非谓语动词在写作中的运用.ppt

Non- finite Verbs in writing 非谓语动词在写作中的应用,Our Spring Outing,National College Entrance Examination is coming. To relax ourselves, our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. Having a barbecue is our choice. The next day, we set off early in the morning. We climbed the mountain, talking and laughing . When we arrived, we began to barbecue. Having had a big dinner, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view. We were tired but happy.,What do you think of it?,高考考试说明(写作) 考生应能 (1)清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思； (2)有效应用所学语言知识。,Our Spring Outing,National College Entrance Examination is coming. To relax ourselves, our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. Having a barbecue is our choice. The next day, we set off early in the morning. We climbed the mountain, talking and laughing . When we arrived, we began to barbecue. Having had a big dinner, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view. We were tired but happy.,1. Making our city greener is everyones duty. 2. The government is determined to continue the green program. 3. I find my hometown changed so much. 4. Having fresh air, trees can reduce air pollution. 5. Every effort to make the program makes a difference.,5.定语,2. 宾语,4. 状语,3.宾补,1. 主语,找出非谓语动词，并判断成分,1. Looking from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . 2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook.,Correction,1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致,Looking from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .,Looked from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语,2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.,In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,3、主动、被动含义混淆,A team calling itself the supper cook.,3. Which team is good at cooking? A team called itself the supper cook.,A team called the supper cook.,1. It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. 2. A girl climbed so hard that she lost her temper. She complained about the long walk. 3. The monitor has set a good example for us . Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .,Connection, It is high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy.,It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.,+,目的状语, Lucy climbed so hard that she lost her temper. She complained about the long walk.,Lucy got so angry that she lost her temper, complaining about the long walk.,伴随状语,+, The monitor has set a good example for us . Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .,Having set a good example for us, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .,原因状语,+,高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),高考临近。 保持良好的心态很重要。 它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。,Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely., National College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence1:,Step3：合并句子,With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,College Entrance Examination is coming., It is important to have a right attitude., It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.,Sentence2:,Tip: Try to use different ways to express.,（2011高考模拟） 要求：1. 用2- 3句话表达表格内容 2. 2- 3句话要有连贯性,Having a try,Having a try,It is necessary to have enough sleep . Having enough sleep is necessary.,It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.,Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.,To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.,Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.,1. beggar, lie, sleep 2. Mr. Li, hurry, pay no attention to 3. stick out，trip over(绊倒) , angry ,A beggar,A beggar,Writing,2. Mr Li hurried home, paying no attention to a beggar.,1. The beggar lay on the ground, sleeping.,3. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping over Mr Li, which made him very angry.,Make an ending,Exchange and discuss your partners composition, following the criteria.,Pair work,A beggar One day, hurrying home, Mr. Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground, sleeping. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping Mr. Li over, which made him very angry. Realizing the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give hi