高考英语书面表达第一讲.ppt

1、,高考英语书面表达1 -确保及格分,1、审题（体裁、话题、时态、人称等） 2、谋篇布局（尤其注意开头段和结尾段） 3、书写认真、规范 4、卷面整洁 5、语言流畅，不犯错误,认真阅读书面表达的试题要求是做好该题的第一步。高考书面表达一般属控制性写作，同时留有一定的自由发挥的空间。因此务必细心审题，覆盖要点，进行合理的想象与扩展，审题时包括考虑应用第几人称、主要时态范畴、文章的结构等。2010年很多考生未能审清体裁，所用人称都是we或you should有部分考生甚至漏掉第二板块或第二板块仍然写we should.,答卷反映的问题1-审题,1.审题不清（话题、时态、人称） 1）People hav

2、e different opinions about what is the key to success. Most of the people hold the opinion that if one is hard-working and well-educated, he is more likely to achieve his goals. 2） At the beginning, he went to the basketball team Rocket, but he was refused. . 3）The boys in the USA differ from us in

3、China. They are more creative and positive, And they work on their dreams. Lin is a boy of them. 4） Some people thought it is hard work that has led to his success.,答卷反映的问题1-审题 (体裁、内容要点）,2、篇幅（避免太多或太少） 第一段无拓展。His hard work, .led to 第二段句式重复。 第三段过多或过少，观点无深度无梯度。 1） As far as I am concerned, I can learn

4、from him to be hardworking. We should work hard and dont give up. 2） On a personal note, I admire him. I want to achieve my dream in the future. And I love him. I love having our own roads. We are the kings of the world!,答卷反映的问题-审题（篇幅）,高考作文评分原则已经明确指出，考生作文词数少于130词和多于170词的，从总分中减去2分。由此看来，在写作时一般控制在150个左

5、右为妥，若字数太少会给人一种水平低下、草草了事的感觉，而且也无法表达清楚较深层次的思想。 有些同学的字很小，即使实际字数超过了130字，给阅卷老师的感觉还是字数不够。所以，在写作时字的大小最好适中，这样整篇作文看起来要充实些。 词数不够是要扣分的，但是也并不是词数写得越多就越好。俗话说得好，言多必失。我们阅卷的时候非常讨厌看到一篇长长的作文。有的学生每行要写15个字，又写满16行，读上去既无长句好词，又都是碎碎叨叨的小句或无关紧要的文字和与话题无关的感悟。 因此，控制篇幅是很重要的。,答卷反映的问题2-篇幅,Too short!,Too long!,英语书面表达毕竟是一项主观性试题，评分过程中

6、就会难免有很多主观因素。漂亮而又老道的字体，干净整洁的卷面会使人赏心悦目，无疑会给考生的作文增色不少。因此，考生在写作时要注意书写规范，字母均匀大小适中，字体工整，保持卷面整洁，忌潦草凌乱，乱涂乱改。我们在阅卷中经常会碰到一些好文章，但是没有得到五档分数，也就是21-25分，原因就在于字迹潦草且书写不规范，多少影响了阅卷人员的判断。但如果遇到很优美的字体，即使文章写得一般般，阅卷人员也往往会往同一档次的上档分数去打。比如，如果我看到一篇书面表达，根据文章的行文造句判断，它应该是属于四档作文，即16-20分的作文，那么我往往会在潜意识里往19-20这样的上档分数去打。,答卷反映的问题3-卷面整洁

7、,考生在书面表达中如果出现太多的语言错误，则会直接影响表达的效果和成绩。在写作时，考生应该尽可能地减少错误，避免出现汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误，尽量避开自己使用起来没有把握的单词和句子。如果为了追求句式的变化而出现了一些本来可以避免的错误，就得不偿失了。在保证准确的前提下，考生才可以考虑句式的变化，应用较多的语法结构。很多考生因为犯了不该犯的语言错误而降低了书面表达的档次。,答卷反映的问题4-语言错误,1. 汉语式的表达（Childrens English） 1）The reasons for his success has 4 important points. 2） The reasons

8、 for his success are four. 3） Lin has many strengths deserve us to learn. 4） He has fortune. 2. 单句太多；句式单一且重复使用。 1）He is hardworking. He is talented at playing basketball. He received a good education. He has good luck, too. 2）70% of them think that he will do better than Yao Ming in NBA. 20% of them

9、 think he wont do better and 10% have no idea whether he can do better than Yao Ming.,答卷反映的问题4-语言错误,3. 句子结构错，语言错误多， 符号乱。 1)There are 20% of the people think he wont beyond Yao Ming. 2)Because luck is also important. 3)When he meet stress, he never give up. 4)In addition to, I also can learn how to f

10、ace with failure and success properly. 5)He is talented, he is tall and young.,答卷反映的问题4-语言错误,勤奋(n) _ (adj) _ 2. 在方面有天赋_ 3. 接受良好的教育_ 4. 运气(n) _ (adj) _ 5.超越某人_,常用词汇的正确表达,hard work / diligence,hardworking/ diligent,have a gift/ talent for/ be gifted/ talented at/ in,receive a good education/ be well-

11、educated,luck/ fortune lucky/ fortunate,make more achievements than sb / go beyond sb (in ones career),6. 导致他的成功_ 7. 持有相反的观点_ 8. 学习某人的优秀品质_ 9. 克服困难_ 10. 实现某人的梦想_ 达到某人的目标_ 树立某人的目标_,常用词汇的正确表达,lead to/ contribute to/ result in his success,hold the opposite opinion,learn from ones good qualities,overcom

12、e difficulties,realize/ live ones dreams,reach/ achieve ones goal,set a goal/ set an aim,勤奋导致了他的成功。 1.简单句 1) His hard work _. 2) He can owe _. 2. 定语从句 1)Hard work is one of the important factors _. 2) He is hardworking, _.,采用灵活多变的句式,has led to his success,his success to his hard work,which have led

13、to his success/ leading to his success,which has led to his success,3.名词性从句 _ is his hard work. 4.虚拟语气 Without his hard work_. 5.非谓语动词 _for years, he achieved success at last. (After many years hard work, he) 6. 强调句 It is _,采用灵活多变的句式,What has led to his success,he wouldnt have achieved success,Having worked hard / made great efforts,his hard work that has led to his success .,确保及格分，必须做到：,1.书写必须规范，写字必须端正，卷面要整洁，给阅卷人员以良好的第一印象； 2.标准卷面设计,排版技巧很重要； 3.避开不该出现的语言错误； 4.写要点的句子要突出。实际上，阅卷老师没