丁 看图书面表达.ppt

1、书面表达 （满分30分） 观察下面的一幅漫画，用英语写一篇120词左右 的短文. 要求：1短文应包括图示要点； 2说明图示所隐含的现象问题（学习、教育）； 3发表自己的观点和看法. 参考词汇：解开（包装纸等）unwrap 粽子Zongzi I like reading,Writing with the aid of pictures 看图写作,一、审题 be buried in; concentrate on,寻找答案/ 寻求帮助,search for the solution refer to a book for instructions turn to a book for help a

2、pproach to dealing with,评论内容：,pay attention to /realize/aware of attach significance to emphasize /stress the importance combine with /applyto keep balances between,动手/实践,hands-on Practice experience,It seems that_,2、造句：,A student sits at a table. There is a plate of Zongzi and a cup on the table.He

3、 is reading a book. He doesnt know how to unwrap the Zongzi.,（2）润色：孤独的名词用形容词修饰；孤独的动词用副词修饰 非谓语动词句型、it句型、with句型 、从句、强调句等,A _ student sits at a table with_. It seems that he_ unwrap them. He is just _ a book _ _ trying himself.,（1）以语法正确为先,would rather dothan do,比较好：何康、李松、王光、何金棋,学生存在问题：,Tang wei: A stud

4、ent is referring to a book which is called How to unwrap the Zongzi. So I realized that the student found it difficult to unwrap the Zongzi. He is searching for a good way to unwrap the Zongzi.,问题1、单词短语再三重复,问题3、不符合逻辑关联,The teacher always tell us to refer to books when you dont know how to solve the

5、problem.,Book is death, we are alive. Nowadays many students only know to play and eat.,The education is too foolish.,问题4、表达不地道,问题5、走极端,问题6、调子太高, 建议空泛,问题7、模仿有痕,The educational system should be reformed.,When faced with problems, we dont need to search for it in the book. Its our attitude towards tha

6、t really counts.,Please take out the paper of Book5Unit4. You should make new sentences by using the words or phrases printed in the paper. These sentences should be related to the topic.,第一题 （we do together）10、11、17、27、36 第二题 (第一组) 第三题 （第二组） 第四题 （第三组） 第五题 （第四组） （将新句记录下来）,10、The students can also ac

7、quire the information/knowledge they need from the book.,11、We should not rely heavily on the books.,Have a try. 试一试,17、27、We can get the fact straight from the practice. Whats more, these experience can also update the skills to replace the out-of-date methods in the book.,36、As is often the case w

8、ith students, they often refer to book when faced with problems.,好句共享：,1、The students only depend on the book instead of practice , which makes it impossible for them to adapt to the society. 2、The students tend to attach more importance to the study of textbook, which may result in the limitation t

9、o our thinking. 3、It is not hard for us to draw a conclusion that the students hands-on ability is far from satisfying. 4、we are equipped with much knowledge, but we lack the awareness of practice. 5、There is no denying that we can acquire knowledge from books. However, theory is base on practice. W

10、e can also gain it by doing. 6、Nobody can learn to swim without jumping into water.,四、围绕中心，合理想象，适当发挥,Why and how?,The students tend to attach more importance to the study of textbook. The school should provide them with more activities and experiments.,五、连句成篇、过度自然：加上必要的连接词、句,In addition /moreover/be

11、sides/eventually/ last but not the least/Whats more ,引出问题常用模板句型：（第一段过度到第二段） It is not hard for us to draw a conclusion that The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the issue that The problem that is becoming more and more recently. It is the r

12、eflection of The picture indicates that,导入解决方法的常用句型： （第二段过度到第三段） Faced /Confronted with the issue, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with the situation. To solve the problem, it is high time that we should Effective measures should be taken before things get worse.,命题走向,1、to be a

13、 better leaner 怎样学习 2、to be a better people 怎样做人,From the picture above we can see a student sits at the table with a plate of Zongzi on it. Obviously , he is at a complete loss to unwrap them and eventually refers to a book for instructions. The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that a maj

14、ority of the students lack their basic hands-on ability in everyday life. When faced with problems, they tend to ask for direct information from books instead of practice. There is no denying that we can acquire knowledge from books. However, theory is based on practice. We can also gain it by doing. After all, nobody can learn to swim without jumping into water. Being a student, I think not only should we equip ourselves with much book knowledge, but also we need to develop our hands-