高三英语高考漫画作文写作指导全国通用.ppt

2009-12-24,1,高考漫画作文写作指导,导,指,请,敬,临,光,迎,欢,2009-12-24,2,书面表达示例增加到两个。一个是根据汉语提示的信息用英语写一篇150单词左右的短文。第二，根据对所给漫画的理解，描述一下他们可能的做法并发表考生的看法。,解读：,2009-12-24,3,感知漫画的特点,幽默诙谐、 形象生动、 深刻含蓄,2009-12-24,4,一、观察漫画,确定立意 二、找关键词，关键句 三、结构成篇,写作步骤,2009-12-24,5,观察漫画，确定立意,1、由图画到生活 （特点：把握漫画的寓意） 2、由结果推原因 （揭示事件的本质）,2009-12-24,6,2009-12-24,7,Topic for cartoon 1,Most parents are too eager to get their chidren educated,even before they are born.,2009-12-24,8,2009-12-24,9,Topic for cartoon 2,People dont like to communicate with others in modern days,just staying closed to themselves.,2009-12-24,10,找关键词，关键句,1.紧扣漫画主题 2.抓住画面有效信息，合理发挥想象 3.尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构 4.确立人称、时态,2009-12-24,11,2009-12-24,12,1.Parents desire that their chidren shall be equipped with much knowledge. 2.parents are anxious about their future . 3.They are eager to have them educated because they want them to have a good job,or to marry well. 4.They want them to be powerful 5.They want them to be more intelligent than others chidren. 6.They educate them too early, sometimes wrongly. 7.They should give their children reasonable education at a suitable time.,2009-12-24,13,2009-12-24,14,two ladies living in the opposite flat happen to meet each other. dont know each other The exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world We are busy with our work all day long. Some dont want to get in touch with others People often stay at home watching TV or playing computer games. They dont communicate with others. make people feel more lonely As a member of the society ,we should create a harmonious relationship with others. If so,well be much happier. its good for our health,2009-12-24,15,结构成篇,1、描述 基本步骤：描述漫画-引出暗含主题 2. 阐明原因 基本步骤：引出原因-列举原因 3.提出对策 基本步骤：引出对策-列举对策,2009-12-24,16,Designing,Par1.From the cartoon we can see that-. It is a common phenomenon in todays society. Par2.What caused the effect? There may be several possible reasons responsible/account for it. Firstly,Secondly,First,Second,In the first place,Next,Then,To begin with,Also,In addition, Par3.As students,We should take some effective measures. First,.Second,.,2009-12-24,17,As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are The picture shows a common phenomenon. ,Sentence structures:,2009-12-24,18,Sentence structures,1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon? 2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. 3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of 4.The picture indicates that we/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that 5.This is a ironic (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,2009-12-24,19,As far as Im concerned/In my opinion, From my point of view,/ on a personal note .,Only in this way can./Only if, can we,Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions),It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to The government should make laws to The media should appeal for We should raise peoples awareness of Everyone should make great efforts /make every effort/ spare no effort to,从大到小 从意识到行动,2009-12-24,20,要求： 描述漫画内容，结合 生活实际分析这一现 象，并发表一下自己 的观点和看法。 2、词数：150左右,2009-12-24,21,As can be seen from the cartoon, two ladies living in the opposite flat say “hello” when they happen to meet each other. The two women dont know each other even if they are neighbors. It is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world. As we all know, most people live in apartments. They dont like to go out after work, and they will stay at home waching TV or playing computer games. They dont have any connections even with their closest neighbors, who seem no different from people they meet,2009-12-24,22,every day in the street. So it is no good to us, nor to our society, it will make people feel more lonely. As far as Im concerned, its high time that we took some measures to improve it. People who live in the same zone can often be organized to have some activities together. We should ask