高一 Writing.ppt

1、人教课标 高一 必修 1 Unit 3,Unit 3 Travel Journal,para1: 开门见山,写明自己此次写信来的目的(介绍自己的旅游经历) Im writing to tell you about my trip to.,Para 2 body (具体细节),、构思: 时间 : last week / last month /yesterday / 人物: A、 and I (列举时我 “I ”要放最后) 事件:travelled to Chengdu 方式 : by train Last week my parents and I travelled to Chengdu b

2、y train 。 2.具体内容(按时间或空间顺序写) On the first day : we went to. ; on the second day : we went to . on the third day: we went to,去某地旅行,都用go to (went to)显得太单调,变换一下句式: 去某地: visit (visited) travel to (travelled to) go to visit (went to visited) pay a visit to (paid a visit to) tour (toured) 旅行方式by train /by

3、air /by sea/go to.on foot,Para 2 body (具体细节),词句推敲 去各旅游景点的收获:(即去目的是做/看什么的?) 1.接近大自然 :get close to nature 2.欣赏美景 : enjoy the beautiful sights /scenery 3.对名人表达尊敬 :show our respect for sb 4.学习某地的历史：learn the history of some places 5.做某事很快乐have fun/ a great time doing sth .,形成段落 para2,Last week my parent

4、s and I travelled to Cheng -du by train . After we got off the train , we went to Mount Qingcheng , where we got close to nature and enjoyed the beautiful sights . The next day ,we visited Du Fus Thatched Cottage to show our respect for the poet who really cared about the poor . On the third day , w

5、e toured Dujianyan, which has existed for thousands of years (which has a long history of thousands of years ),Para 3 总结感想和感受,All in all , we had a great fun going sightseeing in Chengdu . I hope you can visit it (pay a visit to it )next time you come to China .It is really a beautiful city . Lookin

6、g forward to hearing from you . ( I hope to hear from you soon). (我希望不久收到你的信。) (Take good care of yourself and write often) (多保重，常来信。),对于非常正式的书信，开头句是很重要的。另外，信的内容中的每个段落 ，只能有一个中心思想，这样看信的人可以清楚、明白你所要表达的内容。为了表达的清楚，还要尽可能地用短句，少用长句、难句。段落也宜短不宜长，尤其开头和结尾两段更应简短。,Take good care of yourself and write often. 多保重，常

7、来信。 I hope to hear from you soon. 我希望不久收到你的信。 Say hello to your parents for me. 请代我向您父母问好。,Take care! 多保重！ Best regards/wishes 谨此致意 Kind regards 致意 Yours sincerely 您真诚的；. Yours faithfully 您忠实的 Regards 致意,Imagine that you are a friend of Wang Kun. Write a short email asking about Laos.,What is the fo

8、od like in Laos? What do you think of the country? How was your trip?,Have you meet ? When did you come back? What kind of things did you see? Could you give me more details about ? Could you tell me about ?,Choose two or three questions and use each as a new paragraph.,Have a nice/good time. Have f

9、un. Good luck on your journey. Take care. Best wishes.,Mail,Address,To:,Subject:,Wang Kun,About Laos,Dear Wang Kun, How are you these days? I keep wondering how you feel about Best wishes! Your friend forever,Dear Wang Kun,How are you these days? I keep worrying about you all the time. _ was your tr

10、ip? I think you must _.,How,have a great fun,I decide to _ Laos next week. So I write to you to ask some _ about Laos because I need to do some _. Could you give me _ about Laos? I hope you tell me something about Laos.,travel in,information,preparations,more details,Best wishes! Yours Mary,Dear Wan

11、g Kun, How are you these days? I keep worrying about you all the time. How was your trip? I think you must have a great fun.,I decide to travel in Laos next week. So I write to you to ask some information about Laos because I need to do some preparations. Could you give me more details about Laos? I hope you tell me something about Laos. Best wishes! Yours Mary,Do you have logical ideas (逻辑) and clear structure? Have you used some useful expressions and different sentence structures?,. Have you used some effective conjunctions (适当的连词)? . Are you sure you didnt make any spelling