2020高考英语新创新一轮复习写作第三编第一讲词汇营造亮点4角度学案北师大版.docx

第三编要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面(词汇、句式)、18个角度给予细化讲解。第一讲 词汇营造亮点4角度 扮亮词汇(一)特别的爱给特别的你名词名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。名词的种类：普通名词专有名词可数名词不可数名词专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词个体名词集体名词物质名词抽象名词典题1(一般词)Now we have a chance to develop a greater understanding of each other.(高级词)Now we have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。典题2(一般词)There are four basic choices; they are described briefly below.(高级词)There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below.有四个基本的选择，简述如下。高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇机会 chanceopportunity选择 choicealternative课程 coursecurriculum影响 effectinfluence/impact后果 resultconsequence缺点 shortcomingdrawback方法wayapproach职业careerprofession建议adviceguidance老人old peoplethe old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens青少年young peopleyoungsters/youths/adolescents几天前a few days agothe other day一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper waya wellbehaved child专题过关训练先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级1因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。As_a_result,_I dont have enough time to take exercise.(result)As_a_consequence,_I dont have enough time to take exercise.2所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_course.(course)All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_curriculum.3他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_effect_on_the_future of_the_country.(effect)They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_impact/influence_on_the_future_of_the_country.4(2018全国卷书面表达)最重要的是，老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。Most importantly, old_people_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)Most importantly, the_old/the_elderly/the_aged/senior_citizens_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.5(2018天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_chance_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_advice.(chance, advice)Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_opportunity_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_guidance.6在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_careers are held by women.(career)Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_professions are held by women.7激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。These_young_people_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.(young people)These_youngsters/youths/adolescents_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.8我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。We will be exploring different_ways_to_gather_information.(way)We will be exploring different_approaches_to_gathering_information.扮亮词汇(二)炫酷亮闪你的眼动词(短语)动词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类，分别是：及物动词(Transitive Verb)、不及物动词(Intransitive Verb)，缩写形式分别为vt.和vi.。典题1(一般词)He likes playing football, which is his favourite.(高级词)He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite.他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。典题2(一般词)As for me, I believe that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.(高级词)As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇看见seecatch sight of遇见meetcome across引起causelead to/result in/give rise to拥有havepossess提高develop/improvepromote替代replacesubstitute面对facebe faced with容忍bearput up with处理do withdeal with/cope with决定decidedetermine/make up ones mind考虑considertake into account/consideration应该shouldbe supposed to理解understandmake sense of/figure out使用useemploy/make use of/take advantage of道歉apologizemake an apology记住rememberkeep in mind发生happenoccur/come about想起think ofoccur to/come up with感谢thankappreciate帮助某人help sb.do sb.a favor节省saveset aside参观visittour/pay a visit to分发hand outdistribute站起来stand upget to ones feet习惯于be used tobe accustomed to一定be sure tobe bound to为做准备prepare formake preparations for/be prepared for反对be againstobject to厌烦be bored withbe fed up with/be tired of忙于be busy in (with)be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in闻名be famous forhave a reputation for感到舒服feel comfortablefeel at ease美化学校make the school beautifulbeautify the school置若罔闻refuse to listen toturn a deaf ear to成功做某事succeed in doing sth.make it想做某事want to do sth.seek/intend/desire to do sth.照看look afterattend to尽力做某事try ones best to do sth.spare no effort to do sth.向某人寻求帮助ask someone for helpturn to sb.for help我认为I thinkin my opinion/as far as Im concerned专题过关训练.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分put up with， consist of， be devoted to， make use of， fix ones eyes upon1The little boy looked at the picture on the wall.fixed_his_eyes_upon2The small group has six people.consists_of3She was afraid she couldnt bear the pain.put_up_with4All his life was given to the Partys educational cause.was_devoted_to5We will use her vast experience.make_use_of.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1(20186月浙江高考写作)I will be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.give_me_a_kind_consideration2(2016北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with3(2015湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.made_up_my_mind4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between mote5Would you please help me to turn down the radio？do_me_a_favor6Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of facetoface communication.gives_rise_to7When you are bored with the people sometimes, youd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.fed_up_with8So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model ends_to.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子1几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。I purchased_a_cellphone_at_your_store the other day.(buy)2更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致进攻性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。Whats worse, violent video games can_lead_to/result_in_aggressive_behaviours,_which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)3所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。All the visitors were_requested_not_to_throw_litter_about in the park.(ask)4或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。Maybe we can_come_up_with_a_better_solution_to_the_problem.(think of)5我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。Well_spare_no_effort_to_catch_up_with the developed industrial countries.(try ones best)6我们应该尝试彻底解决这个问题。We should_make_an_attempt/attempt_to_thoroughly_solve_this_problem.(try)扮亮词汇(三)浓妆淡抹总相宜形容词(短语)形容词是很多语言中均有的主要词类中的一种。形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词主要用来修饰名词和代词。典题1(一般词)Sports are helpful to building our bodies.(高级词)Sports are beneficial to building our bodies.体育运动有益于增强我们的体质。典题2(一般词)He is an excellent scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country.他是一位杰出的科学家，对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。高中阶段常见的形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇令人惊奇的surprisingamazing/astonishing/shocking贫穷的poorneedy/povertystricken优秀的excellentoutstanding明显的obviousapparent/evident常见的commonuniversal充足的enoughadequate勤奋的hardworkingdiligent可用的useableavailable困难的difficultchallenging坚强的strongtough重要的importantvital/significant不可能的impossibleout of the question有趣的interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing小心谨慎的carefulcautious幸运的luckyfortunate巨大的largeenormous合适的properappropriate丰富的richabundant古老的oldancient唯一的onlyunique全部的wholeentire富裕的richwealthy有意义的meaningfulrewarding许多的manya large quantity of有吸引力的attractiveappealing有空的freeavailable有益处的be usefulbe of benefit不同种类的different/kinds ofa variety of/various高兴的gladdelighted激动的excitedthrilled 专题过关训练.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分1(2018天津高考书面表达)The training schedule, apart from regular training, includes joining in various activities, such as participating in some national competitions.a_variety_of2(2017全国卷书面表达)I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.more_than_delighted3(2016全国卷书面表达)I should be free any time after school next week.available4In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.challenging5Developing a good habit is also very important.of_great_importance/significance6I was excited when I heard the good news.thrilled 7She is energetic, clever and elligent8To our great glad, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also rich and colorful.delighted,_appealing,_abundant.用所给形容词的高级词汇补全句子1我的同桌是一个动人的、文雅的女孩。My deskmate is a_charming/attractive_and_elegant_girl.(beautiful)2我的薪水不够维持一家的生活。My salary is_not_adequate_to_support_my_family.(enough)3改变这种情形需要每个人付出很大的努力。Changing this situation requires_enormous_effort on the part of everyone.(large)4她是一位辛勤的老师，她工作非常勤奋。She is a_diligent_teacher and she is_diligent_in_her_work.(hardworking)5所获得的经验对我们有很大价值。The experience gained will_be_of_great_value_to_us.(valuable)6我的手机非常有用。My mobile phone is_of_great_benefit.(useful)7由于夜里休息不好，课堂上我总是感到筋疲力尽。Not sleeping well, I always feel_exhausted in class.(tired)8学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。Learning English well is_significant/vital_to_your_future_employment.(important)扮亮词汇(四)不想太低调，副词及其他词放大招大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级词汇，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉，从而可以提高文章的得分档次。典题1(一般词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be very glad to help.(高级词)If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.如果有什么我能为你做的，我将非常乐意帮忙。典题2(一般词)He comes to our room for a chat sometimes.(高级词)He comes to our room for a chat once in a while/occasionally.他偶尔来我们房中闲谈。高中阶段常见的副词及其他写作高级词汇突然suddenlyall of a sudden立即 immediatelyin a flash有时sometimesoccasionally/once in a while/from time to time另外；况且besidesin addition/whats more/moreover因此sotherefore第一，首先 firstto begin/start with第二，其次 secondin addition/whats more最终 finallyeventually和，也andas well as大多数mostthe majority许多 a lot ofa large quantity/amount of/endless完成finishaccomplish事实上in factas a matter of fact/actually也tooas well几天前a few days agothe other day故意 on purposedeliberately/by design因为 because ofon account of/due to/owing to/thanks to总之 in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary由构成be made up ofconsist of越来越多more and morean increasing number of否则orotherwise/or else应当shouldbe supposed to如果ifsuppose/supposing/on condition that即将到来coming soonaround/round the corner使某人意识到make sb. realizeraise sb.s awareness of专题过关训练.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1(2018浙江高考写作)And I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective and improve my spoken English.as_well_as2(2017全国卷书面表达)In fact, I am very fond of Tang poems.Actually3A few days ago, I went out and I almost had an accident.The_other_day4You must have noticed how tired he sometimes looks.occasionally/once_in_a_while5The most of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.majority 6As high school students, we should be neatly dressed at school.are_supposed_to.用所给词的高级词汇补全句子1我们的人口在增长，因此我们需要更多的食物。We have a growing population and therefore_we_need_more_food.(so)2抓住这个机会，否则你会后悔的。Seize the chance, otherwise/or_else_youll_regret_it.(or)3这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加，而且业余运动员也可以参加。The tournament is open to amateurs_as_well_as_professionals.(and)4第三，你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。Thirdly, you say that there is a discount suppose/supposing_(that)_I_pay_in_advance.(if)5我喜欢踢足球，也喜欢游泳。I like playing football and I_enjoy_swimming_as_well.(too).请用高级词汇升格下面的考生作文假定你是中学生李华，家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦，并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文给他写一封回信。内容包括：1自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；2发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等；4对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高层建筑 highrise building考生作文Dear Jason，Im very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing fast during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been built, with highri