英语人教版七年级下册writing.pptx

1、compositionclass 写作文啦,七年级下册 留耕中学 李露,Are you good at writing a composition?,Q:,Are you good at writing compositions? 你擅长写作文吗？,Writing task (in unit 2),要求： 请根据下面提示以My School Day为题写出自己一天的活动。词数不少于50. 提示：in the morning , get up, have breakfast, brush teeth, go to school, four classes, in the afternoon, t

2、hree classes, go home, in the evening, do my homework, go to bed,Q:,When you face a topic like this , how do you write it?(当你面对这样一篇写作要求的时候，你会怎样写？）,写作步骤：three steps(三大步）,3 结尾（conclusion）summary this article (总结概括、呼吁等),1 开始(opening） lead into the topic(引入话题）,2 正文（body）expand the narrative 围绕主题展开 叙述、讨论

3、,1.Tense(时态):simple present tense(一般现在时) 2.提纲： 一. beginning(开头）: I am a student. 二. body （正文）： 1）上午活动： I get up at I have breakfast My Day 2）下午活动 ： I have three classes . I go home 3）晚间活动 ： I have supper at I do my homework. 三. conclusion(总结）： I love sports. I have a healthy life,Outline(提纲）,In the

4、morning,起床 Get up Time: 7:00 I get up at 7:00.,吃早餐 have breakfast Time:7:30 I have breakfast at 7:30,刷牙 brush teeth I brush teeth.,上四节课,have four classes,I have four classes in the morning,In the afternoon 上三节课 have three classes I have three classes in the afternoon.,回家,go home Time:4:15p.m.,I go h

5、ome at 4:15p.m.,in the evening,I have supper at 7:30.,吃晚餐,have supper Time:7:30,做作业,I do my homework.,do my homework,看电视,watch TV,I watch TV,睡觉,I go to bed at 9:00.,go to bed,Time:9:00,conclusion(结尾）,I love sports. I often exercise after school. I have a healthy life.,I love sports. I often exercise

6、 after school. I have a healthy life,7：00,7：30,7：50,In the morning,In the afternoon,4:15p.m.,7:30p.m,9:00,My Day,I am a student.,I get up at 7:00.,I have breakfast at 7:30.,I brush teeth.,. I go to school at 7:50.,I have four classes in the morning.,I have three classes in the afternoon.,. I go home

7、 at 4:15 p.m.,I have supper at 7:30 in the evening.,I do my homework.,I watch TV.,. I go to bed at 9:00.,Writing strategy(写作策略） :,1.Use proper conjunctions or linking words(适当的连词或连接词)correctly if necessary：e.g. then, after that, next,3.Use different sentence pattern(句型）,2. Frequency adverb(频度副词）：usu

8、ally, sometimes, often, always,How can we make the articles（文章） more fluent (流畅的）and more beautiful?,l.,Compare the articles,My School Day,My School Day,I get up at 7:oo.,I usually get up at 7:00.,I have breakfast at 7:30.,I have breakfast at 7:30.,I brush teeth.,After that , I brush teeth.,I go to

9、school at 7:50.,At 7:50, I go to school.,I have four classes in the morning .,I have four classes in the morning.,I have three classes in the afternoon.,in the afternoon I have three classes.,I go home at 4:15p.m.,At 4:15p.m.I go home.,I watch TV.,I have supper at 7:30p.m.,I have supper at 7:30 in t

10、he evening.,I do my homework.,After supper , I often do my homework.,Then I sometimes watch TV.,I go to bed at 9:00,At around 9:00 I go to bed.,I have sports. I often exercise after school. I have a healthy life.,I have sports. I often exercise after school. I have a healthy life.,I am a student.,I am a student.,请根据自己的实际情况以My Weekend Day 为题，写出自己一天的活动，词数不少于50.,Writing Show,Pair-correction（相互校正）: Exchange your composition with your classmate and correct the mistakes with your red pen.,交换,改错,Wr