漫画作文 (2).ppt

1、How to write a composition on a cartoon?,高考是全社会关注的大事，学校和家庭表现尤为突出。家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给予无微不至的关怀，结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发表自己的观点(夹叙夹议)。词数150左右。,As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, many teachers and parents pay more attention to the students. They take good care of the students, it has

2、a negative effect on students. Xiaoming is a high school student. He will take part in the College Entrance Examination this year. His parents look after Xiaoming very well, he can have a better environment to study well. His grandmother cooks delicious and nutritional food for Xiaoming. His mother

3、gives him everything he wants. His father fans him everyday, he can feel cool, the fact is that he is still very hot. They even warn him the days left before the final examination. There are lots of books on his desk, Xiaoming has to do the exercises all the time. In my opinion, too much care is not

4、 necessary. We need to relax ourselves and treat the examination with a good attitude.,and,so that,so that,however,Consequences?,but,As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is studying hard. There are ma

5、ny books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him. Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or

6、a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they dont realize what they have done become a heavy burden or a great pressure. It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much. So I hope parents provide a proper environme

7、nt for their children. Only in this way will they try their best and succeed at last!,Transitions 过渡词,and, also, or, neither nor, either or, not onlybut also, as well, for one thingfor another,moreover, what is more, worse still, furthermore, then, besides, in addition,but, instead, yet, whereas, ho

8、wever, on the contrary, by contrast, otherwise,for this reason, for this purpose, so that,因为: 所以:,because, as, since, for, owing to, due to,as a result (of), so, therefore, thus, as a consequence (of),目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，

9、重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。,漫画作文写作段落框架(常用句型),description,consequences/reasons,opinion,目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。,presentation,Its your chance,Health Care From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering

10、from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could affordIts really another heart attack for him. At present, many people cant afford heavy medica

11、l fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life. What a pity! We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reducedThe government should build up medical insurance system ,and try its