中考英语写作示范课人物篇.ppt

1、中考英语写作人物篇,Brainstorming:,years old,He/She is,His / Her name/He/She is,He/She was born,in+地方；on月日，年,tall/short/thin long hair/big eyes,read /basketball,He/She is + adj(形容词) He/ She has + 名词短语 He/ She is adj with 名词短语,shy/outgoing/ kind,He/She is,He/She is (not) good at He/ She does well in ,English/

2、maths,Jim/Kate,He/She likes v-ing/ n. His/ Her hobby is,What activities do your friends and you do together?,have dinner together enjoy food,play basketball together do sports together,The things that your friend did make you feel thankful,help sb with homework study together,be hurt / ill take sb t

3、o the hospital,写人 文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好、 学习工作等方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。 (叙述的原则是从外到内）,书面表达5步法,一、审题注意“四定”,1.定内容：根据要点定内容。 2.定句型、定词语：应依据内容。应该先定词语后定句型。 3. 定时态:记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。 4.定人称：用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。,书面表达（满分25分） 初中阶段的学习生活马上就要结束了，在这三年中，你一定和你的同学结下了深厚的友谊。 请根据提示要求，写一篇短文，讲述你们之前的交往。80词左右。 提

4、示：建议内容如下： （1）who your best friend is （2）what makes you get on well with her/him （3）One unforgettable thing happened to both of you 写作要求： （1）短文须包括所给的提示内容,适当发挥想象 （2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名、班级和地名 （3）语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整，词数80词左右。,二、列提纲 根据要点列提纲，列提纲 时候应以动宾短语或者系 表短语的形式罗列。,Beginning:,Ending:,Main body,Outline,Name：,Charact

5、er：,Activities：,One unforgettable thing：,leave school ; make friends,be happy/ thankful/lucky such a best friend,Tony / Jim,be kind / outgoing,have dinner, do sports, study together,be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital,What activities do your friends and you do together?,have dinner together/ enjoy

6、 food,Play basketball together/ do sports together,The unforgettable things that make you feel thankful,help sb with homework study together,be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital,三、扩展成句,将提纲里的动宾短语或系表短语扩展成完整的句子。,Beginning:,Ending:,Main body:,Name：,Character：,Activities：,One unforgettable thing：,leave

7、school.,I am sohappy/ thankful/lucky that I have such a best friend,Tony.,kind and outgoing.,make friends,I am going to,I have made lots of friends.,My best friend is,He is,扩展成句,have dinner, do sports and study together.,hurt / ill at sports meeting.,be happy/ thankful/lucky such a best friend,We of

8、ten,I was,Tony hurried to,take me to the hospital.,四、连句成文,补充适当的连词和过渡句，使之时间 、空间、 细节有逻辑、连贯呼应。,Beginning:,Ending:,Main body:,Name：,Character：,Activities：,One unforgettable thing：,leave school,I feel/am happy/ lucky that I have such a best friend,Tony.,kind and outgoing.,I am going to,I have made lots o

9、f friends.,My best friend is,He is,连句成文,We often have dinner, do sports and study together.,I was hurt / ill at sports meeting. Tony hurried to take me to the hospital.,soon.,During three years,One day,I was deeply moved /thankful.,五、查错改错,主要检查：(1) 人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错； (2) 动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看

10、一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s； (3) 名词的复数形式； (4) 单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否错； (5) 格式是否有错。 要尽量剔除错误，最后抄正文章,I will leave my school soon. During these three years， I made some friends. Jelly is one of my best friend . She is very kind and easygoing. I learn a lot from her. We often do sports or study together. One da

11、y， I want to copy her maths homework because I wasnt good in maths. But she refused me. I was angry with she. The next evening, she came to my home and said she would like to help me with my maths. I was deep moved. From then on, I do better in maths with her help. I am so thankful .,请改正文中的六个错误：,have made,friends,her,deeply,at,wanted,A:了解一些新闻人物，如刘翔、姚明等 B:积累生活中让人难忘、激动的事件 C:关注社会热点，