大学生英语写作常见语言错误分析.ppt

大学生英语写作常见 语言错误分析 一、母语干扰 二、英语本身的干扰 三、因粗心、紧张造成的失误 一、母语干扰 n 1语法结构上的干扰 n2语序上的干扰 n3用词方面的干扰 n 4表达方式的干扰 1语法结构上的干扰 n1) 在我们生活中有许多像他这样的人。 n 误：In our life has many people like him n 正：There are many people like him in our life n 2) 有些假冒伪劣商品也可使用较长的时间。 n 误：Some fake commodities can also use for a long period of time n 正：Some fake commodities can also be used for a long period of time n 3) 如果问题解决了，他们会非常感激你。 n 误：If the problem solves，they will be very grateful to you n 正：If the problem is solved，they will be very grateful to you 语法结构上的干扰 n 4) 为了和外宾交流，我们必须会说英语。 n 误：In order to communicate with foreign friends，we must can speak English n 正：In order to communicate with foreign friends，we have to be able to speak English n5) 我认为阅读应该有选择性。 n 误：I think reading should selective n 正：I think reading should be selective n 6) 帮助别人渡过困境是一种美德。 n误：Help others to pull through their difficulties is a kind of virtue n正：HelpingTo help others to pull through their difficulties is a kind of virtue n 7) 这(说好了英语)会使你能自如地与外宾交流。 n 误: It will make you can communicate with foreigners freely n 正: It will enable you to communicate with foreigners freely 2语序上的干扰 n 1) 只有这样，我们才能提高我们的英语水平。 n 误：Only in this way，we can improve our English n 正：Only in this way can we improve our English n 2) 为什么许多人在该说“不”时没有说“不”呢? n 误：Why many people fail to say“No”when they should? n 正：Why do many people fail to say“No”when they should? n 3) 他为了得到钱财而没有说“不”。 n 误：He in order to get money didnt say“No“ n 正：In order to get money，he didnt say“No“ 。 语序上的干扰 n4) 如果你该说不时没说“不”，你也许会做一些错事。 n 误：You may do some wrong things if you fail to say “No” when you should n 正：You may do something wrong if you fail to say “No” when you should n 5) 他也会说英语。 n 误：He also can speak English n 正：He can also speak English 3用词方面的干扰 n 1) 如果他叫你帮他做坏事，你就该对他说“不”。 n 误：If he calls you to help him do something wrong， you should say “No to him n 正：If he asks you to help him do something wrong， you should say “No to him n 2) 我将努力学习，提高我的英语口语水平。 n 误：I will work hard to raise my spoken English level n 正：I will work hard to improve my spoken English 4表达方式的干扰 n 1)总之，好处比坏处多。 n 误：In short，advantages are more than disadvantages n 正：In short，there are more advantages than disadvantages n 2) 这(说好英语)对你将来的工作会有许多益处。 n 误：It may have many benefits to your future job n 正：It will benefit you a lot in your future lob 二、英语本身的干扰 n1连词的误用 n2短语搭配与使用错误 n3语法用词方面的错误 n4逻辑错误 1连词的误用 n1) 我是两年前来到上海的。 n 误：It was two years ago when l came to Shanghai n 正：It was two years ago that l came to Shanghai n 2) 他们找工作失败的原因是显而易见的。 n 误：The reason that they had failed in finding a lob was evident. n正：The reason why (or for which) they had failed in finding a job was evident 2短语搭配与使用错误 n依我看，这(举行口语考试)是个好办法。 n 误：To my point，its a good idea n 正：From my point of viewIn my opinion，its a good idea。 n CET作文中，另外常见的短语错误还有：on the other hand往往被写成in the other hand，On the contrary被写 成to the contrary，On purpose写成for purpose，capable of写成capable to，despite写成despite of等等。 3语法用词方面的错误 n 1)尽管他们很有钱，但是并不快乐。 n 误：Despite they have a lot of money，they are not happy n 正：ThoughAlthough they have a lot of money，they are not happy n 2) 英语学习包括听、说、读、写。 n误：English learning is consisted of listening，speaking，reading and writing n正：English learning consists of listening，speaking, reading and writing n n 3) 现在人们可以用计算机与外国朋友联系。 n 误：Now，people can contact with their foreign friends with computer n 正：Now，people can contact their foreign friends with computer 4逻辑错误 n 学了那么多年英语，我的口语还是很糟糕。 n 误：Having learned English for so many years，my spoken English is still very poor n 正：Though l have learned English for so many years，my spoken English is still very poor n n 1) 英语中虽然也有一词多用的现象，但大多数词在词性转换时，会 发生词形的变化，而这些词拼写又十分相近，这造成许多学生在写作 时往往发生词性误用现象。常见的错误有，该用succeed时用 success，该用choose时用choice，该用affect时用effect，以及把 invent写成invention等等。 n 2) 另外，有许多单词意义完全不同，但拼写上很相近，常使学生在 表达关键意义时用错词，如select与elect，international与 intentional ，quality与quantity，distinct与extinct，evolution与revolution等等。 三、因粗心、紧