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1、精锐教育学科教师辅导讲义学员辅导科目：英语学科教师：廖青青授课类型C 专题：审题及列提纲C改进句子T授课日期及时段教学内容一、专题知识梳理1， 审题目审题目：认真审题，看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心 ，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题，写作时要摆明自己的观点，并围绕文章 进行写作。审题要审格式、体裁、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。体裁： 社会热点话题一般写作体裁是议或夹叙夹议的文章。时态：多为一般现在时 C文章结构：The structure of a comitionOr suggestionSuggestion 2Suggestion

2、 1Or Reason3Reason2Reason 1Supporting detailsSupporting detailsTopic sentenceTopic sentence学员：年级：数：32，圈要点防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。近几年写作题目倾向去只给出一些提示文字而不给出三个英文问题，加大了学生审题并圈出要点的难度。3，列提纲根据文章要点及短文的中心将主要句型、语记下，形成提纲。4，定基调定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。时态：人称：顺序：开头：结尾：5，写全文6，查疏漏题目要求，内容完整。

3、时态，语态, 主谓不一致，词形, 词组搭配标点错误拼写,大小写惯用的表达，中国式英语表达批注：老师需要讲解如何列提纲，列提纲并不是大篇幅的进行写作，很多学生认为列提纲就是写出很多完成句子，把列提纲和写作文草稿混为一谈。二、专题精讲:VII. Writing (作文): (共 20 分)Writeeast 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Recently, people come to realize how much grain we waste every year. And e

4、veryone is called on to join an called“ Clean your plate”.现上下都在创建节约型社会铺张浪费。某英语报社提倡Clean your platen(光盘行动)，倡导人们不浪费粮食，吃光盘子里的东西，吃不完的饭菜打包带走。谈谈你对此倡议的看法，作为中学生如何用实际行动来去响应光盘行动呢？（注意：文中不得出现任何、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。文章开头已给出，不计入字数。）体裁：夹叙夹议1，审题内容：就“光盘行动”进行，表达自己的看法及如何去做结类文章结构时态：一般现在时你对“光盘行动”的看法2， 要点建议（不浪费粮食、向周围的人宣传“光盘行

5、动”等）1, Its nesary for us to clean our plate.3，列提纲2, take leftovers home3.l people the importance of saving food and should encourage more people to join it4.conlu: Its importantt everyone does their bit.(do ones bit 做分内的事)时态：一般现在时4，定基调人称：I, we开头，结尾：首尾呼应5，写全文：批注：尽管此处是专题精讲部分，但是为了更好的帮助学生提高，老师可以让试着让学生分析

6、文章及列提纲，并把可以用到这篇文章中的观点，单词和短语列出来，这样老师就可以指导学生是文章内容思有问题还是词汇上有问题。范文：Recently, people come to realize how much grain we waste every year. And everyone is called on to join ancalled “Clean your plate”. I think its nesary for us to clean our plate and we middle school students should dosomething for it. For

7、 instance, we should eat all the foodt is served in our plate. Whats more, when we have meals inrestaurants, we should order the foodt we can eat up and take leftovers home. In addition, we should encouragemore people to johe Clean Your Platen and call on more people to reduce food waste. To reduce

8、food waste isa big task, and it needs time. Its importantt everyone does their bit.批注：老师可以让学生将文章中的好词好句摘抄在笔记本中背诵。6，查疏漏主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎三、专题过关检测题 ：Writing(作文) （共 20 分）14 年奉贤区一模Writeeast 60 words about the topic “I beve I can ”.(“以我相信我能”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggestedpos:What do you

9、 beve you can do?Why do you think you can doHow will you dot?t? _ 60 80范文 1：I beve I can be a good monitorI am a new monitor in class and I beve I can be a good monitor.of all, I get along very well with my classmates and most of them have a good relationship with me. It is a good start, isnt it? Be

10、sides, I will help teachers anize activities and bring not only them but also classmates convenience. Most importantly, I really want to share my sucsful learning experience with others who isrouble of learning. If I can bring happiness to them, I thinkeast I am a helpful monitor. Actions speak loud

11、lyn words. Therefore, Im trying to carry them out and I beve I can bea good monitor.范文 2：I beve I can realize my dreamEveryone has a dream. My dream is to be a pianist. Because my hard work, sweat, and tears bring me confidence, and they will realize my dream in return. I will practice playing thano every night until my fingers feel pain. I will learn from my teachers, listen to othianists music and use my heart to feel what they feel. I will also take part in some raor make performance in front of my classmates. I beve their joy and