高中英语议论文写作.ppt

高中英语写作,-How to write an argumentation（议论文）,词汇,句型 , 语法多样化,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,三种不同要求,1只介绍自己观点 给出观点，陈述理由，重申观点介绍 2两种不同观点并给出自己观点 3只介绍两种不同观点,只陈述自己观点的议论文,Lets bring the _ back to life _ is the most suitable animal to be brought back to life. Here are the reasons. Firstly, _ Secondly, _ Finally, _ So I think _ would be the best choice to be brought back to life.,Sample report 1,The great auk is the most suitable animal to be brought back to life. Here are the reasons： Firstly, its feathers dont absorb water, so its useful for protecting clothes from water.,Secondly, farmers can keep it as chicken to earn money. Finally, it became extinct recently, therefore its DNA is still in good condition. So I think the great auk would be the best choice to be brought back to life.,The dodo is the most suitable animal to be brought back to life. Here are the benefits： Firstly, its friendly and not harmful, so we can keep it as pet for children. Secondly, its large eggs and tasty meat could be developed for food.,Sample report 2,Finally, farmers can sell its feathers as decoration. So I think the dodo would be the best choice to be brought back to life.,假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles“的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving） 注意： 1词数：120词左右； 2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles“ _ Thank you!,参考例文：,Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles“ As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.,How can we solve the problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you!,2006高考浙江卷 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以 “Film or book, which do you prefer？” 为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 读原著：细节更多、语言优美 我的看法及理由 注意：1. 词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数） 2. 参考词汇： original work 或 book in the original（原著）,Film or book, which do you prefer？,Recently ,our class had a heated discussion over “which do you prefer, film or book?” Opinions vary from person to person.,Some are in favor of the film, saying that it takes them less time to see a film. Besides, the film is more lively and interesting. However, others hold the opposite opinion. For one thing , reading the original book can get more detailed information. For another thing, the language in the original book is more varied and beautiful.,I hold the opinion that reading the original book is a better way to understand the real meaning of the author, with a coffee , I will enjoy much in my quiet and comfortable reading room.,Recently ,our class had a heated discussion over “which do you prefer, film or book?” Opinions vary from person to person.,Film or book, which do you prefer？,Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.,Others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original book. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.,Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading in my quiet and peaceful room, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,Recently, our class had a heated discussion over /made a survey about),Opinions vary on this topic. Some are in favor of -. ( For one thing -;for another -) However, others hold the opposite opinion. (Here are the reasons. First,Second, ),Part 1: (beginning),Part 2: (body),Part3: (conclusion),I hold the opinion that-,1.(因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.,Thanks to,As a result of,Owing to,Due to,因为,Because of,/with,2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, _（所以）well have less field to grow rice.,therefore,So,as a result/consequence,thus,结果,3.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。,whats more,moreover/furthermore,in addition,besides,另外(递进）,4. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting.,On the contrary,However,转折,But/yet/while,5. _(总之), we should make good use of computer.,In general,In a word/all in all,总结,In short/brief,Generally speaking,6._(我认为) students had better not buy a cellphone. We should spend time and money on other more important things.,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion,/its my opinion that,个人观点,I think/believe,当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，请你以“Live in a traditional house or live in an apartment”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。 1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。 2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近 3.我的看法及理由。 注意：词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）,Live in a traditional house or live in an apartment Nowadays, more and more people / a growing number of people pay more attention to their lives. But people differ in their opinions on the matter.,Some people prefer to live in a traditional house. Here are the reasons. In the first place, you can grow flowers and trees in the yard if you live in a traditional house. Besides, you can keep pets if you like . Finally, people can take exercise/do some work-out in the yard.,However, some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to their work.,As far as Im concerned, I prefer living in a traditional house. My reason is that I like enjoying sunlight, especially in winter. Moreover, my grandparents wouldnt be happy if they live in an apartment. As they argue that it is not convenient for them to have outdoor activities. So I think living in a traditional house is a good and healthy lifestyle .,经过调查，人们对于学生上网交友持不同意见（见下表）。请你以“Should students make friends on line?”为题，用英语写一篇关于学生上网交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。 词数：100左右 参考词汇： 网络朋友 on-line friend（s）； 上当受骗 to be cheated,Different people have different opinions on whether students should make friends on line. Some people say yesThe reason is that the Internet helps make many new friendsWhats more, while Chatting on line, students can freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, just have the opposite opinionThey say making friends on line is a waste of time that should be spent more meaningfully on studyBesides, some students get cheated on line. Its my opinion that students should put their study, health and safety at firstAs for friendship, we can readily find it among our classmates and other people around us.,书面表达(满分30分) 1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）,注意：1.词数100-120 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.,The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Students react to this problem in different ways. Some are in favor of staying at home. They say its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can set aside money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out traveling as it can enrich their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and go through some trouble while traveling.,In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home, I get to do what I like, such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.,只介绍两个观点的,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 注意： 1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.,2002年高考题范文,Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题). Opinions are divided on the question. 60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.,过渡句,观点一,论据一,论据二,On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。,观点二,论据一,论据二,Homework,假设你是林明。你班最近就“大学生是否应该经济独立”的话题展开了讨 论，大家发表了不同看法。 请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给21世纪 英语报高中生版反映讨论情况。讨论情况如下： 135的同学认为：通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会；同时还可以体会到父母挣钱的不易，避免乱花钱的不良习气。 250的同学认为：通过打工来付学费会影响自己的学习，自己可以通过好好学习来报答爹娘，回报社会。 315的同学(包括你在内)觉得双方的观点都有一定道理，但又不完全赞同，请简述你自己的看法。 注意：1文章开头已经给出，不计入总分； 2词数120个(不包括起始句)； 3参考词汇：学费tuition fee 报答repay 经济独立financially independent Dear editor， I am writing to tell you about a