复习课：英语书面表达

1、English writing,The ways to improve your writing,中考英语书面表达评分标准,1.总体评分原则： 要点+语言表达+语篇+词数+卷面； 2.评分时，应注意内容要点(10分)、应用词汇和语法的准确性(7分)和上下文的连贯性(1分)。 3.词数: 80-100词，少于80词扣1分。 4.如果书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。（卷面不整洁扣1分）,书面表达六步法： 1 审题：审清作文体裁、时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲:文章分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 扩展：把提示信息扩写成句子，使文章内容完整，要点全面； 4. 连接：合理恰当地运用关联词和过

2、渡句使文章结构紧凑，衔接自然； 5 修改：查拼写、语法、标点等问题；检查语句是否通顺、连贯等； 6 抄写：书写规范, 卷面整洁。,书面表达六步法,牛刀小试,在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,如何度假 调查报告 提倡假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends o

3、r parents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.A small number of people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people go to work. 5.Enjoy your vacation.,How do people spend their vacation?

4、 We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. A small number of people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.（the ending）,扩(add),加首尾，

5、使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also a small number of people visit friends or parents. However, a few people wor

6、k. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连(connect),According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy life during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to

7、 work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,改(correct),And visiting friends or parents also makes people relaxed.,Proverb（谚语）/saying,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report

8、. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy life during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And visiting friends or parents also makes people relaxed. However, a few people have to work. As the sa

9、ying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,改(correct),书写规范, 卷面整洁。,抄 (copy),写作注意的几个问题：,1. 尽量使用简单句，要牢记 “避繁就简”原则，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。 2. 把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。 3. 注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，适当使用连词，如：and , so , or, but, Whats more;

10、not onlybut also, neithernor, on the one handon the other hand 等。 4. 字体一定要工整漂亮。,中考模拟作文,学生上网交友已很普遍，但人们仍持不同意见。请你根据下面文字信息，以“Should Students Make Friends online”为题，写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。,对比观点题型： 论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1.有一些人认为 2.另一些人认为 3.我的看法,审(search),share your joy and sadness,make more friend

11、s,have more chances to learn English / be good for English study,a waste of time,affect your studies,may be cheated,For,Against,列(list),Para1: （综述）with the development of the internet more and more popular Para2: （利）First, make more friends; Second, share your happiness and sadness; Whats more, be g

12、ood for English study Para3: （弊）However, some people disagree. On the one hand, a waste of time affect study; On the other hand, may be cheated Para4: （个人）As a student, .,Should Students Make Friends online ?,With the development of the Internet, making friends online is becoming more and more popul

13、ar. However, should students make friends online? Some people say yes. First, the Internet is very convenient for students to make more friends. Second, it also helps them express their feelings and opinions freely. They can share their happiness and sadness together. Whats more, making friends onli

14、ne provides them with more chances to learn English because they may chat with foreigners online. Its good for their English study.,However, some people think that students shouldnt make friends online. On the one hand, chatting online wastes a lot of time, which may affect their studies. On the oth

15、er hand, some students may be cheated online. As a student, I think it is a wise choice to make friends at school and share our feelings with our real good friends around us. And we should pay more attention to our studies instead of surfing the Internet.,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇,Whi

16、ch is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,他们很早就到了。,A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A. His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,A I think l

17、earning English is interesting. B I find it really interesting to learn English .,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,1) She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box. 2) She is too yo

18、ung to carry the heavy box. 3) She is so young that she cant carry the 4) She is not old enough to carry the,不准在图书馆大声喧哗. 1) You _ talk loudly in the library. 2) You _ _ _ to talk loudly in the library. 3) _ talk loudly in the library.,mustnt,are,allowed,Dont,not,28,我最喜欢的科目是英语. My _ subject is Englis

19、h. I _ English _ _ any other subject. I _ English _. The town in which my parents live is very beautiful. We all love it very much.,避难就易,favorite,like,best,like,than,better,长短句交错运用,方法三: 妙用关联词,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, either

20、or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all; 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore，sothat 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not onlybut also, on the one handon the other hand;,牢记关联词,7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, first (of all

21、), firstlysecondlyfinally ; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact; 10.表示结论: in a word, in all, generally speaking.,牢记关联词,My name is Tom. I am 15 years old. _ my appearances, I am tall _ I wear glasses. _ my personalities, I am shy _friendly. I have a happy family. There are 3 people i

22、n my family. I have lots of hobbies. _,I enjoy_singing _ collecting stamps. Now, I study in Class 2, Grade 3, No.1 High School. My favorite subject is math. _, I am interested in English, Chinese, physics _. I live far from school _ I usually get up at 6:00 and go to school by subway. _, I have a busy _wonderful life.,As for,and,As for,bu