如何提升中考英语作文

命题人是怎么想的？ 试题的设置一般都提供一定的情景内容，内容多与学生日常生活实际相联系。提供情景内容的形式有材料、提纲、图表或图画等。试题也注重考查考生 表达 个人 思想、 再现 生活经历、 描述 周边任务以及 发表相关 观点 的能力。见 初中毕业生学业考试复习用书 P76准备 中考英语作文（ 24个 热点话题）uMy dreamuLow-carbon lifeuMy feelings when leaving schooluHappinessuSchool safetyuHow to behave welluMy teacher / my friends / parents/familyuMy school day / lifeuMy hobbyuMy favourite animal准备 中考英语作文热点话题 uMy childhooduMy herouA holiday journey in the pastuMy school life / My dream schooluHow to keep healthyuThe Spring FestivaluMy hometownuHow to learn EnglishuWriting about animals in dangeru How to protect our environmentu Save wateru Mobile phonesu Homework / study /pressureu Communication准备 中考英语作文热点话题 阅卷人是怎么想的？谁是阅卷人？他们工作时心情如何？一半高中老师，一半初中老师。不太好！评分依据是什么？第五档：（ 18-20分）内容完整，表达清楚；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用 修饰词 或表示顺序、逻辑关系的 连接词 。鼓励使用 高级词汇与丰富的句子结构 。第四档：（ 14-17分）内容较完整，表达较清晰；行文基本连贯；语言有少量错误。第三档：（ 10-13分）内容基本完整，表达基本清晰；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第二档：（ 6-9分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。第一档：（ 0-5分）白卷或文不对题，只抄写了提示词。评分标准：好文章的明显特征（ 解读评分标准）2、分段，条理清晰3、有过渡词，过渡句5、开头要点题，结尾要归题。1、书写工整、优美4、有高级词汇、优美句子如：谚语、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强调句、比喻等修辞方式，富有文采。怎么提升？有高级词汇、优美句子如：谚语、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强调句、比喻等修辞方式，富有文采。不同表达：钟爱 /热爱 /着迷 /普通 词汇 优 美 词汇like / love / enjoyprefertobe a fan ofbe interested infall in love withcare forgo forbe fond ofbe crazy aboutbe mad aboutbe fascinated about have a passion forbe keen on如何提升词汇？ 例如：喜欢1.When I talk with my classmatesafter class, I feel happy.第三档lWhenever I talk with my classmatesafter class, I feel relaxed and pleased.From 普通句式 to优美句式lHow pleased I am when I talk with my classmates after class!第四档第五档如何提升句子？2.When I get a good mark in my exam, I feel happy.When getting a good mark in my exam, I feel cheerful and proud.Getting a good mark in my exam, I feel cheerful and proud.To my joy, I usually get good marks in the exams.3.When I have a lot of homework, I feel bored. uI have so much homework to dothat I feel bored.uI have so much homework to do, which makes me bored.4. When I do badly in the exam, I feel bored. To my sadness, I sometimes do badly in the exam.Because of my poor study, I feelsad and bored.Doing badly in the exam makes me bored. 一句多译，彰显扎实的语言功底n Mike is fond of /is interested in reading.n Mike shows great interest in reading.n Reading is his favorite/ Mikes hobby.n Reading plays an important part in Mikes life.n Mike is a fan of reading.n Mike is crazy about/is keen on reading.n Mike is addicted to reading.n Mike feels like/ enjoys/ loves reading. 1. 迈克喜欢阅读。n Its great fun for Mike to read different kinds of books.n Mike cant help reading if he is free.n Mike spends a lot of time reading in his free time.n It takes Mike a lot of time to read when he is free.n Nothing is more important than reading for Mike .n Mike fell in love with reading when he was young.1. 迈克喜欢阅读。方法一：旧文重写Hi, Li Li! Im Lucy. I think English is easy and fun. Here is my advice on how to improve your English. Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class. Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times. Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free. Last but not least, in your spare time, What about making some foreign pen friends and writing email messages in English to each other. Well, if you do these every day, I think your English will be better .How to learn English(无错误但非高分作文）如何对句子进行修饰与提升：1.Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class，Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”2.Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times.It can not only improve your reading skill but also help you widen your sights.The more you read, the better your reading skill will be.3.Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free.Nothing is difficult, if you put your heart into it.Hi, Li Li! Im Lucy. I think English is easy and fun. Here is my advice on how to improve your English. Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times. It can not only improve your reading skills but also help you widen your sights. Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free. Nothing is difficult, if you put your heart into it. Last but not least, in your spare time, What about making some foreign pen friends and writing emails in English to each other. Well, if you do these every day, I think your English will be better .经修改提升的好文章如：描写人物外貌、性格特征的词汇kind, helpful, outgoing, humorous, easy-going, hardworking, brave, clever, bright, polite, honest, friendly, smart, naughty, warm- hearted be popular with, be kind to, be interested in,be fond of, with the help of, be proud of, takepride inneither tall nor short ,short dark hair ,small eyes, strong, thin, short fair hair，a pair of glasses方法二：帮助学生整理并扩充词汇如：描写人物可用的一些句型1. not only but also He is not only strong, but also very tall. He is not only my best teacher, but also my best friend. He not only makes his class lively and interesting, but also gives us his deep love. Li Hua is not only an excellent student butalso a helpful and kind person.方法三：帮助学生整理并扩充句子2. so that She is so humorous and knowledgeable that we are all her fans. She is so kind that she is always ready to help others. Im so lucky that I have such a good mother. My English teach