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1、English writing谢家滩镇第三中学叶芳芳,初中英语新课程标准,五级写作目标： 能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材 能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系 能简单描述人物或事件 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明,7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标,中考英语作文8个常考话题,一、介绍人和事件 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等） 二、介绍地点（旅游等） 三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等） 五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历

2、） 七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）,评分标准,怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？,Dear Dr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so d

3、ifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant u

4、nderstand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.,Mary,(the beginning),

5、(the ending),the body（正文）,basic structure(基本结构安排),basic steps(基本写作步骤),search（审：审题） list（列：列纲） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连：连句成文) beautify(美：用谚语/例子修改润色全文),审题：做到三审,体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此

6、次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents

7、. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and

8、 enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Al

9、so some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连(connect),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. The

10、y watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连(connect),美(beautify),We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most

11、 people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. Peo

12、ple who relax well work well.,美(beautify),According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All wo

13、rk and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.,Proverb（谚语）/saying,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the

14、saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”（只工作，不玩耍，聪明的小伙也会变傻） It is good for us students to take exercise.,集中注意力于学习,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/say

15、ing) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,

16、Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.When in Rome,do as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no

17、use crying over spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome. 10.Never too old to learn.,覆水难收。,一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,活到老，学到老。,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇 特别是善用高级词汇,Which is better?,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on

18、 the beach.,Which is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?,他们很早就到了。,A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog

19、 was saved at last.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy

20、 box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用关联词,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,1.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 2.表示并列或递进: and, as w

21、ell as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor 3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 7.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instanc

22、e，句子；such as+n/doing 8.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 9.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 10.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion，From my point of view,关联词(connection words),Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go t

23、o movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,We teenagers sh

24、ould do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the cloth

25、es, taking out the trash and so on.,结尾：提出倡议或号召,Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves.,Dont wait. Join us now! Start to join us now! Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! How amazing! I cant wait! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! Dont hesi

26、tate(犹豫). It will be great fun!,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,知己知彼，学范文,First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And

27、 we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use

28、wrong words and sentences.,Lets go for it!,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know,

29、“Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,Your turn to go for it!（试填一填）,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English.

30、Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every mo

31、rning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Your turn to go for it!（check）,The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite di

32、fferent from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan ,plans to fail.(不懂计划的人注定失败) I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for t

33、he following days. Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!,Its y

34、our turn! （ 请分析以下的文章）,各类作文常用框架,1、话题作文，演讲 总-分-总 Its adj for us to. On the one hand,On the other hand, Whats more, In a word,/In short,.,2、讨论报告，列举不同观点 总-A方-B方-我方-总 Recently, we have a discussion about. Different people have different opinions. A thinks. B thinks differently. As for me,/In my opinion,

35、. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to.,3、写信，建议 总-分-总 Im adj to hear that you Here is some advice for you. Firstly,. Secondly,. Finally,. In a word,If you, you will,写作的“五项基本原则”,一、 长短句原则 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my

36、body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 二、 主题句原则 To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.,三、 一二三原则

37、 1）first, second, third, last 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3）the first, the second, the third, the last 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8）most im