2011朱泰琪考研英语写作讲座

2011朱泰琪考研英语写作讲座主题：考什么类型作文？怎么写? 用什么句型写？如何才能写好？本人今年考上的研究生，英语水平极差，但考研英语考得很理想，关键就在本人的杀手锏：英语万能作文模板，呵呵，它不仅保证了我大作文打16+（满分20），使我作文得高分而且还节约了大量时间做其他的题目，这模板所需填的词极少，背下即可！有对英语发愁的可加交流经验啊，呵呵 一The main types of guided writing:1. 提纲式作文： Directions: Women make a great contribution to the progress of modern society. But there are still some people who dont agree with it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper based on the following outline.1. Role of women in modern society2. Prejudices and discrimination against women 3. My comment You should write about 200 words within 40 minutes. Women play an important part in modern society. Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and factories. Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex. In addition, some of are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run completely by women. It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progress of modern society. There are, however, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in many ways. In the first place, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough. They believe that women are the weaker sex both physically and emotionally. Thus, women are naturally suited, much more so than men, to the performance of domestic duties. According to them, a womans place is within the protective environment of the home. Secondly, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than do women. Personally, Im firmly standing on the side of those women right defenders. Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing. (242 words)2. 提纲图表式作文： Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Study the following table care fully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. You should quote as few figures as possible. Outline: 1. Changes in peoples daily expanses in the past five years 2. Possible reasons for the changes 3. My own conclusion YearItem19971998199920002001Food65%60%48%42%35%Clothing5%7%10%13%15%Recreation3%5%7%8%13%Others24%26%33%36%38%Total100%100%100%100%100% In the past five years, there have been great changes in peoples daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 2001. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 15% in 2001. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses. What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion, there are at least three good reasons. To begin with, with the rapid development of agriculture in China, the output of grain, fruit, vegetables and milk has sharply increased, which contributes to the decline in their prices. Secondly, the family incomes of people both in the city and in the country have greatly risen so that people now can afford expensive clothing and some of them even want to dress in the latest fashion. Finally, as the living conditions improve, the demand for a variety of recreations is growing steadily, too. In short, with the incomes continuing to rise, people will no longer resign themselves to living a dull, monotonous life. They are eager to make their life interesting and exciting. Therefore, I am sure that people will spend more money on clothing and recreations. (219 words)3规定情景式作文：Directions: Migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. In this part, you are to write within 40 minutes a composition of 200 words about “The Role of Migrant Workers”. You can agree and/or disagree, completely or partially to above statement. But no matter which position you take, you should supporting reasons. As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our work force. Most of them work on construction sites. There is no doubt that without migrant workers many of construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. In addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which enhances the consumption of food and daily items. This in turn helps to develop food industry and service trades in cites. All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities. However, as a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. The same is the case with migrant workers. Firstly, most of them are not well educated and professionally trained. Some of them have had very little schooling. As you know. Illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to make trouble, thus endangering social order. Secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they are ambitious for. Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society. In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them. (244 words)二、The structure of a paragraph and its development:1. Structure of a paragraph: topic sentence, development sentence and concluding sentence. 2. Ways of developing a paragraph:1) Comparison and contrast (对比法)2) Cause and effect (因果法)3) Exemplification (举例法)4) Generalization and qualification (概述法)5) Argument (议论法)三、Some sentence patterns commonly-used in controlled writing :-关于利弊、优缺点的句型： 1. S + have (or has ) a lot of advantages over . (与.相比有许多优点) 译：汽车与自行车相比有许多优点。have the advantage of .(有.方面的长处) 译：1）英语好是她的长处。 2）澳大利亚与中国相比，其优点是人口少。 3）他比他们有利的是他会操作电脑。 2. be of great benefit to sb./sth. (对.有益) 译：你的计算机知识对你将来的工作十分有益 3. benefit sb/sth. (对有好处) 译：这家新医院对整个社区有利。 benefit from sth. (由于.而受益) 译：我们将从技术发明中受益。 4. do (a lot of) good to sb. (对.有许多好处) 译：早晨锻炼对你很有好处。 be good for sb./sth. (对.有益) 译：蔬菜和水果有利人的健康。 do damage to sth./damage sth. (对.造成损害) 译：这次地震对城市建筑损坏严重。 do harm to sth./harm sth./endanger sth. (对.有害处) 译：吸烟危害人的健康。 5.be as(not so) good/great as 译：他做得没有说得好。 6. not so much as (与其说,不如说) 译：人口的迅速增长与其说是由于出生率的上升不如说是由于死亡率的下降。 The reason for the rapid increase in population is not so much a rise in birth rate as a fall in death rate.-说明原因的句型：forto do sth.sometwo many 1. There are good reasons Example: There are two reasons for the changes in peoples living conditions. First, we have been carrying out an opening and reform policy. Second, our national economy is developing rapidly and the birth rate has been put under control. 2. We have two good reasons for 译：我们有许多理由反对工业不受控制的发展。 3. The reasons for is that + 从句 译：我们支持“希望工程”的原因时，许多贫困地区的儿童付不起继续学业的各种费用。opinionsviews-表示不同看法的句型：blemmatterhavehold 1. Different people different on this Some believe that Others argue that Still others maintain that 译：人们对国际文化交流的看法各不相同。有些人认为，国际文化交流能促进各国人民之间的友谊和了解。另一些人则争辩说，中国是一个具有5000年历史的文明古国，并且有自己的传统文化，它和西方文化截然不同。因此，他们反对国际文化交流。我认为，第2种看法是片面的。现在国际文化交流是非常重要的。各国人民应该互相了解、互相学习以便增进友谊。People differ in their opinions on the international cultural exchange. Some believe that international cultural exchange contributes to the friendship and understanding of the people all over the world. Others argue that China is an ancient civilized nation with a history of 5000 years and has its own traditional culture, which is quite different from that in the western countries. Therefore, they are opposed to the international cultural exchange. In my opinion, the second view is one-sided and partial. The international cultural exchange is of great importance now. People of all countries should understand each other and learn from each other to enhance the friendship among them.2. They are quite different from each other in their opinions.3. Some people hold the opinion that it is good to have a small family. 4. They think quite differently on this question. 5. They differ greatly in their attitudes towards noise problem. Example: Parents and children think differently on this question. Parents hold that children should work hard and do well at school. Children, however, maintain that they should have freedom to spend their leisure time and to plan for their own future. -表示必须、紧急、有困难做某事的句型：1. It is important (necessary, urgent, difficult, easy, convenient, comfortable, expensive, desirable, advisable) for sb. To do sth. Examples: 1) It is inevitable that the natural resources throughout the world are diminishing as the demand for them is on the increase. 2) It is obvious that the strength of a countrys economy is directly bound up with the efficiency of its industry and agriculture. 3) It is urgent for the government to take measures to control the birth rate in our country/to change deserts into farmland. 4) It is necessary to build more hospitals, shopping centers, recreation centers, cinemas, and other public facilities to meet the increasing needs of the people. trouble difficulty a hard time a difficult time 2. have (in) doing sth. (有困难做某事)Example: He has troubles finding a satisfactory job. have trouble with sth. (对有困难，不好对付) Example: I have some trouble with my English study.-常用谚语（在议论文中）：1. As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. 2. As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand, if you dont deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the matter from two sides. 3. As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way.” (有志者事竟成。)4. As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.”(观其交友，知其为人。)5. As is known to all, “No pains, no gains”. (没有苦，就没有甜。)6. Its no use crying over the spilt milk. (覆水难收。)7. More haste, less speed. (欲速则不达。)8. Look before you leap. (三思而后行。)9. He who laughs last laughs best. (谁最后笑，谁笑得最好。)-关于因果关系的句型：cause of reason for 1.The higher prices was an increase in demand. 译：他们取得的成果是由于他们的刻苦努力。Because As Now that Since 2. the demand has increased, the prices are higher. causesresults in leads to produces 3. An increase in demand higher prices. Therefore,As a result, For this reason, Because of this , Consequently,4. The demand has increased. the prices are higher.rise.go up. boost.are higher.5. If there is an increase in demand, then prices 译：由于所有这因素，政府越来越多地依靠科学家来安排适当的规划并付诸实践。 As a result of all these factors, governments are becoming increasingly dependent on scientists for planning appropriate programs and putting them into effect. -辩论中常用的句型：1. There is no doubt that . 译：毫无疑问，人口的飞速增长促使野生动物数量的锐减。 2. It is obvious/clear that 爱心是一盏灯，越黑暗的地方，它越明亮。 3. As is known all, 中国一贯主张，国家不分大小，应该一律平等。4. (Its) no wonder(难怪) 译：他不努力工作，难怪他丢了工作。5. It goes without saying that (不成问题，很自然) 译：很自然健康的人比病人幸福。6. What is more important, 我们应该保持生态平衡。7. I am convinced that我们的社会充满着爱，明天将会变得更美好、更光明。-举例表示法：1. For example, the peoples economic status has been greatly improved. 2. For instance, the economic status of the people has been improved. 3. Lets have an example. TV sets, refrigerators and recorders have become household necessities. -概述（用于图表作文）：1. According to the figures given in the table, 中国的钢产量已超过美国和日本，占世界第一。2. This chart shows that 全世界吸烟者的人数不断上升，占总人口的20%3. As is shown by the graph, 某些野生动物物种的灭绝于世界人口的猛增密切相关。4. It can be seen from the statistics/picture that 随着城市中汽车数量的不断增加，空气污染和噪音已成为威胁城市居民生存的主要公害。believed that acceptedthought held 5. It is generally 各国政府应该采取措施来保护海洋资源。duction.rise increase incomedecreasedeclinereductionfall dropslightslowsteadyrapid 6. There is a in 译：表中所给的数字表明，最近5年来人民的收入已有显著增长。increasedecreaserisedecline7. be on the (在增加/减少/上升/下降)译：从曲线图可以看出，世界各国的自然资源在不断减少。cars in cities students in the college traffic accidents Example: The number of has been on the rise increasedeclinedecreasein recent years. -结尾句型：1. In my opinion, I am in favor of owning a car. 2. Personally, I prefer to work in the country rather than in the city. 3. In short, parents and children should learn to get through to each other. Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly. 4. In conclusion, we cannot achieve success without effort and hard work.5. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that “No pains no gains.”四、参考作文翻译练习： （1）提纲式作文Road Accidents Outline:1. Losses caused by road accidents 2. Suggested ways to reduce road accidents 3. My comments 最近5年来道路事故的数目不断上升，尤其在城市中。每当发生交通事故，有关的人员不是受伤就是死亡。它们对国家和受害者的家庭造成了巨大的损失。因此，迫在眉睫的是，我们应该采取措施来减少交通事故并确保道路安全。 我想有几个方法可以降低事故率。首先，政府应该采取有力措施来改善道路状况。例如：应该投资更多的钱来建造新的公路，许多又老又窄城市街道应加宽或重建。其次，地方当局应该用各种可能的方法来教育人民遵守交通规则。最后，行人穿过繁华街道时应小心谨慎。我认为，以上所提到的几个方面是避免交通事故所必需的。随着车辆不断的增加，城市道路正变得越来越拥挤。但是假如每个人各尽其责并遵守交通规则，道路将会变得更安全。我相信，交通状况将会改善，尽管我们还有许多的困难要克服。Road Accidents In the past five years the number of road accidents has been on the rise in big cities. Whenever they happen, the people involved are either injured or killed. They cause great losses both to the country and to victims families. Therefore, it is urgent that we do something to reduce traffic accidents and make our roads safe. There are several ways I think to cut down to accident rate. In the first place, the government should take effective measures to improve road conditions. For example, more funds ought to be invested in building new highways and many of the old narrow streets in cities widened or reconstructed. Secondly, local authorities should educate people in every possible way to comply with traffic regulations. Finally, pedestrians should be very careful whenever crossing busy streets. In my opinion, the above mentioned ways are essential to avoid traffic accidents. With the number of cars continuing to rise, the roads in cities are getting more and more crowded. But if everyone does his part and observes traffic rules, the road will be safer to all of us. I trust traffic conditions will be improving though we still have a long way to go. (200 words)(2)规定情景式作文Directions: Stress is a natural part of modern life. In this part, you are required to write within 40 minutes a composition of no less than 200 words about “Stress in Modern Life” (现代生活中的压力). You are to state briefly the relationship between stress and modern life and the different attitudes towards stress. At the end of your composition you should draw your own conclusion. 众所周知，压力是日常生活中很自然的事，并且也无法躲避压力。随着现代生活的节奏不断加快，我们从早到晚总是感到忙忙碌碌。而且很难减慢。我们似乎觉得我们周围人人都在拼命干。因此，不管一个人干什么，他总会感到压力。可见，在竞争社会中压力和生活是影印不离的。 然而，不同的人对压力的看法不同。有些人认为，压力并不是通常所认为的坏事。他们的观点是， 某种压力对提供动力和使生活哟目的所不可缺少的。其他人则争辩说，压力加剧了精力的消耗，因此危害人的健康。在他们看来，压力的反面，即轻松，是身心健康所必不可少的。 就个人而言，我赞成前一种观点。当一个人全心投入到他所从事的事业时，压力是不可能避免的。依我看，只有当压力失去控制时，它才会导致行为失调和身体不适。Stress in Modern Life As everyone knows, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. As the pace of modern life continues to increase, we are always feeling on the go from morning till night. And it is hard to slow down. It seems to us that everyone around us is aggressive. Therefore, whatever one does, he feels under stress all the time. It is clear that stress has much to do with the life in a competitive society. Different people, however, think of stress quite differently. Some believe that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the opinion that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose to life. Others argue that stress contributes to ones mental decline and hence endangers his health. According to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body. Personally, Im in favor of the former view. I think it is impossible to avoid stress when one is entirely devoted to the career he pursues. In my opinion, it is only when the stress gets out of control that it can lead to poor performance and ill health. (207 words)注：be on the go 忙碌(3)图表或漫画式作文Sharp Increase in World Population1961-1975年 （15年）40亿30亿20亿10亿人类生活开始-1830年 （约200万年）1831-1930年 （100年）1931-1960年 （30年）Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Your essay should cover all the information provided in the bar chart and meet the requirements below. 1. Interpret the pictures a