广东省河源市八年级英语上册写作教程Unit5课件新版人教新目标版.pptx

1、写作话题：Preferences and plans(喜好和计划),Opinions on cartoons（对卡通片的看法）,Unit 6,Learning objectives:,能用cant stand，dont like，dont mind，like，love，描述个人的喜好； 能用hope to，plan to，want to，expect to，be ready to谈论计划与愿望； 能用不同的形容词描述事物的特点； 写作微技能：不同句式的表达。,以写人物的思想行为为主的记叙文，侧重描写人的心理变化、内心感受、行为表现和情感升华等,读写结合型的写作,命题读写相结合类型的写作，阅读部

2、分是为写作任务服务的，阅读的篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学会从以下的途径分析： (1)首先要分析阅读的主题。 (2)分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的中心句/段、支撑句/段，总结句/段，同时明晰作者使用的写作方法。 (3)分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言可以灵活迁移至自己的写作中，包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式等。,Language box（语言工具箱）,1. Unit topic languages（单元话题语言） 以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子。 名词/动名词词块: talent show, soap opera, action movies, s

3、ports show, talk show, sitcom, cartoon,Language box（语言工具箱）,动词词块： find out, be ready to, plan to do sth., expect to do sth., have a discussion about, try ones best,Language box（语言工具箱）,形容词词块： educational, meaningless, successful, wonderful, enjoyable, fantastic, serious, boring,Language box（语言工具箱）,名词/

4、动名词词块: （ ）谈话节目， （ ）才艺表演， （ ）体育节目， （ ）情景喜剧， （ ）卡通片， （ ）肥皂剧， （ ）动作片，,（ ）谈话节目， （ ）才艺表演， （ ）体育节目， （ ）情景喜剧， （ ）卡通片， （ ）肥皂剧， （ ）动作片，,Language box（语言工具箱）,动词词块： （ ）计划做某事， （ ）做有关的讨论， （ ）查明；弄清， （ ）期望做某事， （ ）准备好做某事， （ ）尽力做某事，,（ ）准备好做某事， （ ）尽力做某事，,Language box（语言工具箱）,形容词词块： （ ）令人感到无聊的， （ ）毫无意义的， （ ）有教育意义的， （ ）精

5、彩的；绝妙的， （ ）成功的， （ ）严肃的；稳重的 （ ）极好的；了不起的， （ ）令人愉快的,8,(2) Patterns（句型）,One of the main reasons is that Mickey was like a common man, but he always tried to face the danger. 【one of the main reasons is that 主要原因之一是】 主要原因之一是他花了太多时间在篮球上。 _,One of the main reasons is that he spends too much time on playing

6、 basketball.,（2）Patterns（句型）,2. Jack was unlucky, such as losing house or girlfriend, Linda. 【such as 比如，表示举例子】 Tina有很多爱好，比如看谈话节目、听音乐。 _,2. Tina has many hobbies, such as watching talk shows and listening to music.,(2) Patterns（句型）,3. However, he was always ready to try his best. 【ready to do sth. 愿

7、意做某事：try ones best 尽某人最大的努力】 Steve是一个善良的男孩，他总是愿意去帮助其他人。 _,Steve is a kind boy, and he is always ready to help other people.,(2) Patterns（句型）,尽管Tom尽他最大的努力跑着去学校，他仍是迟到了。 _,Though Tom tried his best to run to school, he was still late for class.,(2) Patterns（句型）,4. Todays cartoons are usually not so sim

8、ple as little Mickey Mouse, but everyone still knows and loves him. 【not so as 不像那样；不如这么】 我觉得加菲猫（Garfield）不如米老鼠这么有名且受欢迎。 _,I think Garfield is not so famous or popular as Mickey Mouse.,(2) Patterns（句型）,（二）能用love，like，dont mind，dont like，cant stand描述个人的喜好；使用形容词做出评价，并用“hope to，plan to，want to，expect t

9、o，be ready to” 等表达你的计划与安排。 如：I like action movies because they are exciting. And I expect to learn Chinese Kungfu in Shaoling Temple.,（二）能用love，like，dont mind，dont like，cant stand描述个人的喜好；使用形容词做出评价，并用“hope to，plan to，want to，expect to，be ready to” 等表达你的计划与安排。 如：I like action movies because they are e

10、xciting. And I expect to learn Chinese Kungfu in Shaoling Temple.,（二）能用love，like，dont mind，dont like，cant stand描述个人的喜好；使用形容词做出评价，并用“hope to，plan to，want to，expect to，be ready to” 等表达你的计划与安排。 如：I like action movies because they are exciting. And I expect to learn Chinese Kungfu in Shaoling Temple.,(2

11、) Patterns（句型）,（三）不同句式的表 达（用括号内的提示词改写句子） 1. I like watching the news because I hope to find out whats going on around the world. 【one of the main reasons is that 】 _ _ 2. Anna did lots of things. For example, she read some magazines and saw films. 【such as】 _ _,I like watching the news. One of the m

12、ain reasons is that I hope to find out whats going on around the world.,Anna did lots of things such as reading some magazines and seeing the films.,(2) Patterns（句型）,（三）不同句式的表 达（用括号内的提示词改写句子） 3. The talk show is a little more successful than the game show. 【not so as 】 _ 4. All children like the bla

13、ck mouse. It has two large round ears. 【with】 _,The game show is not so successful as the talk show.,All children like the black mouse with two large round ears.,Before writing,Italian,Young children,Supplying ideas to them,special pens,Computers,写作任务,假如你非常喜欢卡通片，但全家人进行了有关卡通片的讨论，表达了不同的态度和看法。请根据下表提示，写

14、一篇80词左右的短文描述一下你们一家人对卡通片的态度以及各自的爱好。内容包括：,1. 审题想一想，填一填。,审题 体裁：_ 人称：_ 时态：_,审题 体裁：_ 人称：_ 时态：_,第一人称,一般现在时,记叙文,While writing,3. 写一写: 写初稿,4. 同伴互赏我欣赏，我快乐！,请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。 你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？ 根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。,请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。,修改习作时可使用这些符号： 优美句子； 漏词

15、； 错处：； 删除； 语法错误 G ； 人称错误 P； 时态错误 T； 拼写错误Sp,Show Time,What kind of TV shows do you like？ My brother and I like watching cartoons. We watch them on weekends when were not studying. We think they can make us happy and relaxed. Both of us expect to be cartoonists. My sister doesnt mind them. She thinks

16、that some cartoons are so successful that they even affect young peoples lifestyles. But my parents dont like watching cartoons. They think we shouldnt watch them too often, we should watch more talk shows and news because they are educational. My grandparents cant stand them. They think cartoons ar

17、e boring. They like Beijing Opera instead. The main reason is that they hope we can learn traditional cultures. What do you think of cartoons？Please tell me.,作者以不同人物为叙述线索，运用一般现在时, 紧扣提示, 过渡自然。,运用了时间状语从句、结果状语从句、表语从句等不同的句式逐一表达观点，拓展合理，首尾呼应。,内容充实，要点齐全，表达清晰,Do you like watching TV? Of all the TV shows, I

18、like cartoons best. So does my bother. After doing our homework, we enjoy watching them together. We think they are funny and relaxing. We want to be cartoonists when we grow up. My sister doesnt mind them because she thinks some cartoons are successful. Young people can learn something to form their life. However, my parents dont like them. In their opinions, news reports and talk shows are more educational so that we can know whats going on in the world. My grandparents cant stand them.