英语书面表达答题技巧9.慰问信课件

慰

问

信9.文体概述慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞；要围绕一个中心，鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情→进行安慰和帮助→鼓励其努力→再次表示同情并希望事情早日恢复顺利。很抱歉/震惊得知……I

was

so

sorry/shockedto

learn

of

the

newsthat…听到……我深感难过

。

I

am

deeply

sorry

tohear

that…/

I

just

can't

tell

you

how

sorry

Iam

to

hearthat…

请接受我最深切的慰问。Please

accept

my

deepest

sympathy.我想送你我最美好的祝愿。I

want

to

send

you

my

best

wishes

for…我无法相信……

I

couldn't

believe

that…常用语块6.对……表示同情have/show

sympathy

for…我们充满了……We

are

filledwith…请转达我对……的同情Please

convey

my

sympathy

to…最好的祝愿……Best

wishes

for…我们都希望……We

are

all

hoping…13.出院11.我相信你会成功……I

am

sure

you

will

succeed

in…12.对你的未来保持乐观remain

optimistic

about

your15.渡过难关go

throughthe

difficultyfutureleave

the

hospital

/

be

discharged

from(the)hospital

14.我祝愿你快速康复。I

wish

you

swift/quick/speedy

recovery.我很遗憾听到你在数学方面做得不好，对学业失去了兴趣。I

am

sorry

to

hear

that

you

didn't

dowell

in

math

and

have

lost

interest

inschoolwork.确实每个人都会有这样一段不顺心的时期，所以你不必太担心。2.

The

truth

is

that

everyone

will

have

oneof

those

periods

when

things

seem

to

begoing

wrong,

so

you

don't

have

to

worry

somuch.套用句式3.请转达我向你家人的慰问。Please

convey

my

sympathy

to

your

family.积极的生活态度对提高你的情绪有帮助。Such

a

positive

attitude

towards

life

canbe

helpful

in

lifting

your

spirits.大家都希望你早日归来。5.

We

are

all

hoping

you

will

be

backsoon.shockedDear

John,I

am

shocking

to

hear

that

you

hav∧e

severe

fluaand

now

are

in

hospital.

I

get

this

news

from

yourmother

and

knew

you

must

be

absent

for

half

aknowmonth

at

the

classes.

Do

are

careful

while

you

arefrombeill.

Don’t

worry

about

your

lesson

and

I

am

willinglessonsto

help

you

learn

from

them

when

you

return.习作修改We

are

best

friends

so

I

will

never

allow

youto

fall

behind.

You

can

watch

television

orlisten

to

radio

programs

to

help

pass

the

timebut

forget

your

pains

while

you

recover.

I

didhope

that

I

can

see

you

soon

and

bring

youany

funnycartoons.Yours

truly,Li

Huaandsomedo作者写信给John，对其生病表示慰问。shocking

→shocked

表示“感到震惊的”，要用shocked。在severe

flu前加a

因have

a

flu(患流感)是固定词组。knew

→know

要与并列谓语get时态保持一致。at→from

固定搭配be

absent

from意为

“缺席”。are

→be

do用在祈使句中开头表强调，其后接动词需用原形，故要用be。lesson→lessons

根据后面的them可知要用复数。去掉them前的from

根据文意可知，此处是指“帮助你学习功课”，而不是“向功课学习”。but

→and

此处显然是“顺承”关系，而非“转折”关系。did

→do

全文主体时态是一般现在时。any→some

肯定句用some表示“一些”。课堂练习假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点如下：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：temper

n.

脾气，情绪DearPeter,I'm

sorry

to

know

that

you're

havingsuch

a

hard

time

at

the

moment.

The

truth

isthat

everyone

will

have

one

of

thoseperiodswhen

things

seem

to

be

going

wrong,

so

youdon't

have

to

worry

so

much.

The

importantthing

is

to

learn

to

control

your

temper

sothat

you

may

not

do

or

say

anythingyou'llregret.

Here

are

three

useful

tips:First,

talk

to

someone

you

trust

abouthow

you

feel.

This

is

a

good

way

of

lettingyour

anger

out

without

hurting

others

oryourself.

Second,

go

outdoors

and

play

gameswith

your

friends

as

physical

exercise

is

aneffective

way

to

get

rid

of

anger.

Andthird,remain

optimistic

about

your

future.

Such

apositive

attitude

towards

life

can

be

helpful

inlifting

your

spirits.I

hope

you'll

soon

feel

calmer

and

carryonasnormal.Yours，LiHua假定你是李华，你的美国好友Jane数学学得不好，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请给她发封邮件开导她。要点如下：没有必要过于伤心；振作自己，减少焦虑；和老师交流有助改善；探索适合自己的学习方式。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。课外作业DearJane,I

am

sorry

to

hear

that

you

didn't

dowell

in

math

and

have

lost

interest

inschoolwork.

As

is

often

the

case,

math

isdifficult

for

most

students,

so

there

is

noneed

to

feel

too

bad.

At

this

moment,

whatyou

should

do

is

cheer

up

and

find

ways

toreduce

your

anxiety.

Why

not

go

on

anouting

with

your

friends

or

find

time

tolisten

to

your

favorite

music?

If

you

cantalk

to

the

teachers

who

you

respectmost,they

may

give

you

some

practical

advicethat

helps

you.

Probably

it's

time

for

you

toexplor