《公四的图表作文》PPT课件.ppt

1、图表作文的写作,Income Sources of College Students Survey of Income Sources of American and Chinese Students,1、描述图表 2、说明中美大学生收入来源的原因和理由 3、阐明未来中美大学生收入的发展趋势,1）写作过程 审题（分析图表）- 转换（将数字、图表变为信息）- 概括（根据信息进行分析总结）- 动笔（落实到文字上）-定稿（通读全篇，修改语法、拼写和标点等）,2）写作框架 引言段: 主要通过对图表中所给出的数据进行分析和说明，引出本文的主题思想； 正文段: 通过对以上数据的分析与解释，阐述引起这种变化

2、的原因； 结尾段: 通过分析、解释与说明数据变化的规律性联系实际客观地展望其发展前景或走向，或是数据变化带来的影响。,3）时态的选择 要留意图表中有无参照时间。一般而言，没有参照时间的图表通常采用一般现在时进行写作；有参照时间的图表，参照时间用过去时，如果说明的是现在的情况，则必须采用一般现在时进行写作。,4）对数据的处理 抓住关键数据作文章：曲线的突然变化；百分比的大幅度增加或减少；柱线的大幅度升高或降低；相同类目的数字的对比。,5）标题 在没有另给标题的情况下，表格名称也就是文章的标题。,According to the table, we can see that though Amer

3、ican and Chinese students get income from same channels, the percentage of each is quite different. Half the American students income is provided by their parents and the remainder is from their part-time job and the scholarship. Chinese students, on the other hand, get the absolute majority of thei

4、r income from their parents, while income from other two channels accounts for a small percentage.,In my opinion, there are some main reasons for the phenomenon. To begin with, American students are taught to be independent right from childhood while Chinese parents care so much for their children t

5、hat it is almost unthinkable for college students to live on their own. In addition, Chinese students have fewer opportunities to find part-time job. Whats more, scholarship provided by universities and governments in China is much less than that in America.,Nevertheless, more and more Chinese stude

6、nts are seeking part-time jobs nowadays. They are eager to acquire some social skills and earn extra money which will make them less dependent on their parents. And when it comes to the sources of American students income, I think they will remain in the same.,图表的种类繁多，大致可以分为表格(table)和标绘图(graph)两大类，其

7、中标绘图又包括线形图(line graph)，柱形图(bar graph)和圆形图(pie graph)。,图表作文的常用句型 1. It can be seen from the chart / diagram / data / figures / graph / picture / statistics that 2. According to/ As shown in/ As indicated by/ As can be seen in the chart/ figures/ graph, 3. All these statistics (data, findings) clearly

8、 show( strongly prove, point to the fact, seem to suggest) that. 4. There is/ We notice/ People find a minimal/ slight/ small/ slow/ significant/ sharp/ rapid/ dramatic increase/ rise/ decrease/ decline/ drop/ reduction/ fall in,5. On the contrary, remain level/ steady/ unchanged over the time. 6. g

9、o up and down/ wave/ fluctuate/ be unstable/ be in flexible from to 7. The number is times as much as that of 8. The percentage/ figure has nearly doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled /increased X times compared with as against that of the previous year. 9. By comparison with ., it decreased/increased/ add

10、up to/ soar/fell/descend/ shrink/sink/drop from.to.,10. .rose (increased, jumped, decreased, dropped) by X percent (at average of X percent, from X percent to Y percent). 11. form/comprise/make up/constitute/ account for percent of 12. As a result/ On this basis/ Given this/ consequently, it can be

11、concluded/ deduced/ inferred/ estimated that,With the development of the society, a serious problem, air pollution, arises. A survey done shows that there are many causes that account for the problem. As illustrated in the pie chart, the major contributing factor was vehicles (45%). Factories and pl

12、ants were also responsible for the current problem (35%). Another factor that couldnt be neglected was cigarette smoking (15%).,Causes of Air-pollution,From the graph, we can be informed that the number of car accidents fluctuated in the year of 1990. The number was ascending from 22 in January to 3

13、2 in February, but falling gradually to 26 in May, and after June, the rate was rising sharply and reached the peak of 39 at August. But afterwards, the rate was declining gradually and finally to the 16 at the end of the year.,1991.6 Changes in Peoples Diet Study the following table carefully and y

14、our composition must be based on the information in the table. Write three paragraphs to: (1) state the changes in peoples diet（饮食）in the past five years; (2) give possible reasons for the changes; (3) draw your own conclusions. You should quote as few figures as possible.,From the chart we can see

15、that in the past five years, great changes have been taking place in peoples diet. There is a general trend of decrease in the consumption of grain, while the consumption of some high-energy food, such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily. Why do people have these changes in their diet? In my op

16、inion, there are two major reasons. On one hand, nowadays people have more money spent on food with better nutrition, which is generally much more expensive than grain or vegetables. On the other hand, they now pay attention not only to the quantity but also to the quality of their food. They have m

17、ore knowledge in improving the structure of their diet. From the above, we can draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement in our health.,From the c

18、hart we can see that during the past five years there have been great changes in peoples diet. The greatest change occurs in grain consumption, which has dropped 4% from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990 in total food consumption. The second greatest change is in milk consumption, which increased from 10%

19、in 1986 to 13% in 1990. But on the other hand, two trends can be observed in the consumption of meat and fruit and vegetables. From 1986 to 1989, meat consumption increased from 17% to 23% while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a littl

20、e to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%.,失分原因,1）图表描述欠妥 - 冗长，过细 Through the chart, we easy to see difference in survey of income of American and Chinese students. The American students get 50% of sources from parents, they get the part-time job 35% and the scholarship 1

21、5%. By contrast, the Chinese students from parents get 90% of sources, part-time job 5%, scholarship 5%. - 不全面 - 未能点明要点,2）段落、句子逻辑 / 关联词的使用 The chart shows that income sources of college students from parents is a large percentage and by contrast Chinese students percentage is lager than Americans. A

22、merican students hope that they havent increase troubles for parents as more as possible. Also, the Chinese students think that their parents should pay moneys for them. First, America is a developed country. China is a developing country.,3）句子结构 Chinese students survey for 90% in parents. American

23、students survey for 50% in parents. With the result that Chinese childrens ability drop it. Why such difference between American and Chinese students? It is what that causes the difference? It is lots of reasons that Chinese and American students have differents proportion of income. also about the

24、policy for education. American is richer than our country.,4）状语的地位 状语只是起修饰作用，修饰句子或动词，不能单独成句。 First of all. / Firstly. / In the first place. / There are not alike ideas in their country. For example. Many people realize that education is very important. In fact. It is good for people.,5）词性 We can kno

25、w the different between American students and Chinese students. American students half income source are from them parents and others are from themself. Income sources of American students are vary. I think the spoil from the parents is the key.,6）书写问题 - 题目、要求当中某些单词大写，但在正文中需小写。 from the table, we ca

26、n see the Survey of Income Sources of American and Chinese students. - 每句首字母必须大写; 专有名词的首字母要大写 Chinese, thinking about this table - 分句开头不用大写（逗号后面不要随意大写） Studying the table carefully. We can see that When the basic requirement has been satisfied. So they could spend more money on other things.,7）单词/短语

27、/句型的使用 time 时间times 时代 money (不可数) phenomenon: phenomena (pl.) American despite = in spite of + 名词结构 develop (v.) development developing account for alike, asleep, alone,1根据上图描述中国家庭支出的变化； 2分析产生这些变化的原因； 3说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。,Statistics of Family Expenses In China,Assignment,As is shown in the table, dramatic changes have taken place in family expenses in China within two decades -