专题12读后续写构造“动作链”两大句式仿写20例及高考真题片段运用

专题12读后续写构造“动作链”两大句式仿写20例及高考真题片段运用讲义CONTENTS构造动作链句式一：主语+动作A+动作Band动作C构造动作链句式二：Havingdone…,主谓宾【高考实战运用一】(2023年新高考I卷读后续写片段)【高考实战运用二】(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)【高考实战运用三】(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)【高考实战运用四】(2022年新高考I卷读后续写片段)【高考实战运用五】(2021年新高考I卷读后续写片段)PARTONE01

构造动作链句式一：主语+动作A+动作Band动作C(三个并列谓语,动作依次发生)【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写1:Hetookataxitothepolicestation.翻译:他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳进去冲着司机说，“去”改写:He_____ataxi,_______inwiththesuitcaseand_____thedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”

tookjumpedtold【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写2:Theboysjumpedintothelaketoplay.翻译:男孩们兴奋地跑到湖边，脱下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。改写:Theboysexcitedly

______tothelake,quickly_____offtheirclothesand_______intothewatertoplay.rushedtookjumped【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写3:Shehuggedhersontightly.翻译:她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。改写:She______forwardwithouthesitation,_______downand_________hersonintoherarmstightly.

dashedkneltgathered【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写4:Irushedhometogetthecottoncat.翻译:我冲回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那顶棉质的。改写:I______home,_______throughmycollectionofhatsand_________thecottonone.

rushedsearchedgrabbed【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写5:ShelookedatthetrophyandthankedTUNTUN.翻译:她先看一下奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢吞吞！”改写:She_______atthetrophy,______adeepbreathand_____,“ThankTUNTUN!”glancedtooksaid【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写6:Macjumpedoffthebicycletoshutthedoor.翻译:麦克毫不犹豫跳下自行车，冲向车的后门，猛然地关上车门。改写:Mac_______offthebicyclewithoutanyhesitation,________tothebackdoorand________thedoorheavily.jumpeddashedslammed【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写7:Iwenttoschoolinahurrythismorning.翻译:翻译：我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起书包，骑着自行车匆忙去上学了。改写:I_____onmycoathurriedly,________mybagand_______toschoolhurriedlythismorning.putgrabbedcycled【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写8:Mymumgavefiftydollarstothepooroldman.翻译:妈妈打开钱包，拿出五十元钱，递给那个贫困的老人。改写:Mymom_______thepurse,______outfiftydollarsand_______ittothepooroldman.openedtookhanded【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写9:Shepickedupthephotoandplaceditintothealbum.翻译:她拿起照片，盯着看一会儿，仔细放进相册里。改写:She________upthephoto,_______atitforawhileand_______itcautiouslyintothealbum.

pickedstaredplaced【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathand

begantosing.仿写10:Jimmyquicklythrewthemeatatthefiercewolf.翻译:吉米快速拿出肉，瞄准，径直朝凶猛的狼扔过去。改写:Jimmy______outthemeat,_______atthewolfand_______itstraighttothefierceanimal.pulledaimedthrewPARTTWO02构造动作链句式二:Havingdone…,主谓宾(表示先做了某事,再发生核心动作)【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaited

inlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写1:Afterhavingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.翻译:排了三个小时队后，他被告知票卖完了。改写:_______________for3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.

Havingqueued【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写2:Shewanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,thenshefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.翻译:她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。改写:___________________aimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.

Havingwandered【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写3:Afterhetoldthetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.翻译:说出真相后、他心里轻松了很多、心情放松地回家了。改写:___________thetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.Havingtold【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写4:Aftergettingmypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.翻译：得到了我会好好照顾母亲的承诺后，爸爸放心地把行李放进车里。改写:____________mypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.Havinggot【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写5:Afterfightinginthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.翻译:征战多年后，战士回到家中，发现家人已经搬走了。改写:_____________inthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.Havingfought【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写6:AfterIpromisedthatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.翻译:因为承诺了五点之前我们一定到那儿，所以当车抛锚的时候，我非常慌张。改写:_______________thatwewouldgettherebeforefive,Iwasseizedwithpanicwhenthecarbrokedown.

Havingpromised【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写7:Aftershemadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindowandexpectedthearrivalofherdaughter.翻译:做好充分的准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。改写:_____________fullpreparations,shestoodbythewindow,expectingthearrivalofherdaughter.Havingmade【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写8:AfterreceivingtheNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathedidn’tknowwhattodo.翻译:哈利波特收到光轮2000后高兴得不知所措。改写:_______________theNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathewasatalosswhattodo.

HavingreceivedHavingwaited【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿写10:Afterexperiencingsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.翻译:她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。改写:__________________somanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.HavingexperiencedPARTTHREE03高考实战运用一(2023年新高考I卷读后续写片段)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。（再三仔细检查后，我再也无法控制自己，立即与我的英语老师分享了这个消息）Withoutherhelp,Iwouldneverhavehadthechancetoobtainthehonor.MyfacelitupwithjoyasIacceptedtheaward,mysmilefilledwithpride.Ifeltaburstofgratitudewellingupinmyheartandsurgingthoughme.Havingdouble-checkedit,IcouldnolongercontainmyselfandpromptlysharedthenewswithmyEnglishteacherPARTFOUR04高考实战运用二(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)

运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Passingthedesertedhouse,Ispottedthebrokenglass,whichhadbeenfixedperfectly.Itremindedmeofthehummingbird,thetinycutecreature.__________________________________________________________________________________________（在和主人聊了一会儿之后，我被告知她从那天起就再也没有回来过。）“Perhapssheisenjoyingthevaluablefreedomatthismoment,”Isaidtomyself.Hourslater,thesunbegantosink.Havinghadasmallchatwiththehost,IwasinformedthatshePARTFIVE05高考实战运用三(2023年1月浙江卷读后续写片段)运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Istillrememberedmyfriends‘promisesoIwentpasttheabandonedmilkinghousetoseeiftheyhadfixedthebrokenwindow.To

my