九年级写作训练.ppt

1、Four Steps for English Writing,Taohuajiang Experimental Middle School By Fu Juan,书面表达是中考必考题型，主要考察考生的篇章书面表达能力和语言综合运用能力。考查方式以应用文、图表式作文和话题作文为主，话题多贴近生活或为热点话题。 外貌特征,分析湖南近3年42套中考真题可知,湖南各地市对外貌特征话题类的作文考查角度主要有以下2种: 1. 介绍某人的外貌、性格、喜好及日常生活中对作者的帮助等。如: 2015娄底；2014娄底；2014常德。 2. 介绍某人的性格、爱好、发生在两个人之间的故事及作者的感受。如:2015常

2、德；2013株洲。 预计2016年考查第1种角度的可能性较大。,考情分析,考纲解读,He is a singer.,What does he do?,He _ cool. He _ glasses.,is wears,He _ handsome. He _ blonde curly hair.,is has,He _ friendly.,is,He _ beautiful. He _ long curly hair.,What is he like?,is has,What does he look like?,Whats she like? She isnt quiet, she is _.

3、,outgoing,What does she like? She _ traveling.,likes,Magical Mirror,Correct改,Connect连,List列,Catch抓,four steps 四步曲,Writing is a piece of cake！,Step1 抓主题 Catch the main ideas.,Discussion,Topic(主题): To introduce _. 2. Personal pronoun(人称代词): _. 3. Main Tense(主要时态): _.,在你的学校生活中，一定有你最喜欢的老师。 请以My favorite

4、 teacher为题，写一篇短文， 介绍人物的性格特征及爱好等。,a person,“she” or “he”,The simple present tense,Topic(主题): To introduce _. 2. Personal pronoun(人称代词): _. 3. Main Tense(主要时态): _.,现在，越来越多的人拥有宠物，比如狗、猫、 兔子、鱼等，动物已经成了我们的好朋友，它们 为人们带来了很多的乐趣。你们家有宠物吗？请 以My Pet为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你家的宠物 和你的看法。,an object,“she”, “he” or “it”,The simple p

5、resent tense,2015张家界模拟卷,Step2 列提纲 List an outline.,Who is she?,She is Chinese. She is friendly. She sings very well. She is called “First Lady” （第一夫人）.,Who is he?,He comes from Korea. He is a famous singer. He can speak Chinese and Korean. He joined I Am A Singer 4 in 2016.,Beginning,Body,Appearance

6、 外表,Character 性格,Hobbies 爱好,Ending,Outline: Who is your favorite teacher? What can you write about him/ her? How do you like him/ her?,My favorite teacher is,I love my _ teacher very much.,Beginning,Body,small, white, ,lovely, naughty, ,take time, bring a lot of fun,Ending,Outline: My Pet,My pet is

7、a/ an Its name is,I love my pet very much.,It is small and white.,It is lovely and naughty.,Although keeping a pet takes time, it will bring us a lot of fun.,Step 3 连句子 Connect the sentences.,Discussion,My favorite teacher is _.,I love/ like my _ teacher very much.,Compare,1. She is very young. Her

8、English is very good. 2. She is very young, but her English is very good.,1. We are so happy. And we learn English well. 2. We are so happy .We learn English well.,1. Our English are very good. I like her very much. 2. Our English are very good. So I like her very much.,but,And,So,Tips： Use liking w

9、ords to make sentences more fluently. 关联词使句意表达更顺畅。,Compare,2 My favorite teacher is Miss Li. She is a good teacher. She is very young, but her English is very good. She is friendly and often sings songs with us, plays games with us in class. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English i

10、s very good. So I like her very much. She likes reading books and playing sports. This is my favorite teacher. I love her.,1 She is very young. Her English is very good. She is friendly. She often sings songs with us. She plays games with us in class. We are so happy .We learn English well. Our English is very good. I like her very much. She likes reading books. She likes playing sports.,My favorite teacher is, she is a teacher.,This is my favorite teacher, I love her.,appearance,character,hobbies,Beginning,Body,Ending,Outline,Try to beautify y