09年海南宁夏高考英语改错和书面表达.ppt

1、Dear Mrs. Winthorp, So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id email you and let you know what things are going. Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfo

2、rtable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.,Well, I had better to stop now. Im going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for Ive got s

3、ome preparation to make. Keep in touch. Best, Carol,假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1.外出购物 2.题房东还书 3.Tracy 来信留言： 1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3）尽快回电 注意： 1 . 词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,关键词和短语：,连词成句：,增加细节，使行文连贯,At noon,I will have lunch with my

4、friends.So you dont wait for me.At the moment,if you need something,you can call me or leave a message.In a word,I will go home as soon as early.You dont feel anxious. Yours, Li Hua,王冬梅 Mrs Wilson, In order to buy some daily appliances,I will go (am going) out shopping with my friends.Whats more,I w

5、ill return the book to library for you.In addition,Tracy called you and left a message,saying that the meeting at Bolton Coffee has been canceled and she gas informed Susan of the thing.If you have free time,Tracy asked you to call her back as soon as possible.,张雅婷 Mrs.Wilson, I will go out shopping

6、 in the afternoon,because I want to buy some beautiful clothes,and buy some fresh fruit for you.I remember that you borrow a book last Sunday,so I can help you to return the book.In the morning,Tracy called and left a message,saying the meeting at Bolton Coffee will be canceled,because her boyfriend

7、 has illed,玉叫： Mrs.Wilson, I am going out shopping and buy some daily things.By the way,I will return the book for you,which you borrowed last week.This morning Tracy called and left a message,saying the meeting at Bolten Coffee has been canceled and she had told Susan this change.At last she asked

8、you to call her back as soon as possible.She as if have somethings else to tell you,thats all,wishing you have a good time. LI Hua,段登文： Dear Mrs Wilson, I am going out shopping today,whats more, meeting some old friends.I will return the book for you.In addition,Tracy called and left a message,sayin

9、g the meeting at Bolton Coffee has been canceled,you dont have to inform Susan of the thing because she had told susan.you dont worry about susan dont know the thing, she ask you,to call her as soon as possible. Tonight,maybe I will come home late because there are many friends to meeting,dont worry

10、 about my to out Because I am not a child mow. By the way,The key to the door is at that box,you can take it from it.you can get in touch with me If you cant find it. Yours Li Hua,and she will take he to the hospital, she had told Susan the change. She asked you to all her back as soon as possible,i

11、ts seems that you have to choose another day to get together. Li Hua,较好的句子：82 1. I will buy lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and low in fat, fruit is good for health. 2. Whats more, Ill return the book for you that you borrowed from the City Library. 3. Susan will tell yo

12、u the thing in detail. 4. I will go home before 6:00, if you need buy something, call me. Thats all.,较好的句子: 83 1. Finally, I do hope you can have a good time. 2. A woman named Tracy called you. 3. If you want to buy something, call me. I will take it to you. 4. If you see the message, would you plea

13、se call Tracy as soon as possible?,5. Whats more, Ill return the book for you that you borrowed from the City Library. 6. Susan will tell you the thing in detail.,出错较高的句子： 1. She let me told you the meeting at. 2. In the morning, when I have a breakfast,the phone is ringing. Its Tracy. 3.I want play

14、ing basketball. 4. Maybe I wont go to home having lunch. 5. I want go to the library look book. 6. I want to ask for you to look after my dog.,出错较高的句子： 7. because of I need to buy too many things, I will come home late. 8. Today is sun. 9. Place eat food punctual. 10.You can called me. 11.I will com

15、e back later. 12. When you back home,. 13. Please worried about me.,出错较高的句子： 14. Dont worry. I have cleaned every room, included bedroom and the cooket. 15. Beside I want tell you.,Mrs. Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as s