20111217英语写作(丁屹).ppt

1、,书面表达 主讲：丁屹,开篇语,书面表达是中考中的主观题。培养写作技能，训练语言表达能力是英语语言教学的主要内容之一。要求学生能在所学词汇、语法和句型的基础上造简单的句子；能仿照学过的题材和所给的范例写简单的书信、便条、通知等。书面表达是中考英语测试的一个重要方面，综合地考查学生运用所学的英语知识进行语言表达的能力。,科技使学习更简单,一、书面表达题的题型特点,1. 看图编写对话或短文。 2. 根据图示(或英文提示)填写对话或短文中所缺的词语。 3. 根据中文提示编写对话或短文。 4. 根据中文(或英文)提示编写书信、日记、通知、感谢信等。,科技使学习更简单,一、书面表达题的题型特点,初中阶段

2、的书面表达主要是考查学生是否具备将零乱的句子组成段落的能力，同时也是考查学生的语句组织能力。从难度上看，填写对话或短文中所缺的词语这一方面的题比较容易，因为句子是现成的，不用自己再造。看图编写对话或短文则要困难一些，因为句子全要自己编写。难度最大的是按中文或英文提示写作文，除了句子不犯语法错误，单词拼写正确外，还要求上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑。,科技使学习更简单,二、做书面表达时应注意的几点,1. 书面表达虽然有一定的主观性，但不同于其他的写作，有它的独特之处，学生不能离开提示自定内容。即在做的时候，一定要注意提示或图，切中题意。 2. 提示内容要全部写上，不能丢掉一些材料中所包含的内容。 3.

3、 在遣词造句时，一定要选用在课本中学过的并有把握的词汇和句型，决不要凭自己的想像和猜测去写，否则就有可能写出汉语式的英文。,科技使学习更简单,二、做书面表达时应注意的几点,4. 在写短文时，适当的运用所学过的一些连词，将散乱的句子连接成通顺的短文。 5. 若为应用文，格式要正确，书写要符合规范。 6. 做完之后，要认真检查，看语句是否通顺、正确，是否有拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面的错误。,科技使学习更简单,三、书面表达题的答题方法,1. 对于看图作文一定要看清画面，了解图示所表达的主要内容，尤其要注意图片中的人物、地点和背景；把握关键词语，积极展开联想；逐图进行描述，综合起来思考。,科技使学习

4、更简单,三、书面表达题的答题方法,2. 对于应用文写作一定要仔细阅读写作要求、所给的提示、文字说明等材料，确定写作的文体和格式；根据提供的写作材料，确立主题，列出要点；根据要点运用所掌握的英语词语和知识把要点适当展开，用自己最熟悉最有把握的句型和词汇来表达。尽可能地用多样化的句子结构和句型，使语言丰富、流畅。,科技使学习更简单,三、书面表达题的答题方法,3. 写完之后要检查修改。要对照题目要求，认真通读全句、对话或短文，检查内容有无遗漏，时态、语态是否妥当，单词的拼写是否正确，主谓是否一致，句子的语序和表达是否符合英文习惯等，尽量减少错误。,科技使学习更简单,表格类,假如昨天你们班级以Shal

5、l we keep animals in zoos? 为题开了一次讨论会，请你根据下面的表用英语写一篇60字左右的报道，介绍讨论会的情况，第一句已经给出，不计入词数。 结果20人认为应该把动物养在动物园30人认为不该把动物养在动物园里,同意的理由:1.人们可以在动物园里看到很多不同的动物2.动物在动物园里受到良好的照顾；不同意的理由：1.动物被关在笼子里无法活动2.动物喜欢生活在自然环境中。,科技使学习更简单,Yesterday we had a discussion about whether we should keep animals in zoos. Twenty students t

6、hought that it was good to keep animals in zoos because people could see many different kinds of animals there and animals were taken good care of in the zoos. But thirty students thought it not good for animals. Since the animals were kept in cages, they were not able to travel (walk, run) freely.

7、Animals liked to live in nature.,科技使学习更简单,要点类,根据下列提示的信息写一篇60至80字的短文。要求书写规范，语句通顺行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确。 内容提示： 1. 小明随父亲打工进城； 2. 小明到一所中学继续读书； 3. 在学习上不明遇到一些困难； 4. 同学们想办法帮助他，使他克服了困难，取得了进步。,科技使学习更简单,Xiaomings father found a job in the city, and Xiaotming had to go there with him. He went on with his study in a mi

8、ddle school, but he began to have some problems in his study. Happily for him, his new classmates were very kind and tried to help him in different ways. Soon Xiaoming solved all the problems and did better and better in all the subjects.,科技使学习更简单,个人观点建议类,根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾

9、已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内。 下面是一封来自李英的信。阅读该信件，并以Mary的身份用英语写一封回信，针对她的困惑，提出一些建议。,科技使学习更简单,Dear Mary, Im a student of Grade 3.I have a problem. I am worried about my study all the time these days. I was one of the best students in my class. But last month we had an exam and I didnt do very well. I feel very sad

10、. I think my parents will be angry with me. Maybe both my friends and my teachers will laugh at me. Whats more, I m always thinking about it in class and sometimes I dont know what the teacher has said. I feel tired and sleepy in the evening when I do my homework. As a result I do even worse in my s

11、tudy than before. What should I do? Could you give me some advice? Yours， Li Ying,科技使学习更简单,Dear Li Ying, Im very glad to hear from you. I understand you and I am also worrying about you. I think I can give you some advice. First of all, you should believe no one will be angry with you or laugh at yo

12、u because sometimes its very common to get low marks in Grade 3. Whats more, Id like to say the most important thing is that you must believe in yourself and cheer up and dont think about that exam any more. Its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class. And youd better relax or hav

13、e a rest when you feel tired and sleepy. In a word, forget the unhappy thing and keep on working hard at your lessons. Im sure you can be successful if you try your best. So cheer up and believe in yourself. Yours, Mary,科技使学习更简单,常用句型,a照应材料，介绍来源。 1I am glad to receive your letter 2After I read your l

14、etter in the newspaper 3I am very glad to hear that you want to 4I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter b开门见山，提出观点。 1In my opinion, I think that you should 2My advice is that 3I suggest that you should 4I am afraid youd better 5Here is my advice 61 want t0 give you some advice on,科技使学习更

15、简单,常用句型,c 给出建议，井然有序。 firstly，secondly, then，after that，in the endfinallymeanwhile d 承上启下，巧妙过渡。 and，at the same time，such as，by the way，little by little，as well等。 e 层层递进，浑然成篇。 besides，whats more，on the other hand，furthermore,科技使学习更简单,假日活动类,A Trip to Hainan I went to Hainan with my parents last winter

16、 vacation. We took the plane there, which made the journey very comfortable and it only took us two hours to get there. It was a fantastic place for swimming as the sea water was really clean and warm. In the morning, we went swimming in the sea and relaxed ourselves on the beach. We had a wonderful

17、 time swimming in the warm water. In the afternoon, we spent many happy hours going sightseeing and eating the delicious sea food there. In the evening, we would visit the local peoples homes and learned more about the life and culture of the local people. We really enjoyed ourselves a lot this time

18、. I was impressed by both the wonderful sights and friendly people there. I really hope to have another chance to visit Hainan some day.,科技使学习更简单,常用句型,开头句：先把时间、人物、所乘坐的交通工具、去了何地交代清楚。 Last , I went to by bus. / I took the bus to 当地的天气：It was sunny and warm this time of year. / It was cool and sunny as it is a seaside city. .,科技使学习更简单,当地的风景描述： There are some places of interest as many historic invents happened there. Great changes have taken place since I last visited i