改写下列各句.ppt

1、改写下列各句，把短语变为并列句、复合句或带有分词短语、介词短语或其他短语的句子：,1. Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall. 2. The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open at weekends 3. We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go. 4. The sky was cloudless. The sun was sh

2、ining brightly.,5.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.,6. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was

3、a famous pianist. The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. The girl , whose mother was a famous pianist, began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.,7. Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France

4、. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.,8.She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth. When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth. A stormy applause broke forth when she appeared on the stage.,9. He heard that his father was ill. He

5、was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket. When he heard that his father was ill, he was anxious to go home to see him, so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.,Hearing that his father was ill, he was anxious to go home to s

6、ee him, therefore he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket. The moment when he heard that his father was ill, he was anxious to go home to see him, so that he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.,第一，写好句子,1. 熟悉并掌握形成完整句子的基本框架结构。我们知道，单词、语法是学习、掌握和运用语言的基础，然而只靠它们拼凑句

7、子是远远不够的，耗时费力不说，拼凑出来的也多是汉语式的英语，很不地道。因此，考生平时必须牢记所学过的“固定搭配”及“词组句型”，并会活用。写句子要注意以下几点：（1）主谓要一致；（2）正确使用动词的时态、语态、语气；（3）名词的格要与代词的格一致；（4)句子结构成分完整，特别注意不要漏掉或添加成分。,2.一个句子一个重心，句意清楚，合乎逻辑。 3.句子开头首字母要大字，句末要使用正确的英语标点符号。,一般说来，文章可以通过句子的进展和句子之间的各种结合来构成。,1)熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词(transitional words)。例如： 并列关系：and, as well

8、as, also 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, whats more 转折关系：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, or, in spite of, despite, instead of, in the end 时间顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as ,比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand 总结 in

9、 a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking 进一步阐述：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as 因果关系：as a result, so, thus, therefore,2) 明确表达文章主题，内容要点全面，不要节外生枝。 3) 要点安排得当，使之文通字顺，合乎逻辑,层次清晰。 4) 注意养成写完后自我检查的习惯，应重点检查： a, 要点有无遗漏； b. 句法、词法有没有问题； c. 单词拼写有无错误

10、； d. 大小写、标点符号有无问题； e. 字数是否在题目要求范围之内。,二、高考英语写作高分秘诀,1句式要有变化 复杂句、并列句 倒装句 （1）虚拟语气中if省略； （2）only+状语置于句首 （3）否定词置于句首 （4）地点副词置于句首 强调句型 It is that (who) 非谓语动词。 虚拟语气 固定句型结构 tooto sothat such athat not onlybut also neithernor such as not until so that eitheror 直接引语与间接引语 多种时态，动名词、不定式，并列结构,2要使用高等级词汇及短语, 使用高等级词汇

11、使用短语 使用谚语 使用表强调的词，如alone, just, single, only, notat all; on the earth; the very; on earth等 使用修辞手法:明喻， 暗喻，夸张，头韵，拟人等 as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat.,3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成。,1） 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有： above before me here on the left across below in the distance on the right

12、 beyond nearby opposite to over also further next to on top of up down close to beneath under around near to along,2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：,soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early, this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noo

13、n , in the morning/afternoon/evening,3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：,first, second, etc. now for this purpose but as a result furthermore finally at last moreover also therefore likewise another for example next yet for instance on the contrary once in addition in summary such in this case on the other h

14、and then otherwise in conclusion thus in closing,4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：,another moreover in addition (to) equally important, too, also, at the same time, besides, then, in the same way, in fact like, similarly,5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：,on the contrary, different from, on the other hand, in cont

15、rast to, despite, in spite of, yet, but unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut also, herethere, thisthat, years agotoday, the formerthe latter, thennow, the firstwhereas the second , someothers, onethe other oncenow, on the one handon the other hand(一方面另一方面),6)逻辑关系,递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外) 转折: however(然