09春蒋氏四级作文秘笈1.ppt

1、2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,1,蒋氏四级写作秘笈,1. 充分引用标题 2. 充分引用提示 3. 按照提示分段,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,2,Ask Yourself These Questions when Writing,1. 我引用了标题吗？ 2. 我引用（翻译了）所有的中文提示句吗？放到段落开头了吗？ 3. 哪个中文提示是关键和要多写？ 4. 我有结论段吗？有结束信号吗？,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,3,四级作文模版(阐述型、综合型),1. Type 1: Expository Essays阐述型 模版 范文和提示 2. Type

2、2: Comprehensive Essays 综合型 模板 范文和提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,4,Type 1. 阐述型 Template 1: 要背下！,It is universally a fact that (社会现象). (展开一两句). Communicating via email is convenient / not advisable. Firstly, (好处之一). （展开一句）Secondly, (好处之二). （展开一句）Lastly, (好处之三).（展开一句）. Therefore, (自己的观点). (展开一两句).,2009.02,

3、Chapter IV-阐述型,5,Class work: Traffic Jam,Traffic Jam 交通堵塞已成为一个严重的社会问题 交通堵塞给人们生活带来的影响 如何解决这一问题,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,6,蒋氏四级写作秘笈,1. 充分引用标题 2. 充分引用提示 3. 按照提示分段,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,7,Sample writing,Traffic Jam,With the increasing number of cars, traffic jam in cities has gone from bad to worse and t

4、urned into a serious social problem.,It is universally a fact that,第一中文提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,8,Traffic jam is affecting many aspects of peoples life. For example, due to traffic jam, commuters fail to go to work on time and students go to class late. A lot of time is wasted on the road. Besides,

5、 it causes problems to the social order.,Sample writing,第二个中文提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,9,To solve the problem, many methods have been offered. However, in my opinion, the following two may best solve it. First, to relieve the congestion, the number of cars on the road has to be reduced by using publ

6、ic transportation systems. Second, both drivers and pedestrians should abide by traffic regulations to avoid traffic accidents and relieve traffic jam.,Sample writing,第三中文提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,10,Sample writing,In a word, serious as it is, traffic jam can be relieved sooner or later if some effe

7、ctive measures are taken. (149 words),加个短短的结论段收尾！,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,11,Type 1: 阐述型 (议论文): Template 2:,There has been a debate over (中心问题). Some people believe that (观点1). They insist that (观点1之理由). Other people however, insist that (观点2). They believe (观点2之理由). In my opinion, (我的观点). There are

8、three reasons for my opinion. First of all, (理由1). (展开). Furthermore, (理由2). (展开). Finally, (理由3). (展开). Conclusively, (重复我的观点). (展开).,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,12,Class work: CET-4 (2005年12月),Should University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 名校校园正成为旅游新热点 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 我认为,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,13,蒋氏四

9、级写作秘笈,1. 充分引用标题 2. 充分引用提示 3. 按照提示分段,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,14,Sample writing,Should University Campus Be Open to Tourists?,In recent years, some prestige universities have opened their campus to tourists. For example, Peking University and Qinghua University have become tourist attractions to touris

10、ts to Beijing.,第一中文提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,15,However, peoples opinions vary about if universities should open their campus to tourists. Some think it may help make the universities more famous and attract more prospective students. Others think it may disturb the study of students on campus and t

11、he order and security of campus.,Sample writing,第二个中文提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,16,Sample writing,To my mind, university campus shouldnt be open to tourists for two main reasons. First, university campus is a place for academic study and research rather than for sightseeing. Second, tourists may upse

12、t the quiet of university campus. Conclusively, university campus should not be open to tourists. (120 words),第三个中文提示,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,17,Homework assignment,Should Students Date on Campus? 1. 在校大学生谈恋爱很普遍 2. 对此，人们的看法各有不同 3. 我的看法,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,18,Chapter V: Type 2- 综合型,Narration: story

13、-telling Description: picture-drawing Exposition: personal statement,3 in 1,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,19,九句话模板 p.169 综合篇,第一段（开头段） 第二段（主体段） 第1句：引导句（套入提示） 第4句：主题句（提出论点） 第2句：主题句（套入标题） 第5句：论据一 第3句：展开句（简单描述） 第6句：论据二 第7句：论据三 第三段（结尾段） 第8句：总结句（概括全文） 第9句：结束句（重复主题，或套入标题）,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,20,蒋氏四级写作秘笈,1. 充分引

14、用标题 2. 充分引用提示 3. 按照提示分段,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,21,Type II. 综合型: Template 2:,It was at / in (时间、地点) when / where (事件) took place. (叙述一两句). It happened like this. （描写过程，注意顺序）. And then, . Eventually, . As a consequence, . In my opinion, three factors contribute to the accident. First, (原因1). Second, (

15、原因2). Last, (原因3). All this led to the accident. (结束语).,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,22,Class work:,Your role: a tour guide Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: * some welcoming words * the schedule for the day * the description of the place the tourists will be vis

16、iting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.),A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction 欢迎词 一天的行程安排 对游客即将参观的一处地点进行描述,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,23,Sample writing,A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction,Good morning, ladies and gentlemen: Welcome to Xian! I am Li Hui, your guide for today

17、s tour of downtown Xian. I am glad to show you around. Now let me briefly tell you our schedule for today. In the morning, well visit some historical spots downtown. In the afternoon, well visit the Provincial Museum of History.,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,24,At the moment, we are on our way to the first

18、 attraction for today, the Bell Tower. It was first built in 1384 and moved to its present site in 1582 to repress “the dragon spirits”. It is famous for the gigantic bell on the tower. 8.6 meters high and magnificent in style, the tower used to be the geographic center of the city, with a street ru

19、nning from it towards the east, west, north and south, respectively. Today, it is an attraction tourists cannot afford to miss.,Sample writing,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,25,Now here we are at the Bell Tower. Its now 9:30. Let us get off the bus. Please get back here at 10:30. Follow me, please. （169 wor

20、ds）,Sample writing,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,26,Homework assignment (1),Read pp.179-181 for Type 2 Essay Memorize Templates 1 and 2 for Type 2 on pp. 180-181,3. Writing Task Welcome to Our Club Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an oral announcement to welcome students to jo

21、in a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 欢迎词 2. 本社团的主要活动内容 3. 参加本社团的好处 4. 如何加入本社团,必须利用 p.169 的 九句话模板,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,27,蒋氏四级写作秘笈,1. 充分引用标题 2. 充分引用提示 3. 按照提示分段,2009.02,Chapter IV-阐述型,28,Welcome to Our Club Hello, everyone: I am Cui Yongyuan, the chair of the Bridge Club of our university. On behalf of the club, please allow me to welcome you to join our club. What does this bridge club do? Youve got it. Play bridge! The club members meet once every two weeks to play bridge. After the mid-term exams, we hold a contest with bridge clubs from