more easily than did their parents and to prepare more fully for participation in a world characterized by cooperation rather than by the “battle of the sexes.”considering all these reasons, personally, fathers role in th

55、eir childrens up-bringing is very important. on the one hand, fathers participation in family life can relieve the conflict between work and family responsibilities that many working mothers face. (11) on the other hand, fathers involvement is essential to childrens intellectual and emotional development and children who are disliked by their peers commonly reported havin